-10 lines
-due 1 hour
-normal rules
-My check
-10 lines
-due 1 hour
-normal rules
-My check
This is a place of talent, which you dont understand
your a self-employed advertiser, leaving minds fully scammed
Like havin 8 "KidS", you've had enough dick to surplus da news
in reality your a divorced mother with nothing better to lose*
you want acceptance like those kids joining the crips nowadays
too bad no crew will accept someone sinister
....so giving into crabs you give a Bj
givin that deep head, how could you tell it was TIME to battle N' lose?
ajaring your mind for hours like a car door N' now you confused
........This is the closest you'll ever get to a murder scene
coz you role in life is like your structure a nightmare left unseen
*jon and kate plus 8
how gay was that, you actually put a * to explain something gay as fuck
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....Step Your Rap Game Up....
"Pop" mufukrs from Oklahoma like Coca-cola
I'ma extra terrestrial, grabbin' my testicles, these other rappers left overs, Wrap'em up like vegetables
ok so the only good punch ive seen so fars in ur name
i read ur terrible rhymes and wonder whos to blame
is it ur mother fr not aborting u and sending u to a suitable place
she thought maybe time will make him something well time punched her in the face
so i guess im the new kid that you think u can beat
buh ima school you real quik so please take a seat
i own u compared to u im elite
ima beat u harder than a virgin beats his meat
dont u even attempt to get on my level
or u'll get demolished by kid sinister the new jersey devil
This is a place of talent, which you dont understand
your a self-employed advertiser, leaving minds fully scammed
lol, cool opener
Like havin 8 "KidS", you've had enough dick to surplus da news
in reality your a divorced mother with nothing better to lose*
nawww
you want acceptance like those kids joining the crips nowadays
too bad no crew will accept someone sinister
....so giving into crabs you give a Bj
nah ah, not feelin this either
givin that deep head, how could you tell it was TIME to battle N' lose?
ajaring your mind for hours like a car door N' now you confused
mm no this ones a miss too, set up is cool tho
........This is the closest you'll ever get to a murder scene
coz you role in life is like your structure a nightmare left unseen
wordings real bad here
vs
ok so the only good punch ive seen so fars in ur name
i read ur terrible rhymes and wonder whos to blame
weak
is it ur mother fr not aborting u and sending u to a suitable place
she thought maybe time will make him something well time punched her in the face
ok i guess, wordings off
so i guess im the new kid that you think u can beat
buh ima school you real quik so please take a seat
weak
i own u compared to u im elite
ima beat u harder than a virgin beats his meat
bleh no
dont u even attempt to get on my level
or u'll get demolished by kid sinister the new jersey devil
swag/self glory=no punch=wack
weak battle, both gotta step it up a lot
relatively even matched but i gotta say i think time punch was swung this one, just
v/tP for slightly more consistant verse
KMT ? SMH ? FFS
•
PN IN UR FACE
i'm rollin in ur graves
-http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php/rivalyn-vs-irap2good-421365/index.html
-http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php/writer-vs-marv-421045/index.html
votes??
uppin
votes....
-Top 1
KMT ? SMH ? FFS
•
PN IN UR FACE
i'm rollin in ur graves
-Ascend 2
This is a place of talent, which you dont understand
your a self-employed advertiser, leaving minds fully scammed
Like havin 8 "KidS", you've had enough dick to surplus da news
in reality your a divorced mother with nothing better to lose*
you want acceptance like those kids joining the crips nowadays
too bad no crew will accept someone sinister
....so giving into crabs you give a Bj
givin that deep head, how could you tell it was TIME to battle N' lose?
ajaring your mind for hours like a car door N' now you confused
........This is the closest you'll ever get to a murder scene
coz you role in life is like your structure a nightmare left unseen
Nameplay/no not good enough
Wordplay/yes
Multies/no
Punches/no weak punches like you didn't try
Flow/yes.. but barely also i'm adding creativity to this
*jon and kate plus 8
Vs
ok so the only good punch ive seen so fars in ur name
i read ur terrible rhymes and wonder whos to blame
is it ur mother fr not aborting u and sending u to a suitable place
she thought maybe time will make him something well time punched her in the face
so i guess im the new kid that you think u can beat
buh ima school you real quik so please take a seat
i own u compared to u im elite
ima beat u harder than a virgin beats his meat
dont u even attempt to get on my level
or u'll get demolished by kid sinister the new jersey devil
Nameplay/yes better then times atleast
Wordplay/no
Multies/no more then time though
Punches/no, not good enough atleast
Flow/yes except the one bar was way stretched
v goes to time just based on complexity,
no hate sinister try and make more complex lines
-up, up & away
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