Week 4: Justice Grimm (1-2) vs. Echelon (0-3) - Grimm wins

[Zunto]

LLL Season 24

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 (unless higher limit agreed upon)
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.


Check ins are mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ.

FAILURE TO VOTE ON OTHER BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON OTHER BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE!


@Justice Grimm @Echelon

[Justice Grimm]

Check. I’ll go either 10 or 12 unless you drop first with more

[Echelon]

*SHOTS FIRED* I am a STOIC OF EXTREME RECLUSE: DREAM A NOOSE//
SERENE THE RUSE: DREAM THE FUSE; I AM NOTHING; ACCORDIONS//
ACCORDIONS//ACCORDIONS//ACCORDIONS//ACCORDIONS//
ACCORDIONS//ACCORDIONS//ACCORDIONS//ACCORDIONS//
I am nothing and something..I am nothing and something..
I am everything and nothing..I am everything and nothing..//
I am nothing and something.. I am nothing and something..//
I am nothing and something.. I am nothing and something..//
LUNCHLINE..PUNCHLINE..YOU COULDN'T EAT ME AS A SNACK//
PAC/PACK//PAC//PACK//PAC//PACK//..you can't write like 2pac..//!!

[Justice Grimm]

A few bars for your viewing pleasure…


JG don’t rest, it’s pedal to metal. I’ll floor ya
All my lines hittin E like his car tryna one tank an escape to Florida
I’m not about playin. My stock risin while yours is uncertain, a bear
Nobody making my GameStop… n it’ll leave ya future less certain than theirs
There’s no prize for ya, so why risk it? Should’ve stayed in your bed
I’ll help ya make ends meet… put your feet in the same grave as ya head
I got places to be, not tryna be rude dude
Faces to see, ya lady. Get her in a lewd mood for anal n Duke Nukem her doo doo
N when I’m on her I’m bonkers. No friend n no lame lube
Bongo those jumbo cheeks like Donkey Kong Jungle Beats for Nintendo Gamecube

[mal diction]

*SHOTS FIRED* I am a STOIC OF EXTREME RECLUSE: DREAM A NOOSE//
SERENE THE RUSE: DREAM THE FUSE; I AM NOTHING; ACCORDIONS//
... almost did something
ACCORDIONS//ACCORDIONS//ACCORDIONS//ACCORDIONS//
ACCORDIONS//ACCORDIONS//ACCORDIONS//ACCORDIONS//
...
I am nothing and something..I am nothing and something..
I am everything and nothing..I am everything and nothing..//
...
I am nothing and something.. I am nothing and something..//
I am nothing and something.. I am nothing and something..//
...
LUNCHLINE..PUNCHLINE..YOU COULDN'T EAT ME AS A SNACK//
PAC/PACK//PAC//PACK//PAC//PACK//..you can't write like 2pac..//!!
what


JG don’t rest, it’s pedal to metal. I’ll floor ya
All my lines hittin E like his car tryna one tank an escape to Florida
Str8
I’m not about playin. My stock risin while yours is uncertain, a bear
Nobody making my GameStop… n it’ll leave ya future less certain than theirs
Str8
There’s no prize for ya, so why risk it? Should’ve stayed in your bed
I’ll help ya make ends meet… put your feet in the same grave as ya head
lol ..dope
I got places to be, not tryna be rude dude
Faces to see, ya lady. Get her in a lewd mood for anal n Duke Nukem her doo doo
what...lol
N when I’m on her I’m bonkers. No friend n no lame lube
Bongo those jumbo cheeks like Donkey Kong Jungle Beats for Nintendo Gamecube
didnt get this


my vote goes to Justice Grimm.. better overall verse.. if Echelon tried he might do something but hey...

[KnoXville.]

Nothing

Vs


I’m not about playin. My stock risin while yours is uncertain, a bear
Nobody making my GameStop… n it’ll leave ya future less certain than theirs

Vote - Justice. For obvious reasons. Few cool jabs here & there. Echelon Needs to adjust a lot lol

[Joe Boston]

JG that ends meet line was dope the Duke Nukem line was funny af made me laugh. Not sure what echelon was doing wish he took this seriously I guess.

V/JG

[Fresh]

nothing

vs

JG don’t rest, it’s pedal to metal. I’ll floor ya
All my lines hittin E like his car tryna one tank an escape to Florida
I’m not about playin. My stock risin while yours is uncertain, a bear
Nobody making my GameStop… n it’ll leave ya future less certain than theirs
There’s no prize for ya, so why risk it? Should’ve stayed in your bed
I’ll help ya make ends meet… put your feet in the same grave as ya head

justice grimm had a pretty cool verse

v/ JG

[Cody Nash]

felt like it was the gas tank bar vs nothing... I will read them and try to like these Echelon verses every week but I feel like I'm falling flat here and not getting it lmao.. sorry man just wasn't feelin' any of it.

Vote Justice for coherent and creative writing.

[Spree]

Grimm really had nothing but attempts to diss. Sin had nothing at all


Grimm wins