Hey guys - this is the first rap I ever wrote. I posted up Paranoid (2nd rap) first cos I thought this was kinda shitty compared to it - but since it got very positive feedback I thought I'd post up my first effort. Its basically about how I have a tendancy to overthink things - to stay up all night and dwell ons hit when I should just be more carefree. Anyway, feedback welcome as ever!
Sir Dwellalot
Whereas, some would sit and just drink
I sit and I think
Im thinkin
And Im clickin on links
Tryin to piece it together.
Why the fuck can't I blink?
Or just catch a few winks?
I cant even remember.
Listen, i feel like I'm goin through a hell of a lot
Cos I sit here and I try not to dwell a lot.
Im like king arthur, fucking things up in camelot
Except instead of Mordred I battle my thoughts
I am the stone
From which he pulled the sword
I'll cut off your dome
Thoughts leavin you floored
That was a threat. Although its idle, my word
Is to out-rap competitors, any you've heard.
I am Sir Dwellalot
I like to think a lot
Stay up all night and
Construct the ideas I caught
They burst in, then they just leave like they S.W.A.T.
its my job,
to decide,
whether they're worthy or not.