There is no, my friends, no light
Not even a dim dying vanishing light
There is no match for a candle light
We're travelling on a very dark horizon
We don't see the signs of peace
Nor do we hear the force of our reason
We're in for more unholy armageddon
My people this is a painful existance
Accepting a warlord without resistance
^^^this is poem is dedicated to soldiers in africa fighting for freedom.
Once again No Love....lol
Simple. A bit hard to 'get' sometimes. But when you explained what it was about, it felt strong to me.
The African situation is dire. Very dire. You just have to look at the recent thing in Zimbabwe/Equatorial Guinea with the mercenaries to see that.
Nice.
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I apreciate it yes i heard about the Zimbabwe situation really dire like u said but thnx for the good feedback.
decent drop... i wasn't feeling it too much, it was too general and vague for me to really get into it though. by I like the idea and approach (piece on africa), but not alot of people on this site know half of whats happening in any country in africa. Keep up.
"life is a game, you have to choose a side to play
if i gotta pick a position, i'mma pick missionary."
Yes u right man not alot of people know that poverty level is increasing innocent children dying because of diseases and hunger.
Simple..Yet..a good message behind it...this was a nice little poem...
Thanks
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it was iight ..could have been better in the flow.....descent rhymes ....
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^^love the Dirty Souf..lol Thnx and Resp.
lol^^^ thankz alot man much respect
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