Damn nice shit... you keept it short ... shit was depressing
as hell... i enjoyed reading this man... keep up the good
work... you got some skill...
i rate this a 7.5/10
Damn nice shit... you keept it short ... shit was depressing
as hell... i enjoyed reading this man... keep up the good
work... you got some skill...
i rate this a 7.5/10
Imagery was very good - the picture came across clearly - scheme was decent - a different setup than you used before - I liked the last four lines best for some reason... - only thing that I had a question about is that you started it out by saying that you killed yourself via slitting your wrists - yet further into the passage you descibed sitting against the door with a knife to your throat - anywho - nice to see ya back - peace
ah,man i was already infected,but i have to say this was a dope pieace.
You dont normally die from slitting your wrists.Originally Posted by Nephil
You can pass out from the pain, the blood loss, or just the sight of blood if you are squeemish.
Hope that clears it up.
Thanks for the replies people.
Efusive - whats your name been changed from? What did it used to be?
Peace.
dats sum good shit. glad i read dis man. u got dope skills man.