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    deine mutter BeRLin`S BesT's Avatar
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    A Walk Around The Block ( J6F & BB )

    Johnny 6 Feet

    i took a walk round my block one hazy afternoon
    stoned already, had a glaze to get fractured soon
    i saw a lady with her kids, yelling at the top of her voice
    beating the biggest one, about to be dropping her boys
    i saw a front yard with a broken sofa, newspaper littered
    rusted metal, pavement cracks, practically blistered
    i felt the paranoia set in, i felt like retching
    no sense of pride in my environment, it was only guesting
    i saw a junkie stretched flat out, begging for change
    i couldn't fund his habit so... let him remain
    i guess its the same shit, different city, same planet
    so escape is impossible, from this insane granite
    but damn it, i wasn't out for ten fucking minutes
    til i turned on my heels, retreated, ducked and finished
    went back to my mattress, another joint rolled
    and puffed away my troubles from this disjointed road


    HOOK:
    as I walk around my block I flip up the upper lip
    n put a spliff up in the slit....puff puff that shit


    DrztiC aka BB

    I see a kid piss on a tree with a sick twist
    Listenin to a limp bizkit cd, shakin his hip, twistin his pee
    I stay distant indeed don’t wanna get pissed on in these
    all whites
    continue walking n see MTV shoot a new episode of dismissed
    all guys...ehhh
    they all white...yea right let me finish the cliche
    each one wearin’ tights, bitchin’ n fightin
    tryin to be impolite and sayin’: “he’s straight”
    kidz playin’ soccer on the street.....I tell em plz wait
    too late another kid’ deflated on the speedway
    these days each day my block displays more facades
    I thought I locked the door but still my whore escaped
    I see a dog starin at a wall like he got x-rays
    But he just popped his second X straight
    Off chasin’ his black shade till he gets jacked
    By gangsta cats who pimp slap his plaque face
    Couple more steps and I’m back safe in the building
    Yet won’t get safe as a feeling
    Matter of fact I’m more afraid to get plated by the ceiling...


    HOOK:
    as I walk around my block I flip up the upper lip
    n put a spliff up in the slit....puff puff that shit


    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176403
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=176592
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    deine mutter BeRLin`S BesT's Avatar
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    stop sleepin' drop links and we'll return the fuckin favor...pz
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    Magnificent Flow
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    Alright Man Nice Piece I Liked The Hook The Second Verse Was Alright, Try And Up On Your Vocabulary Though Both Of You Got Some Fire Here, For Real Maybe We Should Do An Collab Sometime Hommies, Any Way This Piece Was Nice 8/10

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    ayo man dats sum nice shit...shuda made it an audio, i kno it wud sound nice dog
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    nice shit son.....Liked the 2nd verse betta....Hit up one of my battles or leave feedback on my Open Mic

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    favors will be returned as I promised....thank y'all for the luv....keep that comin'...pz
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    deine mutter BeRLin`S BesT's Avatar
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    some feed plz...
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    uppin this^ turned out nice again

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    can we plz get some feed...
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    this was a nice piece....nice imagery,nice concept, n nice collabo..... both verses were coo .... vocab could of been a lil better but it didnt effect the drop good shit would like to see some more collabos from u guys ...... return the favor

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=177836

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    GhettoFabolous
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    Aye wuzz up doggs?

    This wasnt ur best verse Berlin, i done seen u drop some madd hot shit wit multis n errything like our OM. U still came aiight on it, some lines was better then others jus dint feel alot of what u said. Johnny u got madd imagery in there wit facts bout shit, i could relate to alot of it. Especially bout tryna smoke ur troubles away. Good emotion.

    Overall, nice piece fellas.



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