MW Title - D.Zaster vs Untold (4-0)

[KempoMRK]

Step back, hop off, Cos i dont want you near me
Great minds think alike?.... You just killed off that theory
Concept was too simple IMO
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Your not dope, D shatters hope,Ill Smash this whore still
Got me thinking your a hypochondric.. the way only you think your ill
Not bad
Ive got this in the bag, D`ll smack you and give you stitches
So you can rest assure... onve Ive tied you up drowned you bitch
Nice, cool bar
Your ugly as fuck, Ive proved you wrong, but why lie still?
I never forget a face... But hopefully this time I will
So so
I know your gay, But try and stay stable
Cos bitch I only aint your type... Cos I aint inflatable
Nah

why i'm battlin this fuck, he doesn't even hold this title
'n canz ain't garbage, all his concepts are recycled
Not bad, cool wording
i battle here cause fl has no perks, its got'n worse
so its easy to say..
..ya work more than moderately resembles ya verse
Nah, not feeling
your not original and can't spit fire from scratch
he'd need a whole box to spark up a decent match
Played
dude ya go'n no where. ya verse is fragile and brittle
b'tween me 'n kempo, d stays stuck in the middle
Cool
your breath's garbage, but ur still not spit'n shit
s'i'll put ur head up ur ass..
..cause ur always speak'n out of it
Played

I thought Zaster took this. The rest assure line was cool, I was feeling that and he had a not bad bar and an ok bar. Untold had the stuck in the middle bar and recycled bar, if he had one more cool bar he'd have got this. But as it is Zaster gets the vote for consistency.

v/ D.Zaster

[Violent.]

Step back, hop off, Cos i dont want you near me
Great minds think alike?.... You just killed off that theory
Concept was too simple IMO
.
.
.
Your not dope, D shatters hope,Ill Smash this whore still
Got me thinking your a hypochondric.. the way only you think your ill
Not bad
Ive got this in the bag, D`ll smack you and give you stitches
So you can rest assure... onve Ive tied you up drowned you bitch
Nice, cool bar
Your ugly as fuck, Ive proved you wrong, but why lie still?
I never forget a face... But hopefully this time I will
So so
I know your gay, But try and stay stable
Cos bitch I only aint your type... Cos I aint inflatable
Nah

why i'm battlin this fuck, he doesn't even hold this title
'n canz ain't garbage, all his concepts are recycled
Not bad, cool wording
i battle here cause fl has no perks, its got'n worse
so its easy to say..
..ya work more than moderately resembles ya verse
Nah, not feeling
your not original and can't spit fire from scratch
he'd need a whole box to spark up a decent match
Played
dude ya go'n no where. ya verse is fragile and brittle
b'tween me 'n kempo, d stays stuck in the middle
Cool
your breath's garbage, but ur still not spit'n shit
s'i'll put ur head up ur ass..
..cause ur always speak'n out of it
Played

I thought Zaster took this. The rest assure line was cool, I was feeling that and he had a not bad bar and an ok bar. Untold had the stuck in the middle bar and recycled bar, if he had one more cool bar he'd have got this. But as it is Zaster gets the vote for consistency.

v/ D.Zaster

Ight 2-2

[Mr. Write]

D.Zaster

Step back, hop off, Cos i dont want you near me
Great minds think alike?.... You just killed off that theory
-ok, could use better wording
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Your not dope, D shatters hope,Ill Smash this whore still
Got me thinking your a hypochondric.. the way only you think your ill
-nah

Ive got this in the bag, D`ll smack you and give you stitches
So you can rest assure... onve Ive tied you up drowned you bitch
-aiight

Your ugly as fuck, Ive proved you wrong, but why lie still?
I never forget a face... But hopefully this time I will
-meh

I know your gay, But try and stay stable
Cos bitch I only aint your type... Cos I aint inflatable
-nice concept, wording was bad

it seemed like you rushed through your verse and didnt have time to word your punches correctly. i understand tho, its the fucking holidays. that last punch wouldve been dope as hell with better wording.

Untold

why i'm battlin this fuck, he doesn't even hold this title
'n canz ain't garbage, all his concepts are recycled
-aiight, it was played but had good wording

i battle here cause fl has no perks, its got'n worse
so its easy to say..
..ya work more than moderately resembles ya verse
-aiight

your not original and can't spit fire from scratch
he'd need a whole box to spark up a decent match
-decent, bad wording

dude ya go'n no where. ya verse is fragile and brittle
b'tween me 'n kempo, d stays stuck in the middle
-nah, didnt hit hard

your breath's garbage, but ur still not spit'n shit
s'i'll put ur head up ur ass..
..cause ur always speak'n out of it
-pretty good finisher

id say this match was fairly even, but i know both could have come better. i gave it to Untold for coming more consistant

v/ Untold

[Untold.]

aiight. 3-2, but d, you and i both know you dropped weak as hell.
so did i, but only cause u did. why?

[DaTrusHurtz]

Step back, hop off, Cos i dont want you near me
Great minds think alike?.... You just killed off that theory
I seen this before, but regardless, it was pretty nice
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Your not dope, D shatters hope,Ill Smash this whore still
Got me thinking your a hypochondric.. the way only you think your ill
flow was a bit off.. okay punch but nothing great
Ive got this in the bag, D`ll smack you and give you stitches
So you can rest assure... onve Ive tied you up drowned you bitch
rest assure was cool concept but you didn't use it well
Your ugly as fuck, Ive proved you wrong, but why lie still?
I never forget a face... But hopefully this time I will
eh, kinda weak
I know your gay, But try and stay stable
Cos bitch I only aint your type... Cos I aint inflatable
lol, kinda funny

vs.

why i'm battlin this fuck, he doesn't even hold this title
'n canz ain't garbage, all his concepts are recycled
can nameplays are gettin' played but aight
i battle here cause fl has no perks, its got'n worse
so its easy to say..
..ya work more than moderately resembles ya verse
Woulda hit better if dzaster had ever modded fl, but it was eh either way
your not original and can't spit fire from scratch
he'd need a whole box to spark up a decent match
really played, dunno if you knew that, sorry
dude ya go'n no where. ya verse is fragile and brittle
b'tween me 'n kempo, d stays stuck in the middle
I see where you were going, but not executed that well
your breath's garbage, but ur still not spit'n shit
s'i'll put ur head up ur ass..
..cause ur always speak'n out of it
Pretty played

Aight, neither person dropped as good as they can. Untold tho, if you thought DZaster dropped weak, you should have capitalized on it and taken the upset win. I don't think you really wrote enough to win here. 1 dope bar woulda maybe favored you, but I felt you came pretty played in this battle. You had a few personals that were aight, but nothing too special. DZaster came pretty meh too, but I liked his closer for whatever reason, his opener hit nicely even though i'd seen the concept before, and I felt he came more original and got this. It was a close battle tho, seems DZaster somehow gets in these close battles every week.

Vote - DZaster

[B.I.Detained.]

D.Zaster:
Step back, hop off, Cos i dont want you near me
Great minds think alike?.... You just killed off that theory

Untold:
why i'm battlin this fuck, he doesn't even hold this title
'n canz ain't garbage, all his concepts are recycled

Overall:
Not a bad match. But not enough quotables. Although both
of your quotes were good. D', your wording has got so much better.
Props for that. But your punches were a bit shit. cept for the
quoted. But I didn't see you trying to be honest. Untold, had some
decent ideas but just didn't get there, man. Your quote was cool
but somehow I just know that it has been said before.
I have to give it to someone and thats the person who wrote better.

Vote.Zaster

[Smoked Sage]

The ups defenatelly goes to D Zaster

[Violent.]

4-3.