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@mac
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I lead this dance, first in last out, dictate pace and slow the reigns
Im dropping 8 bars coz if I have to see another mac 10…I’ll use that to blow my brains
Mismatch of epic proportions, I’m lacing up gloves to harm you
Ill talk u up to Saudi fight, then brutalise u inside 2 n leave u laying like ngannou
Out your depth, U should’ve ducked me a sec
Coz I’ll cook mac n leave him boxed up so quick Ronald McDonald will cut me a cheque
So I brutalised u n left you to numb the pain with another high
Mac’ll more than take enough cough syrup to see his junky mum on the other side
Sorry I’m late. It won’t be easy tho so lemme put this on motion
Bitch if u really think I’m pacific see how I drop ur body on that ocean
Fuck off y’all with your conspiracy theories and plot twists
The only X-Files he’s involved with is being crossed off my target list
I like my girls latinas. Ur women taste is truly in pieces
No way ur wife is just a housewife with all these contracted diseases
I’ve heard stuff. She told me hopelessly when I met her in the club
She said ur Micro, soft, and totally anti-trust ever since Mac showed up
Mac 10 I’ve seen twice in his last 4 battles.. so it’s a no for me.. Saudi line got a little to wordy.. next 2 weee alright. I’ve seen ya do better but def wasn’t bad. Mac had x files… not sure what he was going for with the opener.. rest was blah.. no hate imma give it to slay for better hits
Vote slay
I lead this dance, first in last out, dictate pace and slow the reigns
Im dropping 8 bars coz if I have to see another mac 10…I’ll use that to blow my brains
^^^ trying to vote after being away for a while is tricky because I like this as a standalone bar. If it’s been said a lot to Mac recently I wouldn’t be aware of it. Personally I like it
Mismatch of epic proportions, I’m lacing up gloves to harm you
Ill talk u up to Saudi fight, then brutalise u inside 2 n leave u laying like ngannou
^^^ I’ll talk you up to saw the fight? Maybe I’m missing something but the wp doesn’t work right to me.
Out your depth, U should’ve ducked me a sec
Coz I’ll cook mac n leave him boxed up so quick Ronald McDonald will cut me a cheque
^^^ not feeling this.. and I would say a McDonald’s line to Mac is probably what people were doing a decade ago.. but I’m an old man and I can’t recall back then lol
So I brutalised u n left you to numb the pain with another high
Mac’ll more than take enough cough syrup to see his junky mum on the other side
^^^ this is ok but the wording could be better.
vs
Sorry I’m late. It won’t be easy tho so lemme put this on motion
Bitch if u really think I’m pacific see how I drop ur body on that ocean
^^^ not feeling this.. what does it mean for you to be pacific? Pacific time?
Fuck off y’all with your conspiracy theories and plot twists
The only X-Files he’s involved with is being crossed off my target list
^^^ this could’ve been decent. I think it should’ve been worded differently
I like my girls latinas. Ur women taste is truly in pieces
No way ur wife is just a housewife with all these contracted diseases
^^^ lol good for a slight laugh, doesn’t really hit hard.
I’ve heard stuff. She told me hopelessly when I met her in the club
She said ur Micro, soft, and totally anti-trust ever since Mac showed up
^^^ this is an ok idea that could’ve been worded better
It’s good to see Slay and Mac still actively battling. Mac has gotten a lot better from what I remember in terms of putting his lines together. I think the focus for you should be on wording because you had some decent ideas that weren’t done that well. Slay idk what you were going for with the Saudi wordplay. I think you had a couple decent lines and that gave you the win in this battle because I don’t think Mac executed his ideas well enough.
v/Slay
Think I have slayer here.
Overall a more concise, effectively worded verse
Mac Microsoft was almost, coulda been lotb maybe. X files had potential.
Mac 10 I sure is done done by now but it was an decent one.
V slayer
sorry Slayerr ... i gotta go with Mac on this one.. his punches connected more effectively ,, in your opinion i'm probably not one to give advice .. but try not to be so wordy and type whole words.. this might aid to increase your flow
v- Mac
aka Sorrow: the Broken Wing
3-1 slay
Re: WK09: Mac (1-6) vs Slayerr (1-1)
mac 10 was good
i did that against him when we battled
were u going for 'sell' in saudi? sell di fight? cuz that dont wrk 4me
i dont get a sell sound in that i get a 'saw di' sound but maybe thats not wat u meant
i might not be getting it
big mac line was cool i ain t seen it but seems like sumthing that would be use toward him
macklemore was ok
mac was ok with the xfiles line
housewifes i lol
last bar was alrt
slay was a lil stronger than mac cool read
i got slay winning
winner slay
Last edited by daveDILLY; April 6th, 2024 at 08:05 PM
Originally Posted by Slayerr.
Mac only had the closer, rest of verse was sketchy
v/Slay
5-1 slay
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