Freestyle... Keepin' It Raw

[Esc0BosS]

eh it was nice-ish, technically most aspects of this piece was on point, flow, multiz, vocab etc...

problem...technique could spit this shit, and i'd be like...word... There's not enuff YOU translating into this shit imo

Stay Up #1

RTF http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ng-382135.html

[The Lyricist 2]

This was a pretty good piece. I like that you tried to make almost every bar a punchline. The flow was alright but I think it would sound better with a few more multies added in.

Overall it was good though.

[Crookshank]

This was a pretty good piece. I like that you tried to make almost every bar a punchline. The flow was alright but I think it would sound better with a few more multies added in.

Overall it was good though.

Thanks for the feed man.

Esco, are you saying there's nothing to show that it was something by me... like it was generic? If so, yea I understand that, it was meant to be like a generic battle/freestyle, however you wanna take it. But I get wat your sayin, thanks for the feed, ill return.

[nineties flava]

this was aight... the flow coulda been better as the structure was inconsistent and the multis didn't always match up. The punches were on the simplistic side but o/a it was decent... if it was actually a freestyle then it was pretty decent.

O/A: 6/10

rtf on this:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=389106

[Esc0BosS]

Esco, are you saying there's nothing to show that it was something by me... like it was generic? If so, yea I understand that, it was meant to be like a generic battle/freestyle, however you wanna take it. But I get wat your sayin, thanks for the feed, ill return.

it is generic...but most battle raps are, i was jus saying this piece sounds like some immortal technique shit