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    [Fair Trade.]

    Some Work for Little, While others do Little for Work
    Bones Become Brittle, Then their backs Cripple Worse
    Unwanted Torture, Yet Mumbles haven't Tore-Chores
    Debated actions outcomes to Not help, with More For
    For More, Scoured Laws Don't give them Enough Help
    The rich has the Decision, Visions to Buff their Wealth
    Has Derision to Stuff the Health of Innocent Children
    Govermenst Have & Now been saying we ' Will Then '
    You Kill Men, Starve Kids, Then act like they Par | Dial
    False connection, Conception Like Eminem Laid | Rap
    I Say That, Becuase your minipulated and Not Aware
    If you see the Efforts Cheap you would Stop n' Stare
    Hairs Shocked, Scares Proped like Jodie Marsh Boob
    Big Harsh News, Its Real that many people are Killed
    Through the Lack of Appeal so they can Scarp a Meal
    They're From where Food From thats on Your Tongue
    That One Swallow, The crumb that follows in the Gum
    Would Stop them Dying in heat thats Got them Frying
    Like your Chips Cooking, Let Alone, The Trips Booking
    They have to arrange, To get little money, Fo' the Kids
    To be poorly educated, Surely dedicated in Mo' to Live

    So help them, Seriously.
    They want to be helped, You must Help.
    Pot` Ed.

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    And this faggot got Butterflies in his stomach the size of Mothra

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    One fist to your eye'll make it go through that black album remix phase. - Saviour Arraign

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    it was a ok piece vocab was good multi's ok flow ok punch ight wordplay ok over all 6/10

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    yeah good piece i thought.......good flow going....some nice internals n metas...good to see more complexity, the last couple i read lacked....flow was on point yeah good drop....pZ......
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