Days of rage in Diarys

[Britty D]

Everyday page after page
I write about my days of rage
I just feel my life lock in a cage
Far far away for no mercery escape
My life is in a weary distorted shape
All I do is hide in a corner and pray
Until the day of my last disarray
I hope on day I will be safe and okay
I try to be joyful and show a happy portary
But it seem as if people can see my angery rage
I try keep my life left in the Lords trust
But I feel like my trust is left to be crushed
I feel like my life was nothing but rushed
Like crowded street of people being brushed
In my diary of rage I flush my heart from pain
I get filled with so much rage it feels somewhat feigned
I feel like my heart and soul is a rageful stained
Everything in my life is never easy but always constrained
Everyday Page after page I write about my days of rage

[Britty D]

Mercy............................................. .............lol dang i suck

[Britty D]

advice please......................

[WrEkOgNiZe]

"Everyday page after page
I write about my days of rage
I just feel my life lock in a cage
Far far away for no mercery escape
My life is in a weary distorted shape
All I do is hide in a corner and pray
Until the day of my last disarray
I hope on day I will be safe and okay"

dat part was perfect da rest kinda gotta work on
i like da flow do and da vocab is weak
but da best is da flow u had it nice u kept it on the subject
but also u aknt always stay wit da same word rhyming so dose r sum tips
from 1-10 ill gib u a 6