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    love

    It comes to us in many fashions
    Personifying endless passions
    Ignoring gender, creed and race
    Just look around, it's EVERY PLACE!
    You'll find it in a baby's giggle
    And also in a puppy's wiggle
    In April's rain when flowers grow
    In winter nights in quiet snow

    ~LOVE~

    It's heard in songs throughout the land
    And felt when someone takes your hand
    Reflected in your dear ones' eyes
    When gifts are given for surprise

    It does not judge, condemn or scare
    But cradles gently, showing care
    So hear it! see it! touch it! feel!
    Avail your senses, it's VERY REAL

    It's here within the big and small
    The fat, the thin, the short, the tall
    It's what makes life worth living for
    Never enough! there's ALWAYS more!

    The human being can't do without
    And this i KNOW without a doubt
    So please say thanks to God above
    For giving us this thing called "LOVE"

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    umm it was decent but it sounded really Dr. Suess umm i dont know whut much else to say except it sounded cliche and cheesy elevation is key, also read the friggin rules for the forum your only allowed 2 poems on the first page, you just fuck the rules and post 3 at one time with a 4th sitting near the bottom, "be smart dont be a retard" only tryna help, 1luv.
    Laying face down in the mainstream.
    Po.Ethics.

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    Read the reasons of closure on your other piece.

    CLOSED for now.
    I'm too secure to have a signature.

    Oh.

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    Re-opened. Will comment on it later.
    I'm too secure to have a signature.

    Oh.

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    dat shit was funny infamous but on da real dat poem was tight
    (even whatn infamous said lol)still ya poem even aplys to dick heads like dat "IT comes to us in many fashions personifying endless passions,ignoring gender creed an race,just look around its every place" love in infamous's twisted fashion an passion was from anger in a sense is still a form of love an even at da end of his post he showed u another "fashion" of love he ended it with 1luv like i said tight poem an what ever response u get from anybody it will still be classified as love

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    tight piece,it was emotional and strung together well keep droppin,peace girl


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