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Thread: hey...somone tell me wut ya think of deez rhymes

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    hey...somone tell me wut ya think of deez rhymes

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    im rockin tha blue an whyte, new york fitted cap, twist back//
    keep jibberin jabberin, talkin that shit might gitchu clapped//
    they dunno who it could be, not even who it might be//
    but we kno its Rhyme Skeme, dont even try to stop me//
    its like a paper chase, tha way im gittin this money//
    how can ya be a playa when i jus fucked ya honey//
    i aint from tha ATL or tha CPT//
    but when ya hear this track, HA, ya kno its me//
    all this rap shit, it aint jus a hobby//
    if ya didnt make an appointment, git back in tha lobby//
    i aint got enuf tyme to deal witcha shit//
    i got shit to do, bitch i gotsta handle my biz//
    drop down an git ya eagle, fuck that//
    real mothafuckas pull up they pants an lean back//
    universal souljaz, we will drill ya//
    fuck wit my la familia i will kill ya//

    now be truthful...if ya didnt like it let me kno an tell me how to improve...but if yer jus gon hate cuz im wyte...dont say shit

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    shiiiit dats good

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    hey...thnx girl...anybody else got some criticism(sp)?
    Last edited by Ryan; March 19th, 2005 at 09:00 PM

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    wait for one sec wtf don't you read what you click does this not say Members Graphics!!! go to open mic

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    oops...o well... im jus tryin to git heard thats all...my mic is fucked up rite now so...plus, u aint have to read it so dont worry bout where i put my shit

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    The only problem I see with your rap is that I think you should try to be good and not suck.

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