freestyle

[6oss Raliegh]

I usaually dont write cause my flows dat tight n my flows dat nice that i can get yo advance n 6low it n one nite c dis a ruff gam6le n u aint gon win nine times outta ten yo flows 2 thin n u dont wanta fuck wit d kid n d pen flows hard enough 2 get my life off n d pin n my freestyle so wild it i'll get me chair n i still 6ust 6arz crush stars n go hard these dudes 6e soft like 6reak down while i hit d spot n always move my weight round got mo cake now n move mo weight round these dudes fake now dats why they gone hate now

[6oss Raliegh]

dis off d head

[6oss Raliegh]

hate me now

[Dee Boy™]

weak...

[6oss Raliegh]

u trash dont get took out

[Crookshank]

Hey... I usually would give some reason behind what I say about someone's drop, but this was just straight whack. You need to elevate kid.... Try a rhyme structure, for example....

This is line one/
This is line two// } Bar 1
This is line three/
This is line four// } Bar 2

and so on and so on.....

Not only does it make it easier for others to read, its gonna let you become better so you can organize the words and see which rhymes you want and where you want them to be.... stay up