Week 3: Ryno (2-0) vs. Mimic (1-0) - RYNO WINS

[Zunto]

LLL Season 24

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday and will be open until Sunday.
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours



Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16 (unless higher limit agreed upon)
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.


Check ins are mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ.

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@Ryno @Mimic

[Ryno]

12 is cool.

[Mimic]

Sure

[Ryno]

Mimic aka A Pigs Tie

I’ll knock em out. Burst ur grill into infinity homie. W/O a doubt…
If he speaks fluid after this match, it’s cuz the blood’ll be gushing from out his mouth.
Who brought em out to this slaughterhouse? Hackin this dweeb. He ain’t better than me…
So let me put this eloquently. Dawg I’m leaving Pigs Feet in a jar like a cheap delicacy.
Been a tough few days huh? Facing me & knowing ur talk is cheap…
Every morning u saw the writing on the wall like Danny from Doctor Sleep.
Jab Master in the flesh. This 1-2 takes a lot of skills when I scuffle, but…
I ‘strike up’ a lot of tussles. It’s no surprise ur getting killed from this uppercut.
Tried to kick it like Charlie Brown but his raps never work. What he utters is worse…
Ironically every time we see ‘Pig Pen for Peanuts’ we wish this kid was covered in dirt.
Once the tech loose listen… It’s time to wave the white flags before I bless u, pimpin…
Catch dude slippin. Once the ‘smoke signals’ the choppers r coming after like a rescue mission.

[Mimic]

I'm that fire. got the nine even though I'm a nice fighter
If I push the barrel back it's the end of the line.. iunno if its death or a typewriter
so read the room, say u squeeze then u better practice the preach
stutter.. I'll let the tech do the talkin.. now thats a conversational piece
2-0 still unknown ur ranking on tiers would be low, lame
Wux could've announced u against Chrit.. & STILL be considered the no name
No mag got u winnin, the whole forum'll see u smacked by a brit
this the definition of an English dub.. u just stay stuck on ya anime shit
Spiral'd out u in danger, masked up, ready to re-arrange ya
Knee shot. Have clown on wheels like he being televised by John Kramer
Miss Finster ass. ur fam' snitches.. tell tales im darin ya,
then i'll go through this grass like im trynna battle every pidgey in the area

[mal diction]

I’ll knock em out. Burst ur grill into infinity homie. W/O a doubt…
If he speaks fluid after this match, it’s cuz the blood’ll be gushing from out his mouth.
Str8
Who brought em out to this slaughterhouse? Hackin this dweeb. He ain’t better than me…
So let me put this eloquently. Dawg I’m leaving Pigs Feet in a jar like a cheap delicacy.
Str8
Been a tough few days huh? Facing me & knowing ur talk is cheap…
Every morning u saw the writing on the wall like Danny from Doctor Sleep.
dont like this one
Jab Master in the flesh. This 1-2 takes a lot of skills when I scuffle, but…
I ‘strike up’ a lot of tussles. It’s no surprise ur getting killed from this uppercut.
not feeling this
Tried to kick it like Charlie Brown but his raps never work. What he utters is worse…
Ironically every time we see ‘Pig Pen for Peanuts’ we wish this kid was covered in dirt.
not bad.. not good either
Once the tech loose listen… It’s time to wave the white flags before I bless u, pimpin…
Catch dude slippin. Once the ‘smoke signals’ the choppers r coming after like a rescue mission.
like this.. good closer

I'm that fire. got the nine even though I'm a nice fighter
If I push the barrel back it's the end of the line.. iunno if its death or a typewriter
the wording.. not bad though
so read the room, say u squeeze then u better practice the preach
stutter.. I'll let the tech do the talkin.. now thats a conversational piece
not bad...
2-0 still unknown ur ranking on tiers would be low, lame
Wux could've announced u against Chrit.. & STILL be considered the no name
i misssed this... too bad explaining makes it worse... and his name Wu-xi-ah.. i did read something about a mystery battler
No mag got u winnin, the whole forum'll see u smacked by a brit
this the definition of an English dub.. u just stay stuck on ya anime shit
didnt make sense, but was worded extremely well
Spiral'd out u in danger, masked up, ready to re-arrange ya
Knee shot. Have clown on wheels like he being televised by John Kramer
okay
Miss Finster ass. ur fam' snitches.. tell tales im darin ya,
then i'll go through this grass like im trynna battle every pidgey in the area
this was a bad closer.. how many ppl have played poke'mon.. i grew up on dragon ball

i got Ryno squeezing out a win with better punches... Mimic has the wording just needs better puns.. i'm not going to tell you like i'm better than you or something.. and i also dont want my critique to bite me in the ass ... good battle guys

vote-ryno

[Chrit.]

I’ll knock em out. Burst ur grill into infinity homie. W/O a doubt…
If he speaks fluid after this match, it’s cuz the blood’ll be gushing from out his mouth.
Not a bad concept... the wording was clumsy though
Who brought em out to this slaughterhouse? Hackin this dweeb. He ain’t better than me…
So let me put this eloquently. Dawg I’m leaving Pigs Feet in a jar like a cheap delicacy.
Nah. not feeling this. The wording isn't great again.
Been a tough few days huh? Facing me & knowing ur talk is cheap…
Every morning u saw the writing on the wall like Danny from Doctor Sleep.
Cool concept... it just doesnt hit hard. Also, the setup is lazy.
Jab Master in the flesh. This 1-2 takes a lot of skills when I scuffle, but…
I ‘strike up’ a lot of tussles. It’s no surprise ur getting killed from this uppercut.
No. This was bad.
Tried to kick it like Charlie Brown but his raps never work. What he utters is worse…
Ironically every time we see ‘Pig Pen for Peanuts’ we wish this kid was covered in dirt.
Cool concept. Poorly worded setup. Still pretty good
Once the tech loose listen… It’s time to wave the white flags before I bless u, pimpin…
Catch dude slippin. Once the ‘smoke signals’ the choppers r coming after like a rescue mission.
This was your best bar. Worded pretty well, nice simple gun bar.

vs

I'm that fire. got the nine even though I'm a nice fighter
If I push the barrel back it's the end of the line.. iunno if its death or a typewriter
I get the concept... but its just not worded to be harsh
so read the room, say u squeeze then u better practice the preach
stutter.. I'll let the tech do the talkin.. now thats a conversational piece
No. The wording was terrible here. 1 syllable rhyme scheme? Lazy
2-0 still unknown ur ranking on tiers would be low, lame
Wux could've announced u against Chrit.. & STILL be considered the no name
Not all that harsh... timely idea... wording was a bit better here
No mag got u winnin, the whole forum'll see u smacked by a brit
this the definition of an English dub.. u just stay stuck on ya anime shit
Dude, you record music... your shit should have a better scheme. I like the concept but the wording is lazy.
Spiral'd out u in danger, masked up, ready to re-arrange ya
Knee shot. Have clown on wheels like he being televised by John Kramer
Again, bad wording. Just, nah.
Miss Finster ass. ur fam' snitches.. tell tales im darin ya,
then i'll go through this grass like im trynna battle every pidgey in the area
Not feeling this.

v/Ryno

Lazy wording from both... but damnit Mimic, you should know better.

[Zunto]

I’ll knock em out. Burst ur grill into infinity homie. W/O a doubt…
If he speaks fluid after this match, it’s cuz the blood’ll be gushing from out his mouth.
decent
Who brought em out to this slaughterhouse? Hackin this dweeb. He ain’t better than me…
So let me put this eloquently. Dawg I’m leaving Pigs Feet in a jar like a cheap delicacy.
wasnt feelin it
Been a tough few days huh? Facing me & knowing ur talk is cheap…
Every morning u saw the writing on the wall like Danny from Doctor Sleep.
good god this is fuckin dope, props lmao
Jab Master in the flesh. This 1-2 takes a lot of skills when I scuffle, but…
I ‘strike up’ a lot of tussles. It’s no surprise ur getting killed from this uppercut.
nah
Tried to kick it like Charlie Brown but his raps never work. What he utters is worse…
Ironically every time we see ‘Pig Pen for Peanuts’ we wish this kid was covered in dirt.
I don’t get this one man
Once the tech loose listen… It’s time to wave the white flags before I bless u, pimpin…
Catch dude slippin. Once the ‘smoke signals’ the choppers r coming after like a rescue mission.
ok closer, not great but just above average

1 good
1 ok
1 decent
3 misses


Vs


I'm that fire. got the nine even though I'm a nice fighter
If I push the barrel back it's the end of the line.. iunno if its death or a typewriter
ok, good wording but impact lacked a bit
so read the room, say u squeeze then u better practice the preach
stutter.. I'll let the tech do the talkin.. now thats a conversational piece
nah not feelin it
2-0 still unknown ur ranking on tiers would be low, lame
Wux could've announced u against Chrit.. & STILL be considered the no name
ok not bad
No mag got u winnin, the whole forum'll see u smacked by a brit
this the definition of an English dub.. u just stay stuck on ya anime shit
ok again here
Spiral'd out u in danger, masked up, ready to re-arrange ya
Knee shot. Have clown on wheels like he being televised by John Kramer
ahhhh thought you were going somewhere else with this, not feelin the way you finished it off
Miss Finster ass. ur fam' snitches.. tell tales im darin ya,
then i'll go through this grass like im trynna battle every pidgey in the area
lmao nah I love me some cartoon bars but this aint it bro

0 good
3 ok
3 misses


Damn this battle was super close. Both had the same number of misses, and it’s tough because Ryno had the best bar of the battle with the doctor sleep joint. Idk, this can go either way depending on voters but with something this close I have to give it to the guy who had the LOTB.

Vote Ryno

[Fresh]

I’ll knock em out. Burst ur grill into infinity homie. W/O a doubt…
If he speaks fluid after this match, it’s cuz the blood’ll be gushing from out his mouth.
ok
Who brought em out to this slaughterhouse? Hackin this dweeb. He ain’t better than me…
So let me put this eloquently. Dawg I’m leaving Pigs Feet in a jar like a cheap delicacy.
nah
Been a tough few days huh? Facing me & knowing ur talk is cheap…
Every morning u saw the writing on the wall like Danny from Doctor Sleep.
ok
Jab Master in the flesh. This 1-2 takes a lot of skills when I scuffle, but…
I ‘strike up’ a lot of tussles. It’s no surprise ur getting killed from this uppercut.
nah
Tried to kick it like Charlie Brown but his raps never work. What he utters is worse…
Ironically every time we see ‘Pig Pen for Peanuts’ we wish this kid was covered in dirt.
ok
Once the tech loose listen… It’s time to wave the white flags before I bless u, pimpin…
Catch dude slippin. Once the ‘smoke signals’ the choppers r coming after like a rescue mission.
not a fan

vs

I'm that fire. got the nine even though I'm a nice fighter
If I push the barrel back it's the end of the line.. iunno if its death or a typewriter
the comparison is well done but a typewriter / gun bar seems meh
so read the room, say u squeeze then u better practice the preach
stutter.. I'll let the tech do the talkin.. now thats a conversational piece
not feelin
2-0 still unknown ur ranking on tiers would be low, lame
Wux could've announced u against Chrit.. & STILL be considered the no name
weak as is
No mag got u winnin, the whole forum'll see u smacked by a brit
this the definition of an English dub.. u just stay stuck on ya anime shit
not feelin
Spiral'd out u in danger, masked up, ready to re-arrange ya
Knee shot. Have clown on wheels like he being televised by John Kramer
decent
Miss Finster ass. ur fam' snitches.. tell tales im darin ya,
then i'll go through this grass like im trynna battle every pidgey in the area
nahh

Ryno got this

v/ ryno

[plethora]

Ryno; opener & closer

Vs.

Mimic; clown on wheels


Felt mimic had the better misses but ryno had the better hits

V- ryno

[Orc]

Ryno - opener and closer we’re nice. I liked Doctor Sleep too - clever

Mimic - thought English dub was nice. Some of your concepts were nice but not executed harshly enough like the opener. That could have been fire

I have Ryno here

[Cody Nash]

I’ll knock em out. Burst ur grill into infinity homie. W/O a doubt…
If he speaks fluid after this match, it’s cuz the blood’ll be gushing from out his mouth.
aight
Who brought em out to this slaughterhouse? Hackin this dweeb. He ain’t better than me…
So let me put this eloquently. Dawg I’m leaving Pigs Feet in a jar like a cheap delicacy.
wasn't feelin' this but it felt worded like somethin' hard lmao
Been a tough few days huh? Facing me & knowing ur talk is cheap…
Every morning u saw the writing on the wall like Danny from Doctor Sleep.
eh, aight
Jab Master in the flesh. This 1-2 takes a lot of skills when I scuffle, but…
I ‘strike up’ a lot of tussles. It’s no surprise ur getting killed from this uppercut.
mehhh.. wasn't feelin' it.
Tried to kick it like Charlie Brown but his raps never work. What he utters is worse…
Ironically every time we see ‘Pig Pen for Peanuts’ we wish this kid was covered in dirt.
lol, liked that
Once the tech loose listen… It’s time to wave the white flags before I bless u, pimpin…
Catch dude slippin. Once the ‘smoke signals’ the choppers r coming after like a rescue mission.
dope

vs

I'm that fire. got the nine even though I'm a nice fighter
If I push the barrel back it's the end of the line.. iunno if its death or a typewriter
creative writing but I didn't feel the sting here
so read the room, say u squeeze then u better practice the preach
stutter.. I'll let the tech do the talkin.. now thats a conversational piece
eh, didn't like this
2-0 still unknown ur ranking on tiers would be low, lame
Wux could've announced u against Chrit.. & STILL be considered the no name
lol, aight
No mag got u winnin, the whole forum'll see u smacked by a brit
this the definition of an English dub.. u just stay stuck on ya anime shit
another creatively wrtitten punch that lacked a zing to it I think.. like.. "I'm an englishman getting the W and you like anime" isn't much of a diss but the way you said it was creative - if you catch my meaning
Spiral'd out u in danger, masked up, ready to re-arrange ya
Knee shot. Have clown on wheels like he being televised by John Kramer
meh, wasn't feelin' this one. fell flat for me
Miss Finster ass. ur fam' snitches.. tell tales im darin ya,
then i'll go through this grass like im trynna battle every pidgey in the area
eh, again, the connection lacks. I want more connection to the opponent hahah.

I feel like Ryno was just hittin' his opponent harder here with more connects and direct punches. Mimic was doing some creative writing but lacked the zing for me.

Vote Ryno

[Zunto]

Ryno Wins 7-0