Femcee reppin

[Twenty6]

Zee from tha block on top imma kill it
i run up in a drop blowin spots flowin real sick/
betta stop smokin pot cuz u kno it dont heal shit/
no lookin at tha clock cant stop slingin ill shit/
Mission: Special Ops gotta glock bullets will hit
Gully dont mock cuz I'll drop ya ass a full clip/
wipe ya like a mop dont talk get tha deal kid?
Reppin Hip hop dont Jock cant steal it/
my lines will rock bothya sox an thats real kid
yo shits a flop one pop an imma seal it
Mess with the best betta stop blood gets spilled kid
Got tha game on lock fuck cops imma steal shit
Need to go shop cant top my Zeal Kid
Bringin it Real know tha deal got tha gun cocked
Watch how i peal need to heal got ya cell locked
Ill make you feel like a meal outta my wok
mess with the best get undressed an get caught
Starin in Awe hit ya jaw in tha soft spot
Dont care if u tall gonna fall not a big shot
Crazy with skill get ya fill but it wont stop
dont run and fall asses haul when you hear this
Respect this miss dont diss imma flip kid
G-M-C Fine all teh time Grimey Mutts Clique
Rep to the death no rest Always real Chicks
Play never pause no cause for to quit it
Grimey for life pull a knife on a fake bitch
Go dig a ditch bout to lynch leave ya 6 feet
Unda tha dirt leave ya hurt we real neat
know how to twerk only flirt with real meat
2 streight freeks on tha sneek keep it down low
Tree cee can sing an Zee brings tha sick flow
blowin ya mind all the time we real nice
Treece got my back dont lack showin word shock
Tighter than blood real love fate wont stop
from the same hood its all good wearin flip flops
Chickin an Rice rollin dice cuz we on top
tommy Enyce no price we jus cop
get it 4 free wish ur me join our flock
this track is done nice one filled tha time slot


so wassup?

[tRiLL]

kill it
real sick/ how does that rhyme..........

no offense but what was that.......gangsta rap isnt appreciated here on RB if ur songs dont make no sense...............try work on yo vocab style everything ok

[Manic Killer]

i aint gunna rip on yo rap too much but i couldnt feel the flow to it. The most i felt it run for was about two lines i think tRiLL is right about ur vocab needing work.

[Bashire]

She's a female take it easy on here , , i think she did a great job ,, Compare her drop to some of tha other femcees that Rb got , , ,, , ,I think she did Better than all the other femcees shit i have read , , ,, This was ill , keep spittin

[Twenty6]

well i have it up on audio if yall wanna hear me spit it... ill admit i missed tha beat near the end but i think i did a over all really good job an its how i say REAL sick an Kill it.. u gotta take into account that different people have different accents and something that might not Rhyme when you say it will rhyme when i say it...

any way here u can check it out....

an i can always drop some of my old battle verses if u want to see me REALLY put down.. jus tell me an ill drop

Click here to hear me spit that track


and jus for the record... it shoudlnt matter if im a female or not.. b/c i have NO problem with rippin any one who thinks they are game... im no respecter of sex.. if u good you good.. if your not then your wack...

[Atetrack define']

yeah agree..fuck the comment about leaving you alone coz you a femcee...thats th ereason there are so many whack femcees,coz peopel thin they hould be given leeway coz thye women...fuck that shit...if they whack they wahck,to bad.....bu tyeha...actually after listening to th eaduio,i actually picked it up,wich onaa yall is tree cee,an wich one is zee...??it did go ok wiht th ebeat,but i ffell of towrd the end and th equlity was out,but what can you expect from a computer mic nahmean,wasnt that bad...you rlyrics were simple...but not great...you need to up it alot nahmean,but apart from that after hearing the audio i got it abit more,but eahou both still need to elevate alot,and the gnagsta aint all that great to listen to nahmean...but if its what you dod its what you do,i just sugesst try writin somehtin different to elevate your styles aiight...keep droppin....

bismillah

[Twenty6]

tree cee is my home girl... she sings .. an i occationally get her to come on my trax.. the thing is that i dont have any trax with her on it right now...

im zee (hense the TWENTY6) actaully i have alota shit thats more elivated.. if u look at my sound click www.soundclick.com/mcgully
you can see where i came from *with One Chance* all the way to the newest stuff tha remix 26 questions... im not saying im SUPA good or anything just saying that ill drop some of my old battle bars in here an see wat yall think

*i know it says not to but they arent ppl you kno any way and its not like im tellin u to vote on it .. all i want is some feedback on my lines*

[noncentz]

it was gangsta rap that still if a form so i will admit it was more than expected i want to read another topical verse i think you could have good potential

[Twenty6]

My first verse

Your fake like the"Politix" you speak, your lines are weak/
Cyce's nonexistant punches i eat like meat/
Im carnivorous lookin 4 the kill, with ease this fake MC's blood I spill/
My rhymes are potent impregnating you with raw lyrics like a hoe w/o the PILL/
Rhymin for 12 years and still flowin whack/
Fumbling over words like a heart durrin ATTACK/
The only way your rhymes would be sweet would be spittin after eatin confections/
But even then you cant beat my well said lines murderin yo childish conjections/
Like a jigalo lookin to get payed for "givin" affections/
You throwin up lines to anyone who will listen/
Got all these bd.com heads thinkin you tha best/
But like a cheap hoe My lines bout to get you UNDRESSED/
People say im Possesed but its you that just got owned/
tryin to borrow bars an regurgetating other Mc's lines on loan/

His first verse

Precyce hotta than most/
spit a sixteen like I'm poppin the toast/
lyrically empty clips to body your post/
I drop a jewel in every verse I spit fuck your ice/
You say I fumble over words but you still can't fu-fu-fuck with cyce/
you impregnate me? Chick please you need to stop/
cause if you got the equipment to do that then what does that say about j-roc?/*
Trust me shorty any track you got I'll rip/
Jealous of me throwing up lines cause you struggle just to spit/
You say I'm a jigalo getting paid for giving affections/
which reminds me, you still owe me for that last injection/
you know the routine shorty 3 C-notes per erection/
and this is the only way you could ever fuck with perfection/

*jroc is a moderator on the forum.. an cyce knew that we were dating at the time

MY second verse

Payin 4 shit bitch please, i get it for free/
Gully, u kno how i be: sickest chick flamin MCs/
killin ya in ya sleep so tha shit'll be painless/
u say im ill, hangin round me cuz ya think its contagious/
Lets face this,I dont need equipment to knock ya up/
delayed dont care ur excuse*;sounds like ya chickin "Cluck Cluck"/
lockin ya upin tha trunk jus like ya "man" lock down*/
beat his meat cuz thats all u can pound/
step to tha mound an ya in a million pieces like grounds*
tightly wound,callin me a dude,dont be mad i got faster "balls" than u/
sick, bringin tha illness like SARS small pox n tha flu/
i thought u knew, u cant mess with the best u bout to get undressed/
"but i contest" no one give a fuck bout tha temp* so y u stress?/
caught on this, ill rhymes by a dime
got ya beggin an pleadin to hear em "one more time"
my lines sweet like candy call me almond joy
cuz im a GROWN UP an u still playin wit toys
not to mention these 10 yearold boys thinkin they men/
still havent figure out how to work paper an pen/
u want it again? still gettin ripped like tha first
cuz im tha fuckin best an u a lil better than tha worst!

* it took him like 2 weeks to respond...
* razorbrain's aKA (cyce an razor r best friends)
*double meaning grounds meanin ground balls... an grounds meanin cofee grounds
*Precyce is hotta than most

his second verse not that it matters

Let me bring to you simple and plain/
don't let these breakdance cats have you thinking that you spittin them flames/
and end up getting scorched when you enter the game/
cause you could never be precyce even if you was sick with the aim/
my metaphors will have your body riddled with pain/
while you sit and explain to the readers why you mentioned his name/
"lockin ya upin tha trunk jus like ya "man" lock down*"/
only thing locked in the trunk is the heat after I pop rounds/
You say you bring the illness like SARS, small pox and the flu/
You could catch all three and I'd still be sicker than you/
You could claim you the best and I'm a lil better than the worst/
But I think fans will see different once my lyrics disperse/
so put your rhyme pad back in your purse/
a word of advice: its not hot if you gotta explain why its in the verse/

[noncentz]

HIT ME UP SO WE CAN COLLAB AAND REPOST THIS ON A SEPERATE THREAD SO PEPOPLE CAN READ IT

[Twenty6]

gimme a topic an ill spit when i get back from my baccalaurate

[Sand]

I like this..i like your
entire B girl type thing
you got going. all 4
elements you said..
nice...i wish i could
break...i do graff.
i rap. i dont DJ though
lol so 2 elements of
hip hop here. nice
drop

[Atetrack define']

haha...i do one element...wich im ill at....if i dont say so myself...i can be cocky i think....everyone else seems to be...but yeah i liked it twenty...you like erykah badu with all the elements of hip hop going on,cool...keep droppin im likin it...i seriously need to start my audio up agian...sorry thinin out loud here....anyways...liked it again twenty,do it in a seperate post eh. then mpre people will see that verse and not just the first...coz they alot of sleepers in here that dont take this shit seriously....its all blah...keep it up.

bismillah

[Twenty6]

thanx 4 tha compliments... i guess.. some one gimme a topic an ill spit a verse about it... or i can drop some mushy shit on yall hahahah

[your_end]

i read this before, not half bad, not bad at all...

vocab was cool... content, nice for me... all in all i liked it, keep it up femcee... peace



if you have tha time, or what not, peep my post "Perfect Picture" just a quick spit nothing too too ill.. peace