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a day in paradise
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A day in paradise > LMFAO.. this should be funny
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LMFAO....
aight look... Will Smith Style..LOL nah only jokin...
i cant believe i'm fuckin rappin about a day in paradise//
now put me in your tape deck, rewind me so i say this twice//
i'm stuck on this bastard island but oh well the weather is nice//
at least i'm not stuck at home with your bitch an her head lice//
all i got with me is a porno mag and a jungle knife//
but thats all i need to live in a day of paradise//
i'm lying on a beach with waves and the sun like a rush//
not to mention all these bitches! man there gorgeous//
everyone come to my party theres enough for all of us//
but my day in paradise aint exatley with kids on a school bus//
so i'ma hit switch this verse and hit you with a chorus//
CHORUS
Its Just another day in paradise, its just another day for you an me in paradise//
i just wanna be here for the rest of my life, i dont care if i'm here without the wife//
coz i got bitches here with pussy sharper than a carving knife//
Its Just another day in paradise, its just another day for you an me in paradise//
i got a mic a beat an a raised stage, thats all i need to calm my rage//
this is paradise to me i'm in a cage, so shut your fuckin mouth if wanna turn the page//
i write some shit an spit it out like a dick to a sex slave,//
paradise is a microphone, i'll be here even after i'm in my grave//
well anyway i got places to see and people to do, i'm gone//
you can have the mic coz i'm through with my verse, 1 //
now you know that the mic is my paraside an i am number one//
now its your turn to tell me what paradise your from//
CHORUS
Its Just another day in paradise, its just another day for you an me in paradise//
i just wanna be here for the rest of my life, i dont care if i'm here without the wife//
coz i got bitches here with pussy sharper than a carving knife//
Its Just another day in paradise, its just another day for you an me in paradise//
nice soundin song lol eminem + will smith = Quik-$pit lol jk
I live a hard life but for one day I lived paradise//
On da beach wit a hoe, she really like my size//
As I take a sip of cavarsia she starts to rub me//
Then I look at da horizon an' realize I'm free//
Now I'm thinkin ~ I'm gettin to soft for dis shit//
I say fuck it I start ta lick her tit//
Then I'm lickin lower, an' lower till I reach down south//
Next thing ya now I'm lickin her clit softly ~ wit my mouth//
But you don't need ta know that~your day of paradise didn't have hoes front ta back//
Your just left wit your dick an' your ball sack//
Be sittin on tha beach all by yourself, dressed like a mutha fuckin fag//
Be jackin off and jerkin to your playgirl mag//
But me I'm in heaven an' have'n a nice day//
Now I'm wit my hoe thinkin of what ta say//
Then she comes out wit *RC* you have a nice body an' your so sex-e//
I just want you~an' need you~ to come fuck me//
On this very special day I took LL's advise//
paradise is very nice//
lol
gotta go with quik-spit on this
over all better verse even though it was fresh prince style.......
quiks had some creativity in it and better vocab etc
RC urs was alright but a bit simple and lacking in originality
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it's a bold statement - the new youtube
yea, fgee pretty much took tha words outta my mouf...
vote= quil
but for explanation...
quikspit had a better stlye, and i was feeling it way more
Quikspit defiantley took it with just an overall better piece, Not bad by both but Quik got it hands down..
Quik-$pit was more entertaining and had better wordplay
My vote:Quik-$pit
QUick wins.
you both came wack
just to let you know
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