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Thread: Rain [My 5 Senses]

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    Rain [My 5 Senses]

    I watch the lightning dance across the sky beyond my perspective,
    I feel my brain turns sublime as everything turns subjective.
    I smell rain coming from the celestial atmosphere in a crisp zephyr,
    I taste the tears of heaven, pure enough to cure a leper.
    I can hear the power of God descending in an aquatic form,
    I observe the neutrons effulgent in this electrical storm.
    I cup the gift from the quagmires in my hands,
    I breathe the pure oxygen that my anatomy demands.
    I drink the chemically bonded brew to keep my heart beating,
    I listen to the rain, Spring's warm-welcomed greeting.

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    Re: Rain [My 5 Senses]

    C'mon guys, give me some feedback.

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    Re: Rain [My 5 Senses]

    I like the style of this drop, i did it too a few days ago...nice vocab, flow was also nice keep them comin like this..its somthing not everbody writes about

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...67#post7624167

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    Re: Rain [My 5 Senses]

    Quote Originally Posted by sir headless View Post
    I like the style of this drop, i did it too a few days ago...nice vocab, flow was also nice keep them comin like this..its somthing not everbody writes about

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...67#post7624167
    Thanks dude.

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    Re: Rain [My 5 Senses]

    Would like more feedback please!

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