LLL Week 4
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20.
LOL
Sounds right.
yeah
I'm going more than 10 each. Prolly 14 each.
Look Phlymo.
I underestimated you once. but this time I know a faggot is clever
so bitch I'ma come with a stomping that'll kill Bigfoot's swagger forever
I don't give a FUCK, though I know It's my fault you'll find you're falling
cuz when I'm done the only burden I bear will look like a minor mauling
Just stop with the bomb threats. I'll be grinning winning this contest
Will mow for food? Dog you could make a LIVING trimming your moms chest
My dick riders are vets. Your biggest fans are herbs don't even remind me
shit criticise me if you want, but you can bet he'll say I make you look tiny
you took a season once. now you're rusty. n' I never even felt you then
you might draw attention, but sketching me in a crowd ain't gonna help you win
I'm religious about a beating, so don't confuse my style it hurts bitch
I pound on your fucking organs like I'm making music at churches
I'm Kobe in this shit. leave you in stitches bitch just give me the title
cuz the only full court press you'll ever have is snitchin on me at trial
Burden.
Lets get down to the facts. I'm programmed to win so I'm hard gunnin
While you should be burden.exe, as soon as I hit you twice you start runnin
it's evident you're a homo, so really what's the advertisin about?
Serious. stop using your avy to show you can fit ya whole fist in your mouth
you don't stand a chance dog. especially when I hopelessy pound you
you can roll with the punches.. it's stopping n' gettin up after that's doubtful
this is the big leagues baby. so watch what you're saying don't push me
I'm not saying you have no business here.. I just ain't into paying for pussy
But hey it's your life, your reputation. do what you choose to do man
n' I won't even bring up your rank. I'd have to lose to you to do that
my 0-2 record? a reflection of lack of time n' effort, nothin's clearer
your 0-2 record's just a reflection of that wack faggot in the mirror
TWO season titles, and still goin. knowin I'm down to kill a three-qual
I've never been better... Ok I'm lying but it only takes half my skill to beat you
I'm back.
Good luck suckas. Take your time.
i expected a lot more from u.
spit
ur a family man. & pretty soon u'll get striked out.
me drop the ball? well, after i end this i'll go drop both in ya wife's mouth.
u fell off. one punch'll do the job cuz i'm in the zone kid.
i'll have ur tears streaming. it'll mirror the 'LEAVE BRITNEY ALONE' vid.
wow@ the clichés. ur punches ain't deep thoughts.
all ur swings are remotely played. rockin' a style like baseball on wii sports.
let's get it. cos u can't.. ha, u ain't stuntin' dunce.
when ur 'swear jar' consists of ur wife consenting to fuck once a month.
w/ ur latest verses u've no chance and no hope.
& me beating you is just Reflex 'cause u only winning if i don't vote.
lol@ losing to newbs. my drop makes u a shoe-in for second.
if i raised the Bar. it'd just mean i sonned the kid who ruined ur record.
grab a voting army. fuck smashin spit i'd smash mountains man.
cuz even IF u marshall the troops. you'd prolly just bring a thousand stans.
phly
notice ur burning up. gonna go BEAST mode? i'm feelin' right.
shiiit i can see u bout to go Inhuman, as in duck a battle & leave the site.
i can't be beat. i formed the rift in skill you see.
fuck taking notes. u'd need to steal beethovens whole 5th symphony.
lmao@ ur bland punches, this level ground is a landmine.
i know a lot of dudes hate what u write, u got that Coop mag style.
knives hurt. & one sliced throat will leave this guy chokin'.
as for the bodybag? medics can zip it up after i leave THIS phly open.
ur flaming? yea i'll go fire marshall it's simple u liar.
i'll stomp you out SO bad, even the votes for me will think u were fire.
ur soo played. plus ur persona ain't charmin ur crude.
for thinking u-god? i'll murder this dirty bastard w/o harming the Wu.
u say ur not weak. but w/ zero effort this is the end dude.
sure ur as strong as an Oxfam. it's just funny how ur rockin' their trends too.
g'luck.
LOL
so...
Phly, Burden, Spit. I’ll drop dope but this thread’s past saving now
you two filled this PBS line-up with enough shit to shut the stations down
kids heard my check in, n’ it’s murder when my words are beckoned
if Spit’s the first or top seed, the mortician’s doing Burden second
see I crushed Spit in the finals, ground the shit out of the witless scrub
man, I stomped on Spit n’ sawdust like drinkers in old British pubs
n’ I just had a strong lay, so Spit I dunno what your gon’ say
but just a heads-up, your wife took your user title the wrong way
we all hate you bitch, drop a good line and this whore’ll use it
I gave so much glee clubbing u to death RB needs a forum for choral music
so face it Spit your hype’s done, n’ I know your wife ain’t a dyke son
but the banshee put on sex left your fat ass wailing like one
I won a final, then you did, n’ fuck who faced or withstood worse
it's clear I had it rougher, I had to accept the fact i'd wasted a good verse
who’s Burd? an Irish dumbfuck, in Jr they were booing the bloke
^excuse the explanation, but it really is the fastest way to ruin a joke
you sucked back in Jr, n’ son I don’t need luck to please ‘em
ya rank’s unnatural, most burds don’t head south in every fucking season
this kid gets buttfucked each week, but I’m so smooth I’m troubling silk
dude’s got the looks to be an actor - he was Sean Penn’s ass double in Milk
so my verse’ll wreck this bitch, turn his body to a pile of rubble
I’d show burdensome punches, but just my setups left his life in trouble
see Phly was picked by God to show some dope flows to skeptics
for Burd, anointment’s just the shit that stops his wounds from going septic
some work off borrowed ground, I see a lotta lines with a played core
but the biggest sharecrop up in the only drops these pricks get praised for
so this bar’s for the heads who knew these fucks would be in trouble
Spit and Burd matched ya foresight, cos I left both the bitches seeing double
good luck
Last edited by phlymo; February 27th, 2009 at 05:27 PM
spit -
Look Phlymo.
I underestimated you once. but this time I know a faggot is clever
so bitch I'ma come with a stomping that'll kill Bigfoot's swagger forever
(okay opener, no dig at your opponents here but spit level swag)
I don't give a FUCK, though I know It's my fault you'll find you're falling
cuz when I'm done the only burden I bear will look like a minor mauling
(nice)
Just stop with the bomb threats. I'll be grinning winning this contest
Will mow for food? Dog you could make a LIVING trimming your moms chest
(heh, jokes)
My dick riders are vets. Your biggest fans are herbs don't even remind me
shit criticise me if you want, but you can bet he'll say I make you look tiny
(pretty cool)
you took a season once. now you're rusty. n' I never even felt you then
you might draw attention, but sketching me in a crowd ain't gonna help you win
(haha, cool)
I'm religious about a beating, so don't confuse my style it hurts bitch
I pound on your fucking organs like I'm making music at churches
(haha, this was esp. nice to me, visual)
I'm Kobe in this shit. leave you in stitches bitch just give me the title
cuz the only full court press you'll ever have is snitchin on me at trial
(nice wordplay, really original)
Lets get down to the facts. I'm programmed to win so I'm hard gunnin
While you should be burden.exe, as soon as I hit you twice you start runnin
(niceeeee)
it's evident you're a homo, so really what's the advertisin about?
Serious. stop using your avy to show you can fit ya whole fist in your mouth
(haha, yea)
you don't stand a chance dog. especially when I hopelessy pound you
you can roll with the punches.. it's stopping n' gettin up after that's doubtful
(i'm not feeling this as much)
this is the big leagues baby. so watch what you're saying don't push me
I'm not saying you have no business here.. I just ain't into paying for pussy
(okay flip, nice wording but older type concept)
But hey it's your life, your reputation. do what you choose to do man
n' I won't even bring up your rank. I'd have to lose to you to do that
(haha, clever)
my 0-2 record? a reflection of lack of time n' effort, nothin's clearer
your 0-2 record's just a reflection of that wack faggot in the mirror
(seen it but nice wording on it, cool style)
TWO season titles, and still goin. knowin I'm down to kill a three-qual
I've never been better... Ok I'm lying but it only takes half my skill to beat you
(hah, funny closer but statement-ish.)
Burden-
spit
ur a family man. & pretty soon u'll get striked out.
me drop the ball? well, after i end this i'll go drop both in ya wife's mouth.
(not feeling, too general cliche type)
u fell off. one punch'll do the job cuz i'm in the zone kid.
i'll have ur tears streaming. it'll mirror the 'LEAVE BRITNEY ALONE' vid.
(nahhh, i dunno - too indirect)
wow@ the clichés. ur punches ain't deep thoughts.
all ur swings are remotely played. rockin' a style like baseball on wii sports.
(cool but i think it should be worded more than remotely, still cool though)
let's get it. cos u can't.. ha, u ain't stuntin' dunce.
when ur 'swear jar' consists of ur wife consenting to fuck once a month.
(okay)
w/ ur latest verses u've no chance and no hope.
& me beating you is just Reflex 'cause u only winning if i don't vote.
(heh, pretty cool)
lol@ losing to newbs. my drop makes u a shoe-in for second.
if i raised the Bar. it'd just mean i sonned the kid who ruined ur record.
(ehh, nah, too simple)
grab a voting army. fuck smashin spit i'd smash mountains man.
cuz even IF u marshall the troops. you'd prolly just bring a thousand stans.
(i've done something similar, this was okay)
phly
notice ur burning up. gonna go BEAST mode? i'm feelin' right.
shiiit i can see u bout to go Inhuman, as in duck a battle & leave the site.
(okay wp)
i can't be beat. i formed the rift in skill you see.
fuck taking notes. u'd need to steal beethovens whole 5th symphony.
(lotta swag, pretty cool)
lmao@ ur bland punches, this level ground is a landmine.
i know a lot of dudes hate what u write, u got that Coop mag style.
(fresh, cool wording)
knives hurt. & one sliced throat will leave this guy chokin'.
as for the bodybag? medics can zip it up after i leave THIS phly open.
(ehh, seen something like)
ur flaming? yea i'll go fire marshall it's simple u liar.
i'll stomp you out SO bad, even the votes for me will think u were fire.
(heh, this was nice too)
ur soo played. plus ur persona ain't charmin ur crude.
for thinking u-god? i'll murder this dirty bastard w/o harming the Wu.
(okayyy, i woulda done differently but still i like)
u say ur not weak. but w/ zero effort this is the end dude.
sure ur as strong as an Oxfam. it's just funny how ur rockin' their trends too.
(hah, nice one here)
Phly
Phly, Burden, Spit. I’ll drop dope but this thread’s past saving now
you two filled this PBS line-up with enough shit to shut the stations down
(okay, the pbs is good but you didn't do enough with it imo)
kids heard my check in, n’ it’s murder when my words are beckoned
if Spit’s the first or top seed, the mortician’s doing Burden second
(heh, this was nice)
see I crushed Spit in the finals, ground the shit out of the witless scrub
man, I stomped on Spit n’ sawdust like drinkers in old British pubs
(nice wordplay, harsh)
n’ I just had a strong lay, so Spit I dunno what your gon’ say
but just a heads-up, your wife took your user title the wrong way
(lots of spit wife punches but this one hits)
we all hate you bitch, drop a good line and this whore’ll use it
I gave so much glee clubbing u to death RB needs a forum for choral music
(ehhh, i see it but i don't like it as much as the last couple wps)
so face it Spit your hype’s done, n’ I know your wife ain’t a dyke son
but the banshee put on sex left your fat ass wailing like one
(again, this is really creative but still a stretch in the wording so sticks out and not as smooth to me)
I won a final, then you did, n’ fuck who faced or withstood worse
it's clear I had it rougher, I had to accept the fact i'd wasted a good verse
(crazy swag, nice)
who’s Burd? an Irish dumbfuck, in Jr they were booing the bloke
^excuse the explanation, but it really is the fastest way to ruin a joke
(again, really fresh flip, nice)
you sucked back in Jr, n’ son I don’t need luck to please ‘em
ya rank’s unnatural, most burds don’t head south in every fucking season
(this was just straight and perfect, very nice)
this kid gets buttfucked each week, but I’m so smooth I’m troubling silk
dude’s got the looks to be an actor - he was Sean Penn’s ass double in Milk
(funny, okay)
so my verse’ll wreck this bitch, turn his body to a pile of rubble
I’d show burdensome punches, but just my setups left his life in trouble
(niceness)
see Phly was picked by God to show some dope flows to skeptics
for Burd, anointment’s just the shit that stops his wounds from going septic
(heh, fresh 'n clean)
some work off borrowed ground, I see a lotta lines with a played core
but the biggest sharecrop up in the only drops these pricks get praised for
(again, cool - verse a lil wp heavy though at this point i think)
so this bar’s for the heads who knew these fucks would be in trouble
Spit and Burd matched ya foresight, cos I left both the bitches seeing double
(nah, done something like this myself)
This was battle was just dope, some awesome shit thrown by everybody - Phly's verse was amazing, i love that wp style 'n he's clean with it, some crazy shit in there. At the end, i thought he relied on it a little too much though and it became indirect - still, one of the best verses i've seen in here for awhile.
Burden who i've seen some good stuff from surprised me, he had some really nice lines . some straight up hits and some cool swag, a really enjoyable verse. some of his shit was a little more generic than spit or phly's but what he hit with was really solid.
Spit came really really nice. He had some classic Spit material in there that might impede him later cuz we've all seen it before - one or two bars purely self-glory style, which is awesome for a verse but there isn't always time for that w/ only so many lines and when all of them count. However, he hit on a lot of different fronts w/ some harsh shit, I felt a more personal sting when reading his. It was a varied approach, a lot of different kind of punches adding up to a dope long verse.
So, I think Burd gets third but def. had some dope shit and should get at least one punch of the week. Honestly, I think Phly almost gets the nod because he came with some artillery for real, dope dope shit - however, the wordplay stopped being effective to me after awhile and seemed too general whereas Spit had some things that maybe weren't as complex but were directed more towards his opponents.. good shit, but i'm thinking
v- Spit
Vs.Originally Posted by phlymo
Vs.
i expected a lot more from u.
spit
ur a family man. & pretty soon u'll get striked out.
me drop the ball? well, after i end this i'll go drop both in ya wife's mouth.
ok punch.. I've seen many similar "drop the ball" lines, but this is a funny personal.
u fell off. one punch'll do the job cuz i'm in the zone kid.
i'll have ur tears streaming. it'll mirror the 'LEAVE BRITNEY ALONE' vid.
nice, i'm seeing the word flip.. bad ass
wow@ the clichés. ur punches ain't deep thoughts.
all ur swings are remotely played. rockin' a style like baseball on wii sports.
the rhyme definitely seems off here, and i've seen MANY better wording wii flips.
let's get it. cos u can't.. ha, u ain't stuntin' dunce.
when ur 'swear jar' consists of ur wife consenting to fuck once a month.
lol.. that's nice.
w/ ur latest verses u've no chance and no hope.
& me beating you is just Reflex 'cause u only winning if i don't vote.
good flip, the wording could be better tho.. (dick..)
lol@ losing to newbs. my drop makes u a shoe-in for second.
if i raised the Bar. it'd just mean i sonned the kid who ruined ur record.
nice flip of "raised the bar". I've seen it used already since that battle.. but this was worded nicer.
grab a voting army. fuck smashin spit i'd smash mountains man.
cuz even IF u marshall the troops. you'd prolly just bring a thousand stans.
not bad, I can't decide if it's just really funny, or a bit corny. It got a laugh outa me the first read through.. so, ok
phly
notice ur burning up. gonna go BEAST mode? i'm feelin' right.
shiiit i can see u bout to go Inhuman, as in duck a battle & leave the site.
smooth line.
i can't be beat. i formed the rift in skill you see.
fuck taking notes. u'd need to steal beethovens whole 5th symphony.
nicely worded..
lmao@ ur bland punches, this level ground is a landmine.
i know a lot of dudes hate what u write, u got that Coop mag style.
not even close to rhyming.. naa evennn cloooose
knives hurt. & one sliced throat will leave this guy chokin'.
as for the bodybag? medics can zip it up after i leave THIS phly open.
after looking up some of his past battles.. i'd say this really isn't the most fresh slip on his name.. fresh wording maybe, but ehh
ur flaming? yea i'll go fire marshall it's simple u liar.
i'll stomp you out SO bad, even the votes for me will think u were fire.
decent punch
ur soo played. plus ur persona ain't charmin ur crude.
for thinking u-god? i'll murder this dirty bastard w/o harming the Wu.
cool, nice bunch of flips in this bar, hot 1
u say ur not weak. but w/ zero effort this is the end dude.
sure ur as strong as an Oxfam. it's just funny how ur rockin' their trends too.
I sense i'm missing something here, maybe "oxfam" is another flip.. not just saying, ox, fam. But I'm not sure what it is.. personal maybe, iunno.
g'luck.
Phly: The wording you chose to use in many of your bars was fresh, witty, but really hard to follow. I think I understood most of them, but they're definitely a bit complex to be using, when I have to break down this many bars, it gets tire some, but I guess it's good I started with your verse than, I woulda killed you had I had broken it down last. over all, you had a consistent verse, with a nice range of wordplay through out.
Fav:
kids heard my check in, n’ it’s murder when my words are beckoned
if Spit’s the first or top seed, the mortician’s doing Burden secondso face it Spit your hype’s done, n’ I know your wife ain’t a dyke son
but the banshee put on sex left your fat ass wailing like onewho’s Burd? an Irish dumbfuck, in Jr they were booing the bloke
^excuse the explanation, but it really is the fastest way to ruin a joke
Burden: You had some hilarious punches for the most part. a few of your lines suffered from unoriginality, but not enough to hurt the verse.. simple wording for the most part, and a couple cool word plays. nice verse.
Fav:
u fell off. one punch'll do the job cuz i'm in the zone kid.
i'll have ur tears streaming. it'll mirror the 'LEAVE BRITNEY ALONE' vid.let's get it. cos u can't.. ha, u ain't stuntin' dunce.
when ur 'swear jar' consists of ur wife consenting to fuck once a month.ur soo played. plus ur persona ain't charmin ur crude.
for thinking u-god? i'll murder this dirty bastard w/o harming the Wu.
Spit Your verse was witty, with some clever punches put together. your flips were fairly consistent, with only a few filler bars. I felt like you could have gone into more personals, but your wide range of punches kept this verse in order.. dope
fav:
I underestimated you once. but this time I know a faggot is clever
so bitch I'ma come with a stomping that'll kill Bigfoot's swagger foreveryou took a season once. now you're rusty. n' I never even felt you then
you might draw attention, but sketching me in a crowd ain't gonna help you winLets get down to the facts. I'm programmed to win so I'm hard gunnin
While you should be burden.exe, as soon as I hit you twice you start runninyou don't stand a chance dog. especially when I hopelessy pound you
you can roll with the punches.. it's stopping n' gettin up after that's doubtful
over all/ I didn't leave as much crit in each break down as I usually do, partially b/c it was a long fucking battle, but also b/c I didn't feel the need to try and tell you guys what to do better.. y'all had some great lines in this battle.. so props. (this shit should count as 2 votes, fuck)
v/ spit.. honestly, phly and burden were neck and neck.. i just feel the wording (how ever more simple) just made spits verse flow and impact nicer. So by a tiny margin, I think he takes this battle.
$usernamejoshs
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$pit
I underestimated you once. but this time I know a faggot is clever
so bitch I'ma come with a stomping that'll kill Bigfoot's swagger forever
Ehh, more self glory than anything.. not a great diss but still cool..
I don't give a FUCK, though I know It's my fault you'll find you're falling
cuz when I'm done the only burden I bear will look like a minor mauling
Good hit..
Just stop with the bomb threats. I'll be grinning winning this contest
Will mow for food? Dog you could make a LIVING trimming your moms chest
LOL, ok, decent n funny..
My dick riders are vets. Your biggest fans are herbs don't even remind me
shit criticise me if you want, but you can bet he'll say I make you look tiny
Pretty sure I've seen this kinda concept already this season..
you took a season once. now you're rusty. n' I never even felt you then
you might draw attention, but sketching me in a crowd ain't gonna help you win
Creative, original, pretty cool shit..
I'm religious about a beating, so don't confuse my style it hurts bitch
I pound on your fucking organs like I'm making music at churches
LOL, nice, I like this kinda horrorcore shit..
I'm Kobe in this shit. leave you in stitches bitch just give me the title
cuz the only full court press you'll ever have is snitchin on me at trial
Nice..
Lets get down to the facts. I'm programmed to win so I'm hard gunnin
While you should be burden.exe, as soon as I hit you twice you start runnin
LMAO, sick..
it's evident you're a homo, so really what's the advertisin about?
Serious. stop using your avy to show you can fit ya whole fist in your mouth
Ehh, decent.. coulda been better if it wasn't such a forced personal..
you don't stand a chance dog. especially when I hopelessy pound you
you can roll with the punches.. it's stopping n' gettin up after that's doubtful
Pretty cool..
this is the big leagues baby. so watch what you're saying don't push me
I'm not saying you have no business here.. I just ain't into paying for pussy
LOL, funny..
But hey it's your life, your reputation. do what you choose to do man
n' I won't even bring up your rank. I'd have to lose to you to do that
Cool, nice wording too..
my 0-2 record? a reflection of lack of time n' effort, nothin's clearer
your 0-2 record's just a reflection of that wack faggot in the mirror
LOL, good..
TWO season titles, and still goin. knowin I'm down to kill a three-qual
I've never been better... Ok I'm lying but it only takes half my skill to beat you
Ok, decent finish.. overall I don't really have much bad to say about this verse.. other than the played bar n the self glory bar this verse was pretty sick dude..
Burden
ur a family man. & pretty soon u'll get striked out.
me drop the ball? well, after i end this i'll go drop both in ya wife's mouth.
Decent, but you definitly coulda done this better..
u fell off. one punch'll do the job cuz i'm in the zone kid.
i'll have ur tears streaming. it'll mirror the 'LEAVE BRITNEY ALONE' vid.
Not feelin..
wow@ the clichés. ur punches ain't deep thoughts.
all ur swings are remotely played. rockin' a style like baseball on wii sports.
Decent..
let's get it. cos u can't.. ha, u ain't stuntin' dunce.
when ur 'swear jar' consists of ur wife consenting to fuck once a month.
LMAO, this was funny n creative.. definitly feelin it..
w/ ur latest verses u've no chance and no hope.
& me beating you is just Reflex 'cause u only winning if i don't vote.
LOL, ok, fresh..
lol@ losing to newbs. my drop makes u a shoe-in for second.
if i raised the Bar. it'd just mean i sonned the kid who ruined ur record.
'Raise the bar' shit is played but this works aiite for a personal..
grab a voting army. fuck smashin spit i'd smash mountains man.
cuz even IF u marshall the troops. you'd prolly just bring a thousand stans.
Cool..
notice ur burning up. gonna go BEAST mode? i'm feelin' right.
shiiit i can see u bout to go Inhuman, as in duck a battle & leave the site.
Decent..
i can't be beat. i formed the rift in skill you see.
fuck taking notes. u'd need to steal beethovens whole 5th symphony.
Ehh, not too harsh but it's aiite.. definitly coulda had a better setup tho..
lmao@ ur bland punches, this level ground is a landmine.
i know a lot of dudes hate what u write, u got that Coop mag style.
LOL, feelin it cuz it's fresh..
knives hurt. & one sliced throat will leave this guy chokin'.
as for the bodybag? medics can zip it up after i leave THIS phly open.
Meh..
ur flaming? yea i'll go fire marshall it's simple u liar.
i'll stomp you out SO bad, even the votes for me will think u were fire.
LOL, nice, creative..
ur soo played. plus ur persona ain't charmin ur crude.
for thinking u-god? i'll murder this dirty bastard w/o harming the Wu.
Decent..
u say ur not weak. but w/ zero effort this is the end dude.
sure ur as strong as an Oxfam. it's just funny how ur rockin' their trends too.
LOL, funny finish.. overall this wasn't bad.. pretty good verse, you had some stingers.. but alot of your bars were just soso.. you also had a couple I just wasn't feelin at all.. not too much tho, your nice bars were nice.. good job overall, but so far $pit has this..
Phly
Phly, Burden, Spit. I’ll drop dope but this thread’s past saving now
you two filled this PBS line-up with enough shit to shut the stations down
Ehh, decent.. I felt it was kinda forced..
kids heard my check in, n’ it’s murder when my words are beckoned
if Spit’s the first or top seed, the mortician’s doing Burden second
Cool..
see I crushed Spit in the finals, ground the shit out of the witless scrub
man, I stomped on Spit n’ sawdust like drinkers in old British pubs
LMFAO, sick.. possibly my favorite bar of the battle so far..
n’ I just had a strong lay, so Spit I dunno what your gon’ say
but just a heads-up, your wife took your user title the wrong way
LOL, wow, nice..
we all hate you bitch, drop a good line and this whore’ll use it
I gave so much glee clubbing u to death RB needs a forum for choral music
Not feelin too much..
so face it Spit your hype’s done, n’ I know your wife ain’t a dyke son
but the banshee put on sex left your fat ass wailing like one
Seemed a little forced..
I won a final, then you did, n’ fuck who faced or withstood worse
it's clear I had it rougher, I had to accept the fact i'd wasted a good verse
Decent, not that original tho..
who’s Burd? an Irish dumbfuck, in Jr they were booing the bloke
^excuse the explanation, but it really is the fastest way to ruin a joke
Nice..
you sucked back in Jr, n’ son I don’t need luck to please ‘em
ya rank’s unnatural, most burds don’t head south in every fucking season
LMAO, nice again..
this kid gets buttfucked each week, but I’m so smooth I’m troubling silk
dude’s got the looks to be an actor - he was Sean Penn’s ass double in Milk
LOL, funny..
so my verse’ll wreck this bitch, turn his body to a pile of rubble
I’d show burdensome punches, but just my setups left his life in trouble
Ehh, ok..
see Phly was picked by God to show some dope flows to skeptics
for Burd, anointment’s just the shit that stops his wounds from going septic
Decent..
some work off borrowed ground, I see a lotta lines with a played core
but the biggest sharecrop up in the only drops these pricks get praised for
Blah, I hate havin to read over a bar..
so this bar’s for the heads who knew these fucks would be in trouble
Spit and Burd matched ya foresight, cos I left both the bitches seeing double
Decent finish.. overall this was a pretty cool verse.. you possibly had the best bar of the battle, BUT your verse wasn't too consistent.. when you did hit tho, shit was funny as hell n mad creative..
All in all, Burden n Phly were really close, but $pit was a couple steps ahead n more consistent than both..
\\//ote: $pitacular.. nice battle guys.. nobody should leave disappointed....
$pit
I don't give a FUCK, though I know It's my fault you'll find you're falling
cuz when I'm done the only burden I bear will look like a minor mauling
Just stop with the bomb threats. I'll be grinning winning this contest
Will mow for food? Dog you could make a LIVING trimming your moms chest
you took a season once. now you're rusty. n' I never even felt you then
you might draw attention, but sketching me in a crowd ain't gonna help you win
I'm religious about a beating, so don't confuse my style it hurts bitch
I pound on your fucking organs like I'm making music at churches
I'm Kobe in this shit. leave you in stitches bitch just give me the title
cuz the only full court press you'll ever have is snitchin on me at trial
Lets get down to the facts. I'm programmed to win so I'm hard gunnin
While you should be burden.exe, as soon as I hit you twice you start runnin
you don't stand a chance dog. especially when I hopelessy pound you
you can roll with the punches.. it's stopping n' gettin up after that's doubtful
this is the big leagues baby. so watch what you're saying don't push me
I'm not saying you have no business here.. I just ain't into paying for pussy
But hey it's your life, your reputation. do what you choose to do man
n' I won't even bring up your rank. I'd have to lose to you to do that
my 0-2 record? a reflection of lack of time n' effort, nothin's clearer
your 0-2 record's just a reflection of that wack faggot in the mirror
TWO season titles, and still goin. knowin I'm down to kill a three-qual
I've never been better... Ok I'm lying but it only takes half my skill to beat you
Heated verse man. Only a couple bars that I didn't think were up to bar. Extremely solid all the way through though.
Burden
ur a family man. & pretty soon u'll get striked out.
me drop the ball? well, after i end this i'll go drop both in ya wife's mouth.
u fell off. one punch'll do the job cuz i'm in the zone kid.
i'll have ur tears streaming. it'll mirror the 'LEAVE BRITNEY ALONE' vid.
lol@ losing to newbs. my drop makes u a shoe-in for second.
if i raised the Bar. it'd just mean i sonned the kid who ruined ur record.
notice ur burning up. gonna go BEAST mode? i'm feelin' right.
shiiit i can see u bout to go Inhuman, as in duck a battle & leave the site.
i can't be beat. i formed the rift in skill you see.
fuck taking notes. u'd need to steal beethovens whole 5th symphony.
knives hurt. & one sliced throat will leave this guy chokin'.
as for the bodybag? medics can zip it up after i leave THIS phly open.
ur flaming? yea i'll go fire marshall it's simple u liar.
i'll stomp you out SO bad, even the votes for me will think u were fire.
u say ur not weak. but w/ zero effort this is the end dude.
sure ur as strong as an Oxfam. it's just funny how ur rockin' their trends too.
Another extremely nice verse. There were small sections of your verse that weren't doing much for me, but it was very solid overall. Haven't really heard of you before, so I was thoroughly surprised to see those quality lines. Niceness man.
Phly
Phly, Burden, Spit. I’ll drop dope but this thread’s past saving now
you two filled this PBS line-up with enough shit to shut the stations down
kids heard my check in, n’ it’s murder when my words are beckoned
if Spit’s the first or top seed, the mortician’s doing Burden second
see I crushed Spit in the finals, ground the shit out of the witless scrub
man, I stomped on Spit n’ sawdust like drinkers in old British pubs
we all hate you bitch, drop a good line and this whore’ll use it
I gave so much glee clubbing u to death RB needs a forum for choral music
so face it Spit your hype’s done, n’ I know your wife ain’t a dyke son
but the banshee put on sex left your fat ass wailing like one
I won a final, then you did, n’ fuck who faced or withstood worse
it's clear I had it rougher, I had to accept the fact i'd wasted a good verse
who’s Burd? an Irish dumbfuck, in Jr they were booing the bloke
^excuse the explanation, but it really is the fastest way to ruin a joke
you sucked back in Jr, n’ son I don’t need luck to please ‘em
ya rank’s unnatural, most burds don’t head south in every fucking season
this kid gets buttfucked each week, but I’m so smooth I’m troubling silk
dude’s got the looks to be an actor - he was Sean Penn’s ass double in Milk
see Phly was picked by God to show some dope flows to skeptics
for Burd, anointment’s just the shit that stops his wounds from going septic
some work off borrowed ground, I see a lotta lines with a played core
but the biggest sharecrop up in the only drops these pricks get praised for
DAMN! Almost every line was blazin. This is gonna be ridiculously tough to vote on.
Honestly, every last one of you brought the heat this week. I'm gonna start off with the person who definitely didn't win the battle.
Burden, you had a great verse man, definitely want to bring attention to the fact that your verse would've defeated the majority of verses posted in other battles this week. As far as this one in particular though, just wasn't enough man. There were small sections of your verse where the heat came down to a simmer and that just wasn't acceptable against Phly and $pit's verses this week. Great verse though man, no doubt.
Okay, so it's really down to $pit and Phly. It's really hard to choose, $pit had the organs and burden.exe punches which were just ridiculously sick. However, Phly came with the banshee and ointment lines which were just as sick. Damn ya'll made this tough. Honestly, it boils down to whose verse I enjoyed most. For that, I've gotta go with Phly. He just had the harder of the hardest hitting punches IMO.
Very tough decision..but
V ~ Phly...with $pit being an unbelievably close 2nd. Burden for 3rd.
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Spitacular
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I underestimated you once. but this time I know a faggot is clever
so bitch I'ma come with a stomping that'll kill Bigfoot's swagger forever
Swag punch, which is good for an opening I guess
I don't give a FUCK, though I know It's my fault you'll find you're falling
cuz when I'm done the only burden I bear will look like a minor mauling
This was ok
Just stop with the bomb threats. I'll be grinning winning this contest
Will mow for food? Dog you could make a LIVING trimming your moms chest
Lmao, this was a dope ass punch
My dick riders are vets. Your biggest fans are herbs don't even remind me
shit criticise me if you want, but you can bet he'll say I make you look tiny
This was aight
you took a season once. now you're rusty. n' I never even felt you then
you might draw attention, but sketching me in a crowd ain't gonna help you
win
Wasn't really feeling this one
I'm religious about a beating, so don't confuse my style it hurts bitch
I pound on your fucking organs like I'm making music at churches
Not too much of a diss, swag again, ok
I'm Kobe in this shit. leave you in stitches bitch just give me the title
cuz the only full court press you'll ever have is snitchin on me at trial
Uh huh, this was ok
Lets get down to the facts. I'm programmed to win so I'm hard gunnin
While you should be burden.exe, as soon as I hit you twice you start runnin
Damn @ the creativity. Excellent line
it's evident you're a homo, so really what's the advertisin about?
Serious. stop using your avy to show you can fit ya whole fist in your mouth
Uh huh, kinda funny
you don't stand a chance dog. especially when I hopelessy pound you
you can roll with the punches.. it's stopping n' gettin up after that's doubtful
Word, that's mean. Good wording
this is the big leagues baby. so watch what you're saying don't push me
I'm not saying you have no business here.. I just ain't into paying for pussy
Fuckin nice, good wording again
But hey it's your life, your reputation. do what you choose to do man
n' I won't even bring up your rank. I'd have to lose to you to do that
Coo
my 0-2 record? a reflection of lack of time n' effort, nothin's clearer
your 0-2 record's just a reflection of that wack faggot in the mirror
Uh huh, more simple than usual, but still works
TWO season titles, and still goin. knowin I'm down to kill a three-qual
I've never been better... Ok I'm lying but it only takes half my skill to beat
you
Wasn't feelin this one
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Burden
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ur a family man. & pretty soon u'll get striked out.
me drop the ball? well, after i end this i'll go drop both in ya wife's mouth.
Ehh...
u fell off. one punch'll do the job cuz i'm in the zone kid.
i'll have ur tears streaming. it'll mirror the 'LEAVE BRITNEY ALONE' vid.
Never seen it
wow@ the clichés. ur punches ain't deep thoughts.
all ur swings are remotely played. rockin' a style like baseball on wii sports.
This seems more like a comparison than a punch
let's get it. cos u can't.. ha, u ain't stuntin' dunce.
when ur 'swear jar' consists of ur wife consenting to fuck once a month.
Not really feelin it
w/ ur latest verses u've no chance and no hope.
& me beating you is just Reflex 'cause u only winning if i don't vote.
This was decent
lol@ losing to newbs. my drop makes u a shoe-in for second.
if i raised the Bar. it'd just mean i sonned the kid who ruined ur record.
'Raise the bar' is old as dirt. This was ok
grab a voting army. fuck smashin spit i'd smash mountains man.
cuz even IF u marshall the troops. you'd prolly just bring a thousand stans.
Uh huh, this was ok
notice ur burning up. gonna go BEAST mode? i'm feelin' right.
shiiit i can see u bout to go Inhuman, as in duck a battle & leave the site.
Ehhh
i can't be beat. i formed the rift in skill you see.
fuck taking notes. u'd need to steal beethovens whole 5th symphony.
This was good
lmao@ ur bland punches, this level ground is a landmine.
i know a lot of dudes hate what u write, u got that Coop mag style.
Wtf, this ain't rhyme. And lol, what you tryna say?
knives hurt. & one sliced throat will leave this guy chokin'.
as for the bodybag? medics can zip it up after i leave THIS phly open.
This was decent
ur flaming? yea i'll go fire marshall it's simple u liar.
i'll stomp you out SO bad, even the votes for me will think u were fire.
Wording almost made it seem like you praised him. Idk, I just didn't like this concept
ur soo played. plus ur persona ain't charmin ur crude.
for thinking u-god? i'll murder this dirty bastard w/o harming the Wu.
Coo
u say ur not weak. but w/ zero effort this is the end dude.
sure ur as strong as an Oxfam. it's just funny how ur rockin' their trends too.
Idk what Oxfam is, but it must be something wack. This was decent
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Phlymo
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Phly, Burden, Spit. I’ll drop dope but this thread’s past saving now
you two filled this PBS line-up with enough shit to shut the stations down
This was creative, coo
kids heard my check in, n’ it’s murder when my words are beckoned
if Spit’s the first or top seed, the mortician’s doing Burden second
This was ok
see I crushed Spit in the finals, ground the shit out of the witless scrub
man, I stomped on Spit n’ sawdust like drinkers in old British pubs
Ha, this wa creative and cool. Not much of a diss though
n’ I just had a strong lay, so Spit I dunno what your gon’ say
but just a heads-up, your wife took your user title the wrong way
I didn't get this one
we all hate you bitch, drop a good line and this whore’ll use it
I gave so much glee clubbing u to death RB needs a forum for choral music
I don't see the connection here... glee clubbin and choral music? Oh well...
so face it Spit your hype’s done, n’ I know your wife ain’t a dyke son
but the banshee put on sex left your fat ass wailing like one
Damn, this was good
I won a final, then you did, n’ fuck who faced or withstood worse
it's clear I had it rougher, I had to accept the fact i'd wasted a good verse
Mean ass personal
who’s Burd? an Irish dumbfuck, in Jr they were booing the bloke
^excuse the explanation, but it really is the fastest way to ruin a joke
Uh huh, decent
you sucked back in Jr, n’ son I don’t need luck to please ‘em
ya rank’s unnatural, most burds don’t head south in every fucking season
Oh damn, this was a great nameplay
this kid gets buttfucked each week, but I’m so smooth I’m troubling silk
dude’s got the looks to be an actor - he was Sean Penn’s ass double in Milk
Didn't ese the movie, so doesn't make much of an impact for me
so my verse’ll wreck this bitch, turn his body to a pile of rubble
I’d show burdensome punches, but just my setups left his life in trouble
Lol, word
see Phly was picked by God to show some dope flows to skeptics
for Burd, anointment’s just the shit that stops his wounds from going septic
This was coo
some work off borrowed ground, I see a lotta lines with a played core
but the biggest sharecrop up in the only drops these pricks get praised for
Wording is all over the place imo
so this bar’s for the heads who knew these fucks would be in trouble
Spit and Burd matched ya foresight, cos I left both the bitches seeing double
Wasn't feelin it much
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Just stop with the bomb threats. I'll be grinning winning this contest
Will mow for food? Dog you could make a LIVING trimming your moms chest
Lets get down to the facts. I'm programmed to win so I'm hard gunnin
While you should be burden.exe, as soon as I hit you twice you start runnin
this is the big leagues baby. so watch what you're saying don't push me
I'm not saying you have no business here.. I just ain't into paying for pussy
VS
i can't be beat. i formed the rift in skill you see.
fuck taking notes. u'd need to steal beethovens whole 5th symphony.
VS
so face it Spit your hype’s done, n’ I know your wife ain’t a dyke son
but the banshee put on sex left your fat ass wailing like one
you sucked back in Jr, n’ son I don’t need luck to please ‘em
ya rank’s unnatural, most burds don’t head south in every fucking season
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Well damn. Ok fellas, yall brought it here. I got it as Spit 1st, Phlymo 2nd, and Burden 3rd, and I'll tell you why.
Burden was third cuz he didn't have nearly as many good bars as the other two, straight up.
Spit and Phylmo had roughly the same amount of lines tha I disliked. The difference is, Spit's I didn't like cuz it was self-glory. But they were still worded well. Phylmo's I didn't like cuz I just didn't like the bar as a whole.
This battle was that close between them that that little difference made my decision. It could go either way between those two tho.
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VOTE: SPIT
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wow my bad i had to vote on this, i saw it up the other day and saw spit and phly matched up, and burd in there too, figured it would be pretty dope, im gonna go smoke a bowl or something first but i'll be back
Spit
I underestimated you once. but this time I know a faggot is clever
so bitch I'ma come with a stomping that'll kill Bigfoot's swagger forever
this was kinda tight
I don't give a FUCK, though I know It's my fault you'll find you're falling
cuz when I'm done the only burden I bear will look like a minor mauling
i thought this one missed
Just stop with the bomb threats. I'll be grinning winning this contest
Will mow for food? Dog you could make a LIVING trimming your moms chest
haha, nice.
My dick riders are vets. Your biggest fans are herbs don't even remind me
shit criticise me if you want, but you can bet he'll say I make you look tiny
kind of a fresh take here, but i thought the wording wasn't thought over enough
you took a season once. now you're rusty. n' I never even felt you then
you might draw attention, but sketching me in a crowd ain't gonna help you win
seen draw things, but i did feel the execution here
I'm religious about a beating, so don't confuse my style it hurts bitch
I pound on your fucking organs like I'm making music at churches
I've seen similar, It doesnt take away the fact you wrote a good line here, but I've seen the idea so it's less original. something like '' remove your organs like a church was repossessed''
I'm Kobe in this shit. leave you in stitches bitch just give me the title
cuz the only full court press you'll ever have is snitchin on me at trial
pretty decent here
Lets get down to the facts. I'm programmed to win so I'm hard gunnin
While you should be burden.exe, as soon as I hit you twice you start runnin
nice
it's evident you're a homo, so really what's the advertisin about?
Serious. stop using your avy to show you can fit ya whole fist in your mouth
this was alright to me man
you don't stand a chance dog. especially when I hopelessy pound you
you can roll with the punches.. it's stopping n' gettin up after that's doubtful
not bad
this is the big leagues baby. so watch what you're saying don't push me
I'm not saying you have no business here.. I just ain't into paying for pussy
alright, lacks the real harsh tone, but not bad
But hey it's your life, your reputation. do what you choose to do man
n' I won't even bring up your rank. I'd have to lose to you to do that
it's dope but i've seen similar, something from rudge1 like '' let's talk about my win percentage since you brought it up
my 0-2 record? a reflection of lack of time n' effort, nothin's clearer
your 0-2 record's just a reflection of that wack faggot in the mirror
alright
TWO season titles, and still goin. knowin I'm down to kill a three-qual
I've never been better... Ok I'm lying but it only takes half my skill to beat you
alright seemed rushed
Overall this was a pretty good verse. I thought two of your good lines that were written well were unfortunately concepts I've seen used in a similar fashion, but you still executed them well. You had some nice lines here, I'll have to re read this whole battle before I can really vote, but you didn't drop really low at any time, you had the occasional miss, but it usually stayed at an above average - average - good area throughout, with a couple ehh spots and played spots.
Burden
ur a family man. & pretty soon u'll get striked out.
me drop the ball? well, after i end this i'll go drop both in ya wife's mouth.
i liked the wording it's direct and blunt. but the concept isnt original
u fell off. one punch'll do the job cuz i'm in the zone kid.
i'll have ur tears streaming. it'll mirror the 'LEAVE BRITNEY ALONE' vid.
lol seen similar with the tears streaming thing, but the flip is ok
wow@ the clichés. ur punches ain't deep thoughts.
all ur swings are remotely played. rockin' a style like baseball on wii sports.
again nice wording man, but remote ish
let's get it. cos u can't.. ha, u ain't stuntin' dunce.
when ur 'swear jar' consists of ur wife consenting to fuck once a month.
fresh idea, yea i think its pretty solid
w/ ur latest verses u've no chance and no hope.
& me beating you is just Reflex 'cause u only winning if i don't vote.
pretty cool
lol@ losing to newbs. my drop makes u a shoe-in for second.
if i raised the Bar. it'd just mean i sonned the kid who ruined ur record.
nahhh, ive just seen alot of Bar things like this
grab a voting army. fuck smashin spit i'd smash mountains man.
cuz even IF u marshall the troops. you'd prolly just bring a thousand stans.
alright
notice ur burning up. gonna go BEAST mode? i'm feelin' right.
shiiit i can see u bout to go Inhuman, as in duck a battle & leave the site.
alright here pretty decent
i can't be beat. i formed the rift in skill you see.
fuck taking notes. u'd need to steal beethovens whole 5th symphony.
yeah dope line i like this one
lmao@ ur bland punches, this level ground is a landmine.
i know a lot of dudes hate what u write, u got that Coop mag style.
lol, ok
knives hurt. & one sliced throat will leave this guy chokin'.
as for the bodybag? medics can zip it up after i leave THIS phly open.
yeah ive seen phly zip things alot, its ok
ur flaming? yea i'll go fire marshall it's simple u liar.
i'll stomp you out SO bad, even the votes for me will think u were fire.
seen stomp flips but pretty good one, i liked the way u ended it
ur soo played. plus ur persona ain't charmin ur crude.
for thinking u-god? i'll murder this dirty bastard w/o harming the Wu.
seen this
u say ur not weak. but w/ zero effort this is the end dude.
sure ur as strong as an Oxfam. it's just funny how ur rockin' their trends too.
lol cool, i liked this, kinda funny/clownin
Burden, I hope it's not offensive to say I feel like you have a somewhat similar style as I do. I respect that if you think you do as well. Regardless, I like the way you word lines, I think your high points are excuted very well. The taking notes, stomp you out lines were two of my favorites and read with a nice harsh tone. You started a little iffy to me, and had a few lines that I had seen touched on before, but overall I think your verse was good, if you were to take your best lines here and shorten the verse, I think it would be really nice. But as is, I think you kind of bounced from alright to great, you suffered from a couple played lines, but so did Spit. Overall your wording is pretty good, I'd just worry about trying to find fresher concepts week to week.
Phly, Burden, Spit. I’ll drop dope but this thread’s past saving now
you two filled this PBS line-up with enough shit to shut the stations down
haha good good
kids heard my check in, n’ it’s murder when my words are beckoned
if Spit’s the first or top seed, the mortician’s doing Burden second
this was alright, i didnt dig it that much
see I crushed Spit in the finals, ground the shit out of the witless scrub
man, I stomped on Spit n’ sawdust like drinkers in old British pubs
nice one here, fresh line
n’ I just had a strong lay, so Spit I dunno what your gon’ say
but just a heads-up, your wife took your user title the wrong way
lol, alright
we all hate you bitch, drop a good line and this whore’ll use it
I gave so much glee clubbing u to death RB needs a forum for choral music
i didnt like the wordplay, it's ok man but yeah
so face it Spit your hype’s done, n’ I know your wife ain’t a dyke son
but the banshee put on sex left your fat ass wailing like one
i've seen the banshee wp, but its not bad
I won a final, then you did, n’ fuck who faced or withstood worse
it's clear I had it rougher, I had to accept the fact i'd wasted a good verse
yeah this is a good personal
who’s Burd? an Irish dumbfuck, in Jr they were booing the bloke
^excuse the explanation, but it really is the fastest way to ruin a joke
nice one
you sucked back in Jr, n’ son I don’t need luck to please ‘em
ya rank’s unnatural, most burds don’t head south in every fucking season
yeahh i liked this
this kid gets buttfucked each week, but I’m so smooth I’m troubling silk
dude’s got the looks to be an actor - he was Sean Penn’s ass double in Milk
alright lol
so my verse’ll wreck this bitch, turn his body to a pile of rubble
I’d show burdensome punches, but just my setups left his life in trouble
nice nice
see Phly was picked by God to show some dope flows to skeptics
for Burd, anointment’s just the shit that stops his wounds from going septic
pretty cool
some work off borrowed ground, I see a lotta lines with a played core
but the biggest sharecrop up in the only drops these pricks get praised for
hmm, huge pattern developing, i didnt like this one to be honest
so this bar’s for the heads who knew these fucks would be in trouble
Spit and Burd matched ya foresight, cos I left both the bitches seeing double
yea nice one here
Phly, I thought you had a nice crisp tone to most of your lines. You didn't have alot of weak ones, only a few that didn't feel executed that well so they didn't come off as great to me, mainly the glee clubbing line, and the sharecrop. I've seen the banshee line, that was probably the only real played line. I thought you were creative throughout, and, mixed in some pretty nice personals with Spit. You ended with 8 straight lines of wordplay all written in the same pattern, I mean, I just was able to notice you find the word with multiple meanings and develop the concept off of that, I think it's dope, but that many lines in a row seemed too much.
Overall this battle is really close. I just re-read it all the way through and I came to a winner however.
I have to go with Phly here. I think he had the best and most consistent verse. He didn't miss often, he was creative, and only suffered a downpoint every now and then. I also thought he kept his verse the freshest. The ending with the wordplay really did throw me off a little, I thought you should have put it more throughout the verse I guess.
The battle for 2nd is close to me. I might have to give Spit the edge, but the Organ and the Rank line were two really good lines in the verse that I've seen similar flips of, and I truly have that in my mind while voting, so it takes away to me. Burden to me had a really good shot here too, I think he may have dipped lower in terms of consistency for longer than Spit, but he had a few lines that were really nice to me, and to be honest make me tempted to put him above Spit. I really can't decide that much, and took long enough reading for one winner, nevertheless finding a 2nd and 3rd place.
1. Phly
2. Burden/Spit
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I underestimated you once. but this time I know a faggot is clever
so bitch I'ma come with a stomping that'll kill Bigfoot's swagger forever
aiight
I don't give a FUCK, though I know It's my fault you'll find you're falling
cuz when I'm done the only burden I bear will look like a minor mauling
heh, coo...
Just stop with the bomb threats. I'll be grinning winning this contest
Will mow for food? Dog you could make a LIVING trimming your moms chest
lol, nice.
My dick riders are vets. Your biggest fans are herbs don't even remind me
shit criticise me if you want, but you can bet he'll say I make you look tiny
eh...
you took a season once. now you're rusty. n' I never even felt you then
you might draw attention, but sketching me in a crowd ain't gonna help you win
decent.
I'm religious about a beating, so don't confuse my style it hurts bitch
I pound on your fucking organs like I'm making music at churches
okay... think I've seen this before tho lol.
I'm Kobe in this shit. leave you in stitches bitch just give me the title
cuz the only full court press you'll ever have is snitchin on me at trial
aiight, heh..
Lets get down to the facts. I'm programmed to win so I'm hard gunnin
While you should be burden.exe, as soon as I hit you twice you start runnin
nice, lol.
it's evident you're a homo, so really what's the advertisin about?
Serious. stop using your avy to show you can fit ya whole fist in your mouth
eh.. aiight.
you don't stand a chance dog. especially when I hopelessy pound you
you can roll with the punches.. it's stopping n' gettin up after that's doubtful
ok...
this is the big leagues baby. so watch what you're saying don't push me
I'm not saying you have no business here.. I just ain't into paying for pussy
lol, dope.
But hey it's your life, your reputation. do what you choose to do man
n' I won't even bring up your rank. I'd have to lose to you to do that
decent flip.
my 0-2 record? a reflection of lack of time n' effort, nothin's clearer
your 0-2 record's just a reflection of that wack faggot in the mirror
lol, dope hit.
TWO season titles, and still goin. knowin I'm down to kill a three-qual
I've never been better... Ok I'm lying but it only takes half my skill to beat you
ok-ish.. more self props then diss tho.
vs
ur a family man. & pretty soon u'll get striked out.
me drop the ball? well, after i end this i'll go drop both in ya wife's mouth.
heh, coo..
u fell off. one punch'll do the job cuz i'm in the zone kid.
i'll have ur tears streaming. it'll mirror the 'LEAVE BRITNEY ALONE' vid.
decent-ish...
wow@ the clichés. ur punches ain't deep thoughts.
all ur swings are remotely played. rockin' a style like baseball on wii sports.
aiight.. weak punch tho.
let's get it. cos u can't.. ha, u ain't stuntin' dunce.
when ur 'swear jar' consists of ur wife consenting to fuck once a month.
eh...
w/ ur latest verses u've no chance and no hope.
& me beating you is just Reflex 'cause u only winning if i don't vote.
eh... weak concept imo..
lol@ losing to newbs. my drop makes u a shoe-in for second.
if i raised the Bar. it'd just mean i sonned the kid who ruined ur record.
heh, ok.
grab a voting army. fuck smashin spit i'd smash mountains man.
cuz even IF u marshall the troops. you'd prolly just bring a thousand stans.
weak...
notice ur burning up. gonna go BEAST mode? i'm feelin' right.
shiiit i can see u bout to go Inhuman, as in duck a battle & leave the site.
lmao... ouch.
i can't be beat. i formed the rift in skill you see.
fuck taking notes. u'd need to steal beethovens whole 5th symphony.
aiight.
lmao@ ur bland punches, this level ground is a landmine.
i know a lot of dudes hate what u write, u got that Coop mag style.
meh... weak punch.
knives hurt. & one sliced throat will leave this guy chokin'.
as for the bodybag? medics can zip it up after i leave THIS phly open.
eh.. played.
ur flaming? yea i'll go fire marshall it's simple u liar.
i'll stomp you out SO bad, even the votes for me will think u were fire.
I get it, pretty coo I guess...
ur soo played. plus ur persona ain't charmin ur crude.
for thinking u-god? i'll murder this dirty bastard w/o harming the Wu.
eh... ok-ish.
u say ur not weak. but w/ zero effort this is the end dude.
sure ur as strong as an Oxfam. it's just funny how ur rockin' their trends too.
meh...
vs
Phly, Burden, Spit. I’ll drop dope but this thread’s past saving now
you two filled this PBS line-up with enough shit to shut the stations down
lmfao, that was a nice play.
kids heard my check in, n’ it’s murder when my words are beckoned
if Spit’s the first or top seed, the mortician’s doing Burden second
aiight.
see I crushed Spit in the finals, ground the shit out of the witless scrub
man, I stomped on Spit n’ sawdust like drinkers in old British pubs
lol, coo..
n’ I just had a strong lay, so Spit I dunno what your gon’ say
but just a heads-up, your wife took your user title the wrong way
heh, like this...
we all hate you bitch, drop a good line and this whore’ll use it
I gave so much glee clubbing u to death RB needs a forum for choral music
eh.. dunno
so face it Spit your hype’s done, n’ I know your wife ain’t a dyke son
but the banshee put on sex left your fat ass wailing like one
lmfao... nice w/p...
I won a final, then you did, n’ fuck who faced or withstood worse
it's clear I had it rougher, I had to accept the fact i'd wasted a good verse
nice... that was a stinger.
who’s Burd? an Irish dumbfuck, in Jr they were booing the bloke
^excuse the explanation, but it really is the fastest way to ruin a joke
this was weird lol, but I like it.
you sucked back in Jr, n’ son I don’t need luck to please ‘em
ya rank’s unnatural, most burds don’t head south in every fucking season
okay, lol.
this kid gets buttfucked each week, but I’m so smooth I’m troubling silk
dude’s got the looks to be an actor - he was Sean Penn’s ass double in Milk
LMAO, omg... funny.
so my verse’ll wreck this bitch, turn his body to a pile of rubble
I’d show burdensome punches, but just my setups left his life in trouble
aiight-ish...
see Phly was picked by God to show some dope flows to skeptics
for Burd, anointment’s just the shit that stops his wounds from going septic
never seen this w/p... damn dude, fire.
some work off borrowed ground, I see a lotta lines with a played core
but the biggest sharecrop up in the only drops these pricks get praised for
wording was too weird... didn't connect to me...
so this bar’s for the heads who knew these fucks would be in trouble
Spit and Burd matched ya foresight, cos I left both the bitches seeing double
lol, dope.
Burden imo came the weakest, but he still surprised me with a lot of dope lines. I think being in a match this heavy definitely brought out the better in him. so props on that burden, you came harder than I thought (no homo). it came down to $pit vs Phly for me... $pit I think came a lot harder agaisnt burden, and lacked that intensity he used against burd on phly. he still had some great punches on P, but phly's whole verse just hit fuckin' home with me... I think there were only like 2-3 lines that I didn't dig so much, even though the w/p's used were really creative...
GREAT MATCH guys... definitely one for the books. Burden came well enough to call this match of the week even imo... good shit dudes...
vote Phlymo
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