Skills Matter

[nineties flava]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...nt-369237.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ad-369192.html

just for the record this is gonna be an audio in a little while... probably once school lets out for the summer. I'm gonna rap it to The Hardest (AZ & Styles P with Large P on the beat).


yo,
in a flash I negate sinna’s cash; y’all been in last/
for a minute; as my spittin blast wacks I trim the trash//
cats; I spinned ya past tracks and all I gotta-say/
is stop today; ya bought ya way in with enough gwap ta lay in//
drop the swayin; the mobsta sayins are played as fuck/
jay n rae’s enough; you ain’t contributin with these gay ass bluffs//
take ya cuts back; ya can’t bust phat; to ya fans, cut that/
gay love crap out; take yall’s nutsacks out his butt crack now//
what wack? Ya comebacks couldn’t stunt the growth of hunchbacks/
come-back when ya dumb raps carry more weight than Pun’s fat//
TUNS that crew that you rat towards; like Fear factor/
actors G-Unit stans do anything for 50 stackers//
like the rapture, I’m approaching the end/
poachin ya friends; towin ya benz, totin a pen//
prosin again; arose in the den but still made it/
with ill statements; y’all is ill fated cause like the matrix//
Y’all only awoke in the end, like coke in ya gin/
i’m unexpected dope; I run the bestest show//
in the west biz known; as I wreck this song/
I test the chrome; vests is torn till chests is blown//
with next to no thought; like gotti I’m scott-free/
from competition; if ya think you better, top ma spittin//
bootleggers stop the bitchin and just cop The Mission.../


hook (2x):

killin it down, ill with the noun, still in the round/
stealin ya crown; like a pulse y’all feelin it now//
in ya hearts; like Shawn Carter, 15 and just started/
up the carnage; if ya garbage, don’t start shit...//

[nineties flava]

uppin

[xxxMedCzRxxx]

thas hot... i like idea, nice flow, if you make bigger words rhyme it sound alot better... like 6 7 syllable word with another long word it sounds a lot better, i been following this for long time, even tho im not really good at it, i know what sounds good tho.... overall nice piece

[Tragedian.]

skills matter

you just need to work on yours.

[nineties flava]

^thanks for the feed... but plz don't delete, got anything specific?

[Notebook]

this was dope...mad good...cant get any more specific than that...

ill piece...keep it up...

[nineties flava]

^thanks for the feed

uppin

[Havoc.]

You got potential. but you need to elevate on your overall presentation. you should lose the "//" at the end of each line, kind of annoying. but you got good rhymes and pretty descent flow. just work on topics and staying on it. cuz rambling on about so much stuff isnt really interesting to read if you know what i mean. keep working. peace

[143]

this was a decent drop, had good structure and flow. Only one thing is to up the vocab a lil and it would sound a lil deeper...keep the flow up....Peace

[nineties flava]

^thanks for the feed 143 & havoc... uppin

[soberSE0ULja]

Truthfully i thought this was garbage. It sounds somewhat like a diss track but theres very few real hits. You had a couple attempts at wordplay/punches like the "pun fat" and "awoke/coke n gin" lines....but they were weak. The lines just sounded played and got tiring after the first few. Nothing was really witty or fresh to me.

either way one thin i did kinda like were your multis in the beginning, but you kinda stopped that after the first couple bars...so yeah

keep up