Here's the joke.

[spokenoh]

I’m ugly.
The ugly kid.
I am the proof that
God’s humour lives.
I’m confined to the classroom
And the silver lining is the bass boom.
I’m ugly.
The ugly kid
With the pimply face -
at the corners of this paradox I live.
Distraught in thought and mind
Brought to life through God’s design.
I’m ugly
And I face an even uglier reality.
Where double-digits
Are the people of industrial faculties.
The thread of our Turin Shroud tangles
At the differences of our demons and angels.
It’s all ugly.
Both the chosens one
And constantine(s)
Use their religion as a loaded gun.

The world’s mentality has been so serious
I think we all need a good joke
How about we read the Bible or go to Church
Just like you Christian folk

Why don’t you speak in tongues
To show me the epitome of an idiot

Nothing sinks deeper in
Than a pasty-white, red-haired, left-handed
Canadian.

Here’s the joke.

[Truth.]

LOL....wow this honestly was a very good read, not only for it's humour but for thr seriousness of it. I think this was witty and very intelligent. wow...This is seriously one of the best pieces i have ever read...damn

Excellent job.

[sNoopfox]

Quality job...not very accurate on ur church knowledge though

[SimonSays]

!!LMFAO!!

[MythDirection]

funny witty and it came out honest
you seemed to whirl it all up in imagery to get those great rhyming parts
but it all worked out great

not sure why this has anything to do with church knowledge

[un_conscious_one]

i atually liked it, thought the word choice at some parts coulda been alot better, laughed a few times though

[demonseed]

yeah..i re-read this piece like 3 times to laugh. honestly, I dig this cut!
not that i am packing hot credentials..but I deffinately up this concept. Defiant, yet shy as all hell...in a LOUD broadcasted way. WERD!

QUOTE>
Nothing sinks deeper in
Than a pasty-white, red-haired, left-handed
Canadian.


heheh im a american dog...but thats ill. I like it

[spokenoh]

Leave real replies shitheads.

[Prince Escobar]

^No, i am the master of the fake reply...
Obviously not meant to be your best work Pinny, the overlying humor worked well evidently, no real point in technically reviewing this, you got your point across and i think that above all else was the point of this piece, in that regard, good job, 1luv.