rhyme scheme n flow was dope. yer one of the few that ive actually saw multis from on this site, nice. i have nuthin much to criticize, i really enjoyed this piece. my fav lines:
‘‘and make this Earth - this world - crumble in my palms
while the few - still religious folk is mumblin' they psalms’’
hot ending, keep it up.‘‘so I'm crackin' down on this chunk of rock
wiping free the slate and killing the blunted cops
now see this world split and fall into a million pieces
without humans n animals theres world peace ’’