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    "One of a kind"

    "ONE OF A KIND"

    I've elevated 2 become one of a kind, even though my patience strained dated wit no statements created 2 even try 2 reply/
    So I hand u my eyes,without tha misleading path of disguise... and grant u incite into tha real life of a true mastermind.....

    I was raised deprived, without my own mom or dad 2 stand beside 2 say they have a child they could glamorize and teach me how 2 distinguish what was considered bad advice and actually possess a life/
    I was sent from house 2 house left neglected, town 2 town never new tha section, I mean i was just a kid why did my innocence already have 2 encounter over barring tensions/
    Wit my shoulders carrying boulders through tha trenches, a premature solidier tha pain and strains seemed endless/
    Wit no protection i knocked my mind senseless, a survival mechanism i contraepted just 2 survive and not fall off these edges/
    God blessing became effective praying 2 god every night 2 prepare me a place in heaven cuz i could no longer tolerate tha face of someone who had no reflection/...
    And through time i became tangled and i descended, my hope scrammbled and cemented, heart of stone i projected cuz my angle in this dimension was immune wit no crevice 4 this ruthless and relentless hate 2 find a way 2 get in, so i became numb with out a single feeling 2 be detected, i was completely reinvented a devilish sense surrounded wit barb wire fences, in maximum security cuz like a virgin pussy tha new me could never be penetrated wit a single trace of hatred that could inflict me into depressive state of painstakes/so i close my eyes and pray, and wait for tha day I face these demons,... and change my way 2 embrace what god has laid and awake cuz im just sleeping/
    TO BE CONTINUED..............................

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    highly appreciate your post up keep them comming

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    Wow... pretty good. I dunno why I was expecting wack poetry but it was actually pretty dope lol, Keep dropping. Tre was right....sick vocab.

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    Appreciate post up

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