The Thoughts Before a Murder

[+Glich+]

wtf yo..

[GrimmyReaps]

hey white flame. can u look at ma rap entitled "I Should Be dead"

who u talkin 2 i aint white flame homie...i dont think glitch is either...who are u talking 2...

[White Dice]

i thought it said white flame. can u arate ma shit entitled "I Should Be Dead"

[Dyl]

Ok this was a nice piece and very wel structured.I liked a lot of the lines that you used and you showed some good imagery.Ya gota be a bit more creative though with your writing but only a lil bit.You used some nice grammer too always helps a OM to be dope and it worked here.Nice piece bro

[White Dice]

DYL can u rate ma shit?

[+Glich+]

don't freepost in here please

[+Glich+]

yo up real quick leave links too....

[competition]

I wasmnt feeling this your flow was good i dont uinderstand why u call yourself the multie prince when you dont use any imagery was wack(if any) and structure was kinda choppy it was short and it didnt really explain the situation as you should with this topic but otherwise i give it a 6-7/10

[+Glich+]

I wasmnt feeling this your flow was good i dont uinderstand why u call yourself the multie prince when you dont use any imagery was wack(if any) and structure was kinda choppy it was short and it didnt really explain the situation as you should with this topic but otherwise i give it a 6-7/10

Why would everyone else here disagree with you obviously your reading it wrong.....

[+Glich+]

thanx for that it was a topical battle though I didn't make this topic

[Dyl]

iight this was good.some nice imagery but could have been better also.You were creative with this piece,you stuck on track and didnt move completly off topic.I liked that.Structure was good also but open up your vocab even more,your vocab was good dont get me wrong but in some places you could have worded things better,but was a nice drop and enough to make it dope Lol

8.9/10

[+Glich+]

thank you Dyl...more feed please