week 2 - Dev vs. Liquid Content

[R. Frost]

Topic: I Was Insitutionalized
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Check Ins Due Wednesday Verses Due Friday

[Endeva.]

check

[R. Frost]

Check... And yo if you want help wit setting up the battles and getting topics then i will help you out and you can just close them and mod them until i get modded

[R. Frost]

yup yup yup no more verse til dev spits his... Yup Yup Yup

[Endeva.]

You should look at life’s lessons as blessings in disguise
They’re addressing the real problems before they arise
Cos…
…I Was first Institutionalized for my compulsive lies
That was June… rehabilitated by the following July
Id have rather died cos inside the first month killed me
But I tried to ride it out, cos t’was a while til I’d be free
I was quarantined from society, I had no key to escape
So I tried to see the positive side, me getting back into shape
I took the pills, the opiates, and soon I lost the shakes
Things began to make sense, my mind ran awake
At night I lied in await of the day id be released
In a state of anticipation, they told me ‘in a week’
I couldn’t speak, for the next seven days I lay amazed
Then it came…
…….And I was praised for my positive displays
I wasn’t phased about being placed back in society
After all I was only suffering from temporary insanity

I was released… and it was going well…

Then One day I collapsed in relapse, this time worse
The first time was like a warning, this time was the curse
Bells chimed in my head, voices told me to hurt
Again I was confined to white rooms, with a nurse
While Doctors conversed over the words I was saying…
…The way I was displaying what my inner voice was playing
It was decaying, it was a drain on my body and mind
Though at the time I was blind through the illness’s bind
I couldn’t find the way out, all the signs were mixed up
My feet were stuck in the mud… I was totally fucked!
Outta luck, brain corrupt, put in cuffs and sectioned
With enough medication to knock out an elephant
So much I thought I was president…….
So this time they were hesitant about me getting well
I fell so deep inside myself, my body was only a shell
With echo’s from hell, where I dwelled for 4 years
Mostly with empty stares, in analytical care
From Egotistical docs trying to repair what’s not there
Then the skies faired… it was déjà vu, like a pattern

I was released… and again I was laughing…

18 months later I was on a date, wining and dining
Try’na create a romantic ambiance, for a sure fire thing
The candles were shining, my desire was blinding
I was Finding love for the first time, the feeling was great
Thought it was binding… then I filled up with hate
I Smashed a plate on her face, blood showered the place
Chanting ‘grace’ I paced back and forth filled with rage
Guess what?…………. I was put back in the cage
With the same doctors, just another page in my file
By now the pages had compiled to form quite a pile
This time the doctor didn’t smile or even look at me
You see it was his daughter I killed, and it was he who set me free
It was his responsibility, he had 2 chances and didn’t learn
So yes I’ll burn in hell…… but his is long term
Yearning for his daughter that he put to slaughter
Cos by releasing me he signed her death order

His life lesson wasn’t a blessing in disguise
Cos he didn’t learn the first time, so a problem did arise
His daughter died, now he just sits and cries
Until one day he decided to commit suicide…
left a letter saying……..
……………‘This time keep him institutionalized’

[R. Frost]

Stealing my shit... Shame on you

See If you can imagine this...here's the scene....
i'm on probation already for a year...
i go to the mall with some friends and
they get busted for shoplifting...because
i'm with them, i take the fall as well....
and i had a weed pipe in my pocket
now i'm going to court and probly going to
jail so i get fucked up all the time...till it's
almost time for court, fail a piss test...
testing positive for meth, then in a desperate
measure, i admit myself to a mental institution
for detox...hoping it will keep me out of jail

so it starts

Written The Night I Admitted Myself


i'm trapped in these confines..laying inside..
all the main that lies...within my own mind..
got a black bag, lack smokes, wish that i had
contemplating how the FUCK i'm stuck in rehab
so sad, mind wanders, what the hell am i to do
melt glass, see smoke pass, can i make it through
slowly inhale a little bit as the pipe gets a little warmer
cup the flame to make the heat last sitting in the corner
a mourner turned victim...all cuz i let the high slip in...
dangle and flip, as i slowly gaze at what i've written..
fit in, i doubt it, i'm in a world that's really not my own..
twin beds...and a stranger..but 3 days i call it home..
never alone, constantly watched anger never dissapating..
patiently waiting, staff gazing, always anticipating...
fearing i'll try and hurt myself, suicide being the worst thing
and i admitted myself, look at the craziness this world brings
heart stops thinkin, 3 dasy left, and my world is DETOX
meth amphetamine coerced me, slowly see my mind lock
thinkin of past times..i sit and write rhymes to ease the time
give up on pipe dreams, for they will never free my mind
waiting for the greenlight, so i can stoke up in the sunlight
to toke up's against principal, so i write under the moonlight
look for scars, none on my outer skin, they lacerate my brain
constricted questions circle me, they're marking at my name
not a game, this is real life...so i pray in restitution
stay the execution....i dont' wanna be in jail...
......so instead i'm in a MENTAL INSTITUTION!......



What Would You Do?





to help -
melt glass - meth is glass shards, smoked out of a glass pipe
waiting for the greenlight - have to be green level to smoke

[R. Frost]

uppin for vote fuckers Stop Sleeping... And Dev you fucker you took my concept becuase i had my verse up before and you read it yoiu bitch

[Sublime D]

dev did not steal your concept...

Dev-

wow...this was amazing..the best ss verse i've ever read...your imagery was amazingly vivid...everythign abotu this was amazing...the story was very creative....very welle xecuted..your rhymign was sensational...this was just sublime and i will nominate this for legends...amazing job dev....

iknoevel...this was good...but nto great....this woudl be a good match against most psoted in here...but...dev completely killed you man...your structure wasn't as tight...your flow wasn't as tight...your story wasn't as interesting and your imagery wasn't as vivid...

vote - dev

[Endeva.]

dev wins 1-0