I'm kind of rusty cause its been a while since I've written. So constructive criticism would be appreciated. I'd rather not get short posts talkin' shit. So if you wanna talk shit, do it in a constructive way to help me elevate. Oh, and by the way, I know the Cristopher Reeves reference is played out by Eminem but it went perfect with my piece. If you can't get the flow, there's a slight pause after every comma like there would be if you were reading poetry.
I'm the Illest
I'm sick of these niggas who think they iller than me,
it can't be cause of the way that I'm always killin' the beat,
I'm ill in these streets, you really think you iller than me?
Then pick a beat so I can end this thing subliminally,
I'll slither with ease inside your mind and cripple your knees
until you believe you're paralyzed like Cristopher Reeves
it's simple to see, my fingers have been itchin' to squeeze
and coincidentally, somebody's itchin' to bleed,
hissin' at me but you need to listen to me,
cause hissin' at me would only work your mental disease
my rhythm is three times better than your rhythm could be,
even in your dreams I'll end up bein' ill and a beast,
I'll kill you in your sleep and continue livin' in peace
I'll bring the pain like stomp-lovin' gorillas in cleats
so if you feelin' the beat that means my spit is complete,
and I've persuaded you to never ever get it with me,
cause I'm the illest.
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