Mindstate

[Lil pap]

Lyrical flow, I spit ryhmes " Fluently"
My words representing I, so my lyrics "Representing Me'
Through street knowledge, I spit political " Visionary"
All through lyrical entity, Thru my eyes visionary of political crash I "See"
lethal tounge's of flame, my lyrics is my "Weaponry"
My mmind sustain words devine, Spit words so sublime I spit lyrical "Treasory"
When I came out the womb, I was bleesed to bring forth lyrical "Lyricy"
...........On one side of the political entity...............................
I broke all up and brought Dictatoship to thier "Democracy"
fuckin tired of "Hipocracy". flow pheonomily spit lyrical "Phylosophy"
I deliver poetry, I got a flow decease when I flow of " Atrochery"
.............My flow decease is hard to see....................
I have too much wisdom in my mind it's not hard to "see"
My minds full of lyrics, it devine "Wisdom"
I was crowned king, king of kings im chillin in my "Kingdom"
try to over take i'll make u sing, Over take me and i'll git to ur wife n children
i got plans to became great, my whole like is a mission
try to kill me i'll kill Them, these niggaz is "NUM" rappers aint nobody feel them


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...56#post6065956

[Lil pap]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...56#post6065956

thats the link sorry for not puttin it in the first place

[Lil pap]

tel me whatya'lll think.... tanx

[Vincent Maestro]

nice rhyme...damn you must really like Papoose alot...
Your rap alot like him..
nice post
6.5/10
try to drop longer Pieces..
llokin for more from you
Favorite Lines Were:
Lyrical flow, I spit ryhmes " Fluently"
My words representing I, so my lyrics "Representing Me'
Through street knowledge, I spit political " Visionary"
All through lyrical entity, Thru my eyes visionary of political crash I "See"
lethal tounge's of flame, my lyrics is my "Weaponry"
My mind sustain words divine, Spit words so sublime I spit lyrical "Treasury"

That was a tyte Rhyme Scheme

[Lethal lungs]

I really was feeling this shit yo...and yah u do come across like papoose manye damn....your rhyme scheme was crazy the whole thing had me in awe.....your vocabulary was intense yo and it made sense,it wasent just a bunch of big words and nuthing making sense....

9/10


my fav lines
...........On one side of the political entity...............................
I broke all up and brought Dictatoship to thier "Democracy"
fuckin tired of "Hipocracy". flow pheonomily spit lyrical "Phylosophy"
I deliver poetry, I got a flow decease when I flow of " Atrochery"

fuking tight son keep doing your thing..

[silentwill]

that shit was awsome down for real love that man
great vocabulary and it only gets better
dude you got the package that shit is real emotional and deep
9/10
nuttin to it keep spittin your rhyme Phylosophy

[Bullet.]

dam dawg stright fire to the fullest yoooooooo,,wooooooow
omg i would never think u could spit this shit basically exact same as pap lol
woowo cant git over it... bro stright 9 outa 10

[Lil pap]

tanx yo for the feedback,,,yah i do like papoose but i use is style for a guide for how to spit naw mean,,,But keep em feeds comming ill RTF...

[sILLable]

i dig this piece...a little short...you stayed on point although everyone does a self glorification piece now and again..i dig this one...you dont have to elaborate the rhyming words with quotation marks or anything like that..we can still read them.....well some people can....your structure was a little choppy which in turn caused the flow to be a bit choppy..but not too bad....not many vets will reply to peoples shit on here that havent been on long but i try to get everybody..some people think there high and mighty..but thats only a few...all in all i dig this piece..your vocab was ill....more multis would have improved this piece...keep droppin tha hottness and elevatin...~1~

[Lil pap]

tanx for the hitup homie..tanx alot i appreciate the feedbac ......

[Witty]

Why the faggoty fuck did you post a link to this piece?

Read the rules before you drop again.

-Closed.