Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES
Rebuttal Option
both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)
You have 24hrs from when battle was set to agree on rebuttal battle
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
@daveDILLY
@Slayerr.
check
good luck
Ur wack, n thats an honest assessment coz u can’t write rhymes u just screw them
The last time dilly came with solid bars was when his wife n kid were visiting through them
punches will cave ya head in - theyll have to get forensic 2 prove i killed again..
but im not worried bout leaving identify have the police trying to do that 2ya skeleton
This was cool battle. The bars wordplay was done descent, but I thought it was a bit basic. I believe that the identify / forensic wordplay was a bit more technical in this battle. Both had good setup into the punch.
Vote - daveDILLY
Vote - Dilly
I liked both bars. But I feel like Dave's was set up better and landed harder. Narrow edge. Respect to both.
Liked both tbh but I think I’m going to edge this to Slayerr for the personal play. Close battle good shit
2-1 dilly
yeah i'd say slayerr also/// dill's pun didnt connect as well
both could be better
v-slayerr
aka Sorrow: the Broken Wing
The very end of Slay's bar gave me a lite chuckle but even tho Dilly's wording seemed a little weirder, I gotta admit...I like the violent visual nature of his bar a little bit more. MVGT Dave
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Slayer - Yours was clean and easy. No thematic unity between the first and second lines, so it didn't read as clever as Dilly. I enjoyed the humor with the 'bars' line.
Dilly - This was good, but wasn't neatly executed. Your meaning was obscure to me, though I could tell there were clever ideas you were weaving together with the skeletal/ head in/ forensics checking bones idea. I wasn't sure if you meant 'identity' or 'identify'. Maybe its me.
In the end I thought Slayer edged it on the fact that it communicated better, though it was more basic.
v/Slayer.
This is tough both Punchlines well done
Both creative
I felt like Dave a more Creative compare to Slayer
Vote-Dave
Yeah Dave’s could have been worded better, I don’t think ‘identify’ is really a common abbreviation of ‘identification’. That said, the wordplay element seemed original. I thought Slayerr wasn’t up to his usual standard this time, it was a bit bland. On balance I prefer Dave’s bar.
Vote- Dave
5-3 dilly let’s close this shit up and move on
dave wins
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