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  1. #1
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    applause

    i never asked to be added to any book
    never wanted to sing look pretty or cook
    being a lady came forceful with no apologys
    all the prep ball players out there but me wanting a g
    someone living life different than me
    rocking a white tee
    with a black in his mouth
    spoke with a draw said it came from the south
    cars money and girls all came fast
    he said you only live once in the present not the past
    since i listened and wanted to live
    i gave into giving til i had nothing to give
    no friends no girls no associates
    no wonder i was use to this
    i gave away my dreams and replaced them with schemes
    took from innocent people robbing them clean
    while i looked at him and all my stolen goods
    i realized i was so called HOOD and misunderstood
    i was that american dream the grimey one
    riding disobedient with an army gun
    shooting in the air just for fun
    life is so fun when ya just this bad
    life without this is lifeless its sad-
    but just a reality- i'm being blunt ya see
    i never asked to be added to any book
    never wanted to sing -look pretty -or cook
    being a lady came forceful with no apologys
    when i die i hope that no one ever finds me
    cause i died for a purpose- i died for a cause
    i died for the last applause
    gun shots coming from a man of the law

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    ALL THAT I CAN SAY..... HASN'T BEEN SAID...

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    Re: applause

    Nice rhymes, it also had a good flow to it.
    Liked the story as well, lured me in.

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