...guilt...

[demonseed]

You linger on me like gasoline.
No matter how much I wash you away, you stain... yet seem clean.
I wish you away every single night,
yet Im impaled by your scent each dawns early light.
Each memory fades, then rejuvenates awake.
I shrug you off, but the thought of you haunts me with shakes.
I cant sneak away or play you out.
No matter what I lie, or setup, you seem to figure out.
Break them mirrrors, and all the lamps.
Like a shadow you trail, and burrow deep in my gut like ... shit cramps.
No matter what I say, you knew all along.
No matter what I recollect ...you still remind me the wrong.
No penance can be granted for such sins you dismiss.
I should ve never went after that forbidden kiss.

[Mesmerize]

wow, this one was pretty good. You had some great imagery in this, as well as emotion, along with a little humor yet also good similies and metaphores. Very nice work, i really liked this one. Nice choice of words. Keep at it.

peace,
Mez

[M_Familitia]

set up a battle and battle me please,i really wanna battle,no poet battles(pet peeve)

[demonseed]

thanks mez...and we'll have to talk M_fam-pac!
>PAc was deeply seeded influence for me growing up. Especially being a ghetto stricken confused white kid, who knew nothing but his elements...but saw through media hype.
Tell me where, and I will play.
>thanks again mez...gotta appreciate lifes blunders and antics!

[p O e T i Q u E]

You had good emotion and i liked the way it flowed. i was feeling this keep droppin

[demonseed]

thanks TP...i appreciate the support and feel!