i blast off

[surfin]

i never want to injure the culture
sepulchure (huh)
to add insult to injury
a mime's mind couldn't mimmick me
mimmmiimck my mic stands firm by itself
i could deal you two hands, still play ya self
ill anthromorph into a horse
and gallop metaphors
im a rap junkie
addicted to lyrics and flunkies
beatniks
the eat shhhhh
fart vowels
owel
or is it ow I'll
put it down like tile
im sticking out like Chino XL's Nail files (ha)
ill wrap circles around u urkel's
choke u wit my vocals til u turn purple
rappers i cut short like a curfew

[Slashe]

Okay surfin. Honestly, this needs a bit of help. Flow is there, but you need to add a bit more creativity and word choice. I saw one possible wordplay 'anthormorphic' which probably could of been improved a bit.

[_Lyrics]

weak freeverse.
you show you have the ability to make something happen, but this isn't it.

[Lady Poet]

this is simple verse
I'll give this 7/10
Could have been better if you add more personals
Don't give up
I know you elevate