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  1. October 24th, 2003, 05:03 AM #1
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    Watch Out

    uh-oh...watch out...King of Thievez is on the mic again...
    ready to bring the pain to ya brain...go grab ya Vicatin...
    steady bringin' change to the game...when I write with pens...
    heavy metal bringin' flamez to ya frame...when I'm snipin' men...
    enlightenment is shared to those who are gettin' fundz to merk mc'z...
    I bring insight to men who dared to get close to gettin' sunned like Mercury...
    I purposly write for kidz who try to throw punchez but nervously strike and miss...
    who think they hard cause they scurry and fight in fits but I hurry...spit spiteful shit...
    ya damn clownz...I only give my manz poundz...
    you sell gramz crushed...when I hand poundz...
    son...if ya soft ass ain't gonna stand up...then stand down...
    throw ya handz up...now put ya handz down...

    ^^^keystyle...I'm on some different flow shit in this...the flow changez every time the line lengths start gettin' different...
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  2. October 24th, 2003, 06:54 AM #2
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    yeah i liked the style, had to read it a couple of times to get the flow but was good, some nice multis and i liked the message, i take it you dont like herbs....lol....some good shit, keep it up...peace ma dawg
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  3. October 24th, 2003, 11:24 AM #3
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    NO YO HE WAS CONFESSING TO BE A HERB....LOL
    I SHOULDNT HAVE TO COMMENT BUT I WILL OUT OF CREW OBLIGATION....LOL
    IT WAS A SOLID PEACE YOU ELIVATE SO MUCH I CAN NEVER WAITE TO READ THE NEXT POST TWIN
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
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  4. October 25th, 2003, 02:23 AM #4
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    ^^^...
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  5. October 25th, 2003, 03:25 AM #5
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    haha yea yea, this shit was hot. I liked how you started it off....it realy drew my eye and shit. Nice drop...keep it up and keep repin the bk nah mean,1
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  6. October 25th, 2003, 04:14 AM #6
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    ^^^of course...no doubt fam...Brook-nam por vida!!!!!!
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  7. October 25th, 2003, 02:09 PM #7
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    yo nigga this shit is hot, i love the flow of this piece, nothin clashis
    nice shit my nigga, keep it comin, peace
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  8. October 25th, 2003, 10:08 PM #8
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    uppin this shit for you.......well worth it
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  9. October 26th, 2003, 09:17 AM #9
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    good drop, it was short but i liked the flow and the vocan wordplay was good aswell,

    steady bringin' change to the game...when I write with pens...
    heavy metal bringin' flamez to ya frame...when I'm snipin' men...

    that line i thought was tight...good drop...9/10
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