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    Silly goose Baxter D. Wall's Avatar
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    Drifting..

    all alone in this world.. never asked to be one of a kind
    unattainable goals unfurled.. failier is never hard to find
    is the puppeteer out of his mind?.. no, he just doesnt care
    proof? pain & agony occupy the whole world.. but "God is Everywhere"
    this years harvest is bare.. countless hours of work wasted,
    how am i supposed to 'Enjoy the fruits of my labor,'.. when labors all ive tasted?
    theres no peak, ive faced it..this mountain continues forever
    it will always rain on my parade.. no matter what the weather
    'never say never'..words aimed at encouragement only contradict
    a tithe? i thought i was supposed to get what i put in.. not put in what i get
    this cant be it.. nothing but pain has been seen by these blue eyes
    throw out the script.. im already tired of aimlessly drifting through life

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    Silly goose Baxter D. Wall's Avatar
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    *feeds this thread some Yellow Jackets*


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    "is the puppeteer out of his mind?.. no, he just doesnt care
    proof? pain & agony occupy the whole world.. but "God is Everywhere"" haha dopeness
    "this years harvest is bare.. countless hours of work wasted," nice setup for that line
    bah didnt like ur "doing this thing"
    flow was good, decent content, u could do
    much better i can tell [i am evil/pscyhic] and
    umm multies were good, style was orignal
    glad to see that being applied, a lot of ppl
    just go for the same format fuckin door mats
    was a bit short, the opener shoul've been
    stronger cause of the length, same with the
    ender na acutally the edner was dope cause
    u spoke of the word drifting lol, mean while
    any who this was kinda doper then i thought
    keep up the work which is good from you


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    up/

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    like your other one
    but good
    the way u describe things is thee way i look at things as well...
    kinda helps mnme enjoy your work
    solid little verse
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    This was another good peice by you, it was another good read i thought, flow was good, and your content was good as well, you multies were good, overall id say it was a good peice, keep dropping.

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    reply hoes.

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