TalksickEnigma vs QzA

[lostpoet]

10 lines
16 max
one hour deadline

[lostpoet]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...738/index.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...492/index.html


you're a Capri son, I'm a clenched fist
one squeeze will leave this bitch drenched
you sweatin me, you better be
I'm sharp like razor blades and cheddar cheese
I'll stick hand grenades in your little sisters hamster cage
place a nanny cam in the laundry bag and catch clips of your moms ass in granny pants
post them on the web as 'Beware of the lard avalanche'
Winning this battle you never had a chance
I'll never deviate from the master plan
you're a goat, I'm the bridge troll saying 'no you can't advance'

[QzA]

Really? You Ill ? Naw! You milfy! Suck so much you kill knees!!
You talk sick but now you cough shit cuz I keep my nutz filthy !!
Your cheap as free stickahs fake as knockoffs and cheap liquor
Who's afraid when you "Talk Shit" No one! This niggah is just an E-Nigma!!
You like love poems and soft ballads, pink Rabbits, and tossed salads
watch me end his "whole" adventure quick like I offed Alice!
Asking for help from experienced users like you just wanna get along!
Now I gotta Kill Rodney !! The impact of my hit'll make him shit his thong !!
What the fuck else could go wrong?Maybe he might just have nice flows!
Naw!! That shit is far fetched and in between! At least as far as the mic goes!

[.Relentless.]

not a great battle in my opinion.. Talk sick you came too simple and didnt really have any hard hitting punches at all.. you need some work on concepts sting..
QzA you came a lil more creative but you lacked hard hitting punches.. but no doubt you get my vote for more attempts..

V QzA

[lostpoet]

Now I gotta Kill Rodney !! The impact of my hit'll make him shit his thong !!
What the fuck else could go wrong?Maybe he might just have nice flows!
Naw!! That shit is far fetched and in between! At least as far as the mic goes!

I'm just wondering if you might explain this for me. Not only does it not make any sense, but it has no rhyme scheme. No offense, I am just having a very difficult time wrapping my head around this. Maybe you are an incredible rapper and this is some sort of amazing metaphor that is soaring over my head like an sr71 blackbird; doubtful.

[BrI]

Talk
you're a Capri son, I'm a clenched fist
one squeeze will leave this bitch drenched
you sweatin me, you better be
I'm sharp like razor blades and cheddar cheese
^bad..first bar doesnt even rhyme

I'll stick hand grenades in your little sisters hamster cage
place a nanny cam in the laundry bag and catch clips of your moms ass in granny pants
post them on the web as 'Beware of the lard avalanche'
weak

Winning this battle you never had a chance
I'll never deviate from the master plan
you're a goat, I'm the bridge troll saying 'no you can't advance'
ehh...

QzA
Really? You Ill ? Naw! You milfy! Suck so much you kill knees!!
You talk sick but now you cough shit cuz I keep my nutz filthy !!
na..

Your cheap as free stickahs fake as knockoffs and cheap liquor
Who's afraid when you "Talk Shit" No one! This niggah is just an E-Nigma!!
You like love poems and soft ballads, pink Rabbits, and tossed salads
watch me end his "whole" adventure quick like I offed Alice!
good

Asking for help from experienced users like you just wanna get along!
Now I gotta Kill Rodney !! The impact of my hit'll make him shit his thong !!
What the fuck else could go wrong?Maybe he might just have nice flows!
Naw!! That shit is far fetched and in between! At least as far as the mic goes!
ehh...ok.

vote=QzA

He had more punches...wordplay

[The Incredible Hulk]

neither have 3 links

closed.