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Thread: Get to know me

  1. April 3rd, 2011, 08:35 PM #1
    Hollow Cost
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    Get to know me

    Pain and mistakes make me, its what i harbor
    Life is hard, it leaves me scarred and shapes my armor
    Been in fights fist, physical, and mental
    A little kindle that resembles a sacred torch
    vacant thoughts, hatred takes its toll i pay the cost
    Growin up i was overweight moms was underpaid
    Mills pushed the slaves till the textiles moved away
    My text-styles paved the way, i show nothin but elevation
    No jail cases, i never pushed the oxy like failed respirations
    Besides bundles ive suffered from other struggles
    Try to stay humble and subtle but always down to rumble
    OCD took my life way back in elementary
    My mind on lock like penatenturies, my own worst enemy
    I toppled but still hopped over my physcological obsticales
    it was probable id fall back into the hospital
    Fuck it, ducked it, rather kick the bucket than suffer from it
    I held more weight than deep street pharmacists
    Too much to harness, other kids were heartless
    Killed my self-esteem, my health n dreams shattered
    ...didnt matter
    A long year of limitless dedication................................
    Like an economic stimulus i increased inflation
    I stay with my cronies who always lift me up n hold me
    So before you mug me coldy, at least get to know me
    Its simple neighbor, im blowin endo vapors
    run in ya window blow out ya temple with my widow maker


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  2. April 4th, 2011, 09:19 PM #2
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    Re: Get to know me

    drop your links hollow

    aight soo the first two lines were really cool i liked them alot, the 3rd line seemed like it didnt fit there i wasnt sure what it was supposed to rhyme with...flow kept movin on well, i dont like that simile with the pushed oxy like respiration.. although thats a cool concept i never heard that being compared that way..but i feel like that simile didnt need to be there...a little forced.. then you get back on track though, that rumble line was cool i liked that alot almost fully describing yourself, then you hit with that more weight line then a street pharmacist imo i didnt like that... but then once again you picked up and i think you finished strong... overall good drop no hate at all decent read keep elevatin my dude
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  3. April 4th, 2011, 09:38 PM #3
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    Re: Get to know me

    links
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...892/index.html
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...770/index.html
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...048/index.html
    Its simple neighbor, im blowin endo vapors
    run in ya window blow out ya temple with my widow maker


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  4. April 4th, 2011, 09:40 PM #4
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    i disagree with just skan. i think that the similes in this peice made it a bit more interesting, i liked the imagery and the flow of this.. i could see everything you were going through and your whole train of thought as you were writing, good piece man keep it up
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  5. April 8th, 2011, 11:48 AM #5
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    Re: Get to know me

    upp
    Its simple neighbor, im blowin endo vapors
    run in ya window blow out ya temple with my widow maker


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