Few Bars....

[.Tricky-G.]

all you fools that be hatin on phaze aint rappers, you just ludacris. Hell no mutha fucka i aint new to this, /if you think im liein, believe it or not, if da police come around, im not leavin the pot./ I aint trippin like 'Pac, i aint tryin ta get shot./ The hate is just senseless, ya'll talk shit that you really wouldnt do, you think all the other people are defenseless, /One day ima have a bigger bank than The Game, fuck that fake lil bitch, he might as well have put "Im a skank" in his name./ Its ridiculous, all the shit you bust. I aint tryin stir up trouble, i aint tryin ta burst yo bubble,/ i was placed in this world just to tell a story, I respect the old school rappers that fell before me,/ but this new school bullshit is startin ta bore me./ Ya'll can hate if you want to, but you'd be wastin ya time, Theres not a rapper on earth that is perfect in every rhyme./ This part is for phaze, i feel you homie. Ima stand up for you and you dont even know me./ He's talkin bout gettin laid, he's a mutha fuckin pimp, he's gettin paid/ You just hatin on him cuz he's better than you, he's probly gon get a fuckin deal, THEN what the fuck you gon do?/ ...........Ayo phaze....Holla at me.........peace out

[.P.H.A.S.E.]

for some reason, my next message is on the next page....check that shit out

what u mean for some reason. the page ran out ....lol
n dawg stop typing paragraphs

[.Tricky-G.]

what u mean for some reason. the page ran out ....lol
n dawg stop typing paragraphs

Its not my fault i have alot to say. Ha ha and the page ran out cuz im on my psp and it wont let me post a ton of stuff at one time

[Tragedian.]

Doesn't everyone like to fuck fine chicks?

[®andom]

not me. hairy bitches yo.

[B.Nesse]

maaan, all the sexual references made it uninteresting to read, and here and there you kept puttin quotation marks around words, which made it a bit corny, as far as the flow went that was the only decent part of the verse, i think your vocab was lacking, maybe this would sound better in audio, seem like an audio verse more than a text freestyle, but foreal, no one wants to read lines about fuckin bitches, not creative, unless you did some rihanna shit like Shut Up and Drive, lol she spoke on her sex but in a more detailed way, this wasn't good bro.