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I was really feeling dat piece i don't think u need to change anything 4 real the visions you were creating definatley stuck out in my head...keep up da good work
your structure was really good, and i didnt get lost in any of the words as tha storyline was pretty srtaight forward. Flow was nice, but as said in other replies, was a lil stretched... i loved tha imagery and i wuld have liked to see more of it...coz u left me hanging off everyline. Keep droppin, wanna see more lol
ha an image master fosho.. i can see this
yes.. i like the flow its solid...nice story n all just maybe needs sum multies to liven up the inner line.. lots of good rhymes still so it is way more than merely decent
keep at it
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