Does Death Wear Chap Stick? (Augury & Dj)

[Tragedian.]

Does Death Wear Chap Stick?
Tragedian.
Augury


Death … My souls a dark painting
A hole where sparks – get me fainting
These tears I can’t keep restraining
My fear is with sleep – pertaining
And it’s tearing at me, I hate this
Maintaining my life - no maintenance
And if it’s Satan, that causing this stress
I’ll start pausing, until he kisses his death
The bottles empty, no more wishes are left
Life is such a whore; I’ll switch up the set
These itches – its sweat, I’m fighting a battle
If I say I love this life, I’m lighting with prattle

Feeling cold every night, my spine nearly rattles
Eclipse on my soul. My heart seems to be in a shadow.
Quivering, as my soul shakes and aches
My heart done for, when will I break?
My mind in the dirt, I’m not level headed at all
Fighting these urges… to give up and end it all.
Off the wall, these pills must be fucking cheap
Pop two Xanex and get an hour of sleep.
When will God keep my soul, ARE YOU LISTENING?
Taunting thunder erupts in the sky, almost glistening
I get no response, so I must not be too response-ible
Want to be alone, and my life is just too plausible.
Taunting thunder erupts in the sky, almost glistening.
Death is kissing me on the cheek, not on the lips
Embrace the skin tension, as my mind rips…

The pain, unbearable
It’s insane, just terrible

I don’t care though; I hate this life, to much pressure
Take out this knife; take my heart, for the treasure
And for ever, we’ll call it an ending -

[Tragedian.]

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Word.
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Ups.

[Bstill]

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this drop was nice i really like the concept something orignal alot of good lines here

Dj your verse was full of emotion and i like alot of the imagery that you used in this piece mann it was a nice lil vibe the flow was on point and it just all blended well together. if i had to fix one thing about your verse it would be adding more multies to get a better feel while reading would of made it end up alot smoother

augury i haven't really read many of your topical but im glad i stopped in to read this one i like your style of writing that you used in this piece you had a nice vibe and u can tell your used to the flow cause it was on poin the whole way through mann i also like the imagery that you sent in this piece

overall this was a nice piece keep droppin you to

and DJ another dope piece from

TA

[Alphaeus]

DJ:
So you started off with a nice flow, but your rhyme was pretty simple at the start.
As your verse progressed you took more chances with your rhyme scheme and your verse read a lot better. You had some nice imagery in this verse, and your description was rather decent also.

Augury:
Not read much topical from you but you wrote a nice verse, great for a nice big middle piece. Again you had a nice smooth flow that stayed consistent.
Really nice imagery picking up towards the end, the line about thunder erupting the sky that really nice, enjoyed that.

Then DJ, brought another nice, well written few lines to finish the piece.
Overall I nice collab, would have liked to see a few more lines from Augury,
but still a very nice piece from you both.

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Ups..

[Tragedian.]

To da top.

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Word up.

[Tebo]

It was a interesting read. It seems like the person is embracing death/heartbroke/suicidal. It seems like you guys are supposed to be the same person or being the way I read it. Pretty good mix of scenarios. Overall interesting take on death.

RTF if ur down
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