,....................no dout this was some good wordplay flow was nice
ontop of subject is tha key ,...........an it aint easy wit mix emotion,........overall it was an 8/10 in my eyes,........holla at ya some more keep it up B....PEACE
,....................no dout this was some good wordplay flow was nice
ontop of subject is tha key ,...........an it aint easy wit mix emotion,........overall it was an 8/10 in my eyes,........holla at ya some more keep it up B....PEACE
...............$...DJ-C-money...$................. :eek2:
much appreciated man.
UP UP UP
very good, nice structure.. it was simple in a way but you had some nice vocab and it was all good, enjoyed it, but it was kinda short my nig.. great job on this
THE FAMILY.
Pretty solid piece. The structure was good. For an audio, you might want to add more, or get somebody and make it a collab. It you add maybe build up the story with what happened earlier. Your style of describing shows some promise, a concept I thought was good was God as a herbivore, caus you weren't dieing. Keep it up.
Please drop feed on my friend's piece, it's getting slept on.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=224626
aight d00d, ill go check it out.
much appreciated on this feedback.
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Nice drop, but definately needed more multis and some more wordplay. Was kinda simple too, but you brought some originality to it. In my opinion it needs alot more complexity and mabye a more shocking end to stand out. Overall good drop nothing really blew me away, but it was an ok verse. Also thanks for the feedback on my piece it was really getting slept on for a while.
it was good fam
its cool bout the feed Sammy B.
thanks for hitting me back. and i guess thanks Jay-P lol.
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