Free Association of sorts, in ('E'minor)...

[Spoken Word]

splash me on a page as a living verse
couple me with fervor and watch me inspire
painted expressions, exuberant in nature
lead me to a voice...pantomime choises
and forced decoys speak when associated
a plaid skirt with an apparent name...displays
betrayal in my lineage...blood-stained grains
but the being in my every fiber knows...
it knows
but I don't know
so why, with this new~found lost~cause can I not meet with the plausible?
the meek are fallible, with tangible needs they scurry
in a flurry of paragons and flustered partitions
how do you create?
I cannot...
these fences break down defensless communication
...no matter how white~washed
and I watch as my community grasps the coin in coincidence
...but can they coincide?
I can't even do my laundry without my T-shirts being bled on...
an array of pink tinged memories displayed for who?
In the cycle, a wet and bewildered version of 'I' sits, while I watch...
"will you just stand by and..."
...and what?
I can't even stand alone as an individual...
but if I could...could you believe I would...
and if you believe...then should...
should I stand idle~by and wittness the atrocities of man~kind
slip between my...declarative sentences?
Is it my choice?
my word is mine and my eyes are not...
or maybe I own them, but the images are sub~contracted...
the air is filled with them
and i can't peice them together to form an objected perspective
my ancestors scream in rage, and you show me how they lived?
splash me on a page, because that's all I have left
...is it right?
is it right for me to inspire?
...or should I insite...




MiNdLeSs drops some shit:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=118592

[Civilized Rebel]

Way over my head. Too creative. Keep it up.

[aSap iLL]

i really didnt get it that much... sorry

[Neruda II]

Wow, honestly one of the most creative pieces I've read on RB. It really is above my comprehension. It doesn't seem to be about only one topic but many topics all thoughts that scurry through your genius lil' head. I'm not quite sure what the message is because there is too much to decypher. Very good non the less.

I can't really say anything about the technical aspects because this is structured and read like nothing that have ever seen. All I can say is that the vocabulary was excellent and that the way you worded your lines were very original.

Return the favor. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...61#post1425361

[Mesmerize]

Wow, that was very impressing. I mean it went way over my head too,but poetry is something that is not always meant to be understood by others. Keep it up. I would like to see more peices like that. Very interesting.