The Fight Game..featuring Vortex

[NiNjah Red]

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The Fight Game

The internet brought digital reps… & caused riot text
complex heads flexed critical thought for cynical intellects
twisted dialectic doses of text posing threats to sceptics
scripts from paralytic poets blow the brains of mainstream
where a name means nothing if it doesn’t gain green
it’s the same scene, but now played with a strange theme
deranged fiends scream at demons to change the regime
rhyme-scheming minions, dreaming of maximum exposure
rucksack rap, smacking opponents with acts of a soldier
…I smoulder eternally; Vortex is very violent verbally
you’re better-off staying silent, no point in disturbing me
words set me free; I’ll be consciously vying for wisdom
trying my best to avoid arrest, sick of lying in prison
dying isn’t living”… – I decide while eying grim visions--
everything is justified; obliged in sins so unforgiving
knocking-out boy-scouts who doubt my - perilous position
tricks of the trade dazzle & daze crowds as the magician
wishing you’d just listened in the first fucking instant
for-instance -- I’m built to go the whole damn distance
attack from the atmosphere; disappear, a true Ninjitsu
all you knew is something flew out-of-the-blue & hit you!

Rumble setter, bruise clans; win hands-down easy match
jungle dweller, fools find me in the cellar with these rats
blasting on roaches… nose smoking, I remain jokeless
shafting foes hopeless, I stay focused on insane motives
same old shit, fuck it… I must admit: I’m the main culprit…
jumping in conflicts, & leaving bloodstains on the pulpit
fools heed, you’ll need them petite nurses on hospital shift
call 999 plus 911… someone’s gone meet the critical list
in this mist of madness, such badness is bound to astonish!
admonish armies – before I seek, take-aim, -& demolish…!
Ok, I didn’t really mean… to leave you bleeding on the floor
just know “I’m only human, & we all need a little bit of war”

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[NiNjah Red]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ws-339424.html


ffuck ill post another link soon yea

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[Know-It-All]

Dope. The flow was hot and I really really loved the vocab brought in this piece and I was loving the multis. The rhyme scheme was very very complex. had some very nice punchlines and this piece really spoke the truth about netcees and the imaginary reps. I really enjoyed this piece.


If you get a chance can you hit the Save Darfur link in my sig and RTF please..


Thank You

James W.

[NiNjah Red]

yeah thanks for checking out the piece bro.

sure ill hit your piece up real soon, ill read a lil later and reply 2moro

pz

[_Lyrics]

ok key. top notch flow, definitly. the multis were good and you had internals too, some insane wording time to time. I think that this topic has been merked to death tho, but you did your thing. there were some cool punches, it was funny that you said feat. vortex too lol. was kinda like a split personality spit.

[NiNjah Red]

yea 4 sho B, the split pesonality thing is coming forth,.ha


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[Bounce]

I could spit this right now at a show, most writers here I could not say that for. Flow was the obvious focus here, but the story progressed well for something that felt like your typical "im badder than you" verse, but it read differently. It was almost cat and mouse like, a playful beating so to speak. I enjoyed it, and have come to expect great things when I step into your threads.

[NiNjah Red]

word B


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[NiNjah Red]

ok.1 mo up from me................