14 lines
No bitin...etc.etc
Drop when you can, i'ma drop in a few hours..
..when i get back from work
Chrit
Twizzle Stix
14 lines
No bitin...etc.etc
Drop when you can, i'ma drop in a few hours..
..when i get back from work
In
AI
Keyin up....
like Retards Trying To Moonwalk steppin to me was a Stupid Move
Il twist your face more times than the Colour Blind playing Rubix Cube
Pay me my dues,sorry..your so poor when i knocked u said Ding!
I asked if he was gonna bring it...he said i aint got nuthin to bring.
saw u in Footlocker u ran out wit a pair of And1s,at a quick pace.
But They caught you when ya went back...to ask for the mixtape.
Chrits great?, nah his text is illegable RB just gives him...
....the benefit of the doubt.
you were uncertain about this match,now your a merk squaddie...
....Gettin Thrownback out.
Chrits leavin text, elevated beyond description about to outgrow
Word, i cant describe your skill...but sayin its sick..i dont think so
Leaving you stunned,hypochondria's the one disease I havent got
Where as You have hearing AIDS fucked within your earshot
Dam,you hurtin more than ill ment's victim of child abuse
This guy a thug? come on you took a cup to go see Juice...
......
Hmm...
Aight...
Keying...
Love that Van Wilder cream filling...no wonder you and fgee are underdogs
Punches bout leave ya face with more bumps than blind kids report cards
I'd say you fell off... But my dick is the only thing you've ever been on...
TS reminds me alot of Tupac... Liked alot better when he's gone...
Leave you broken down in SAABS... Like pissed off Swedeish motorists...
It must be a shot to the ego knowing the only respected TS is The Specialist
Twizzle Sticks, addlib, Monfkish, T Pound? Which are you dude?....
And by looking at ya girls strap on... its true...
....There's alot of bitch in you
Destroy duke... Bout to son... hell even daughter and nephew this kid...
Man ya prewrites are makin less sense than a drunken mad lib
Its done did...
Rockin yours with punches while you're just givin head...
Twizzle could never top this board... Even with a sticky thread...
You aint even a contender... So why ever challenge the site champ?...
Especially when ya gut check bounced...
...you came back with food stamps
And done...
Forgot this was even here...
Oh well
AI
Chrit stole this one, althoth TS had some lines that had me laughin,
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Crit I'd say you fell off... But my dick is the only thing you've ever been on...
TS reminds me alot of Tupac... Liked alot better when he's gone
TS like Retards Trying To Moonwalk steppin to me was a Stupid Move
Il twist your face more times than the Colour Blind playing Rubix Cube
Good battle, but im going with crit
vote:chrit
nice battle : /
first off Twizzle Stix: Man you can come ALOT harder than that..ive seen u come much stronger..i dont know what u were doing u didnt come strong at all which gave Chrit the upper hand
ur best line:
Chrits great?, nah his text is illegable RB just gives him...
....the benefit of the doubt.
you were uncertain about this match,now your a merk squaddie...
....Gettin Thrownback out.
Chrit: Nice verse although like TS i have seen u come much harder but because u had more punches/ personals i think u took this..weak battle for people at ur standerds..im smelling a rematch lol
best line:
Rockin yours with punches while you're just givin head...
Twizzle could never top this board... Even with a sticky thread...
vote= Chrit
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Twizzle Stix:
like Retards Trying To Moonwalk steppin to me was a Stupid Move
Il twist your face more times than the Colour Blind playing Rubix Cube
nice opener^^^
Pay me my dues,sorry..your so poor when i knocked u said Ding!
I asked if he was gonna bring it...he said i aint got nuthin to bring.
How wack is that^^^
saw u in Footlocker u ran out wit a pair of And1s,at a quick pace.
But They caught you when ya went back...to ask for the mixtape.
Chrits great?, nah his text is illegable RB just gives him...
....the benefit of the doubt.
you were uncertain about this match,now your a merk squaddie...
....Gettin Thrownback out.
^^^ aight i guess
Chrits leavin text, elevated beyond description about to outgrow
Word, i cant describe your skill...but sayin its sick..i dont think so
^^^ nice
Leaving you stunned,hypochondria's the one disease I havent got
Where as You have hearing AIDS fucked within your earshot
^^^ WACK!!!!
Dam,you hurtin more than ill ment's victim of child abuse
This guy a thug? come on you took a cup to go see Juice...
^^ corney... but it works i guess...
Then
Chrit
Love that Van Wilder cream filling...no wonder you and fgee are underdogs
Punches bout leave ya face with more bumps than blind kids report cards
Dope Opener...^^^
I'd say you fell off... But my dick is the only thing you've ever been on...
TS reminds me alot of Tupac... Liked alot better when he's gone...
^^^ you making fun of me?... naa it was a aight line....
Leave you broken down in SAABS... Like pissed off Swedeish motorists...
It must be a shot to the ego knowing the only respected TS is The Specialist
motorists and speicallist dont rhyme... but it can work .. decent
Twizzle Sticks, addlib, Monfkish, T Pound? Which are you dude?....
And by looking at ya girls strap on... its true...
....There's alot of bitch in you
going gutta!!... nice
Destroy duke... Bout to son... hell even daughter and nephew this kid...
Man ya prewrites are makin less sense than a drunken mad lib
Its done did...
again decent...
Rockin yours with punches while you're just givin head...
Twizzle could never top this board... Even with a sticky thread...
Real Nice
You aint even a contender... So why ever challenge the site champ?...
Especially when ya gut check bounced...
...you came back with food stamps
Dope closer Too... ^^^
And that is It.. this was a kinda weak battle for the most part....
sorry bout your ego chrit.. just being honest..
but you still gona Win This...
flow.. Tie both choppy..
structure...again choppy but a tie..
multi's.. TS
punches.. Chrit
personals.. Chrit
meti's...chrit
Vote Chrit...
"oNlY gOd CaN jUdGe mE"...........
2-0
AI
^^^^ jus coz he from 2002 it dunt count___hate peeps like that
aight breakdown-
punches=chrit...edged it
personals=ts..like some similies,nice]
flow=both...showed exp
structure=both..dunt matter
sustainment=both..carried
metas=ts
enjoyment=.....hard to ask..both
vote=ts
why?
chrit in late always seems rushed
dont know why but he can pull shit outta the bag wen rushed but he dint
......stop worrying bout other shit chrit n focus on the battle in hand
i know ya gonna complain n hate on me 4 votin gainst ya but ya jus dint hold it up 2day...Lib had more
pz
shit i posted this already & it didnt work.. so a quicker rundown.,..
puinches - lib/ TS
liked the mixtape line.
punches from lib harder hitting./..
personals - only one i remember as sticking out.. the throwback one...dope... hard hitting again...
flow- tie...
TS's verse hit harder here, punches stood out & beat chrit this time.
vote = ts
LMAO
2-2???
WTF?
AI
Twizzle came pretty decent here...no doubt....but Chrit pulled out
the win wit his wordplay and punches...and used more personals
then u did...i'm not even sure if u had some...oh well...
vote=Chrit
Chrits leavin text, elevated beyond description about to outgrow
Word, i cant describe your skill...but sayin its sick..i dont think so
^Ruined ur verse
Wasnt all great anyway
Chrits sucked too, could tell he didnt try
But he had way more similes. A few Metaphors. I give him a 7/10 on his verse
I give The other dude a 5
Peace Out
Eh 13th, U still got beef wit me?
4-2
AI
Twizzle Stix
like Retards Trying To Moonwalk steppin to me was a Stupid Move
Il twist your face more times than the Colour Blind playing Rubix Cube
/\ /\tight opener...coulda been worded better
Pay me my dues,sorry..your so poor when i knocked u said Ding!
I asked if he was gonna bring it...he said i aint got nuthin to bring.
/\/\1st line piece of shit...2nd sweet maybe saved the bar to make it decent
saw u in Footlocker u ran out wit a pair of And1s,at a quick pace.
But They caught you when ya went back...to ask for the mixtape.
/\/\hahah this was funny...nice
Chrits great?, nah his text is illegable RB just gives him...
....the benefit of the doubt.
you were uncertain about this match,now your a merk squaddie...
....Gettin Thrownback out.
/\/\ that was ill wordplay, multi, personal, and a punchline...sweet
Chrits leavin text, elevated beyond description about to outgrow
Word, i cant describe your skill...but sayin its sick..i dont think so
/\/\decent
Leaving you stunned,hypochondria's the one disease I havent got
Where as You have hearing AIDS fucked within your earshot
/\/\blah
Dam,you hurtin more than ill ment's victim of child abuse
This guy a thug? come on you took a cup to go see Juice...
/\/\decent
Chrit
Love that Van Wilder cream filling...no wonder you and fgee are underdogs
Punches bout leave ya face with more bumps than blind kids report cards
/\/\nice
I'd say you fell off... But my dick is the only thing you've ever been on...
TS reminds me alot of Tupac... Liked alot better when he's gone...
/\/\eh...decent
Leave you broken down in SAABS... Like pissed off Swedeish motorists...
It must be a shot to the ego knowing the only respected TS is The Specialist
/\/\decent personal...im not so sure it rhymed though
Twizzle Sticks, addlib, Monfkish, T Pound? Which are you dude?....
And by looking at ya girls strap on... its true...
....There's alot of bitch in you
/\/\ punch personal...nice
Destroy duke... Bout to son... hell even daughter and nephew this kid...
Man ya prewrites are makin less sense than a drunken mad lib
Its done did...
/\/\1st was tight...2nd kinda forced multie and not good
Rockin yours with punches while you're just givin head...
Twizzle could never top this board... Even with a sticky thread...
/\/\sweet
You aint even a contender... So why ever challenge the site champ?...
Especially when ya gut check bounced...
...you came back with food stamps
/\/\killer closer yo
opener-chrit...barely
closer-chrit
punches-twizzle sticks...just hit harder
personals-twizzle
wordplay-tie
vocab-eh...?
creativity-twizzle
overal-twizzle...
no hate props to both i just think twizzle edged it
hope i get no beef from this shit
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