Evolution of Evil - Hence Forward

[Seyance]

Haha, i'm 'Masterful'.. thats hilarious.. props on the feed.

[Jon]

uppin for more feed.

[The Vortex]

yea this was nicely written piece, flow and metre was superb..
vocab was solid as a rock, topic was fine in my books, i'm all about some scriptures and that spiritual stuff...
you had some dope visual images and mettas throughout,
i must say at one point after halfway through i thought like um this piece is a bit too long, but i read thru it all the same, and you had plenty of food for thought and many entertaining bars

so yea nice piece

check out my piece
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ld-357214.html

[Jon]

thanks

[Cody Nash]

good shit men.. really enjoyed the piece being a bit of a religious seeking person myself. the story was on key, descriptive and imaginative varied in each verse but that also brough the piece diversity... which is good. seeing this from all angles is nice and makes for a smoothe and good read. none of your styles really clashed except for seyance's imo... he kind of started this off on his own style and the others kind've strayed off from him afterwards... but ALL of you had some hot lines and verses nontheless. good read, stay cool Henceman....




- Nash



all of you should feed on mine and Mr.Write's piece... Trace Boredom

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...mr-357345.html

[Jon]

thanks will hit it up

[Vincent Maestro]

?.....why is this just now coming to my attention...fucking gr8 read.
I mean this was very storytellish and very interesting read.....
by the time I got to the end i had to read it Again for entertainment purposes.

Multi's/Rhyme schemes: two thumbs Up
Imagery: was off the charts

So the 'Evolution of Evil' was orchestrated &..
Every single leaf glistened with morbid hatred,
Fruit so perfect everyone who saw it, waited
Wanting a bite to see how pure the taste is...
....Not knowing that the core was laced with
.....Those are some very sick multi's ma dudes....how'd he do that.
and it was also the perfect opener for this subject Y'all wrote on.




Rating: 10/10

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[Jon]

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[Jon]

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