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Originally Posted by MV
swear pussy, I'll break in the door n stomp ur throat till its horse
that bar didn't deserve 5/0.. even the bodycam showed ur escalation of force.
bro speaking chemistry but I'll put son to sleep n take his wife to his bed
he'll wake up groggy n dizzy.. after hearing ammonia think shes suffering from side effects.
went back n reviewed ur battles, no reputable names.. the list was pitiful
if its the demon, see I just say whatever I want since this'll be just as forgettable.
but I'll help transform duke, think about it.. I do this shit as a hobby
we'll work on ur arms, torso then back n legs.. ur own family won't recognize the body.
the kids'll be next, then the dog, the cat, hell even granny, see
I'll uproot ur wife with the knife n make the bloodline the entire family tree.
Last edited by Wordz AhGod.; September 25th, 2023 at 11:03 PM Reason: Also removing what I didn’t post.. stop that.
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ill follow Wordz with a beam like a college lecture
then see embody God like the birth of a 5 Percenter
ur real cheeky when you critique me ill smack the life out this twerp
I'm rusty? i wanted this battle to tighten up Wordz but rigamortus'll do it first
gauge shot a rib loose knock-out the bitch in u, theres no hoe in me
swear to you, they'll be staring through a big hole...I'll put that O n g
drive-by ya family waving friendly like I'm happy to see u
then hop out with this 40 n the Desert, God quick to abandon his people
since 2004 u worsened, now your verses show a whole different person
cuz Wordz don't write like this no more, since schools stopped teaching cursive
Last edited by MV; September 25th, 2023 at 03:39 PM Reason: removed what i didnt post.
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Wag
Opener was hard
Ammonia was fire,
It fits the demon was ok, kinda funny
Recognize the body was ehhh light
Closer was hard also.
Dope verse bro
MV
Opener- I liked it somewhat. Thought it coulda been worded harsher
Rigamortus was dope
On god was cool,
40 in the desert was ok
Closer was ok also
Pretty cool battle y’all I felt WAG went in hard well MV was actually fire too just thought he coulda touched his lines up a little to be more effective. Appreciate the early drop from both y’all and dope read gentleman
Mvgt WAG
One thing I noticed from the scoring process, and you can actually take a look at the breakdowns to see what I'm saying, is that even though they ended up tied in points, WAG appeared to have the more consistent verse. So my vote stands as they were dead even with each other, it's just that WAG didn't have as many pauses in momentum as MV did. MV's closer was LOTB and it totally kept him in solid footing.
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WAG
swear pussy, I'll break in the door n stomp ur throat till its horse
that bar didn't deserve 5/0.. even the bodycam showed ur escalation of force.
kk
bro speaking chemistry but I'll put son to sleep n take his wife to his bed
he'll wake up groggy n dizzy.. after hearing ammonia think shes suffering from side effects.
wp was cool
went back n reviewed ur battles, no reputable names.. the list was pitiful
if its the demon, see I just say whatever I want since this'll be just as forgettable.
not feeling
but I'll help transform duke, think about it.. I do this shit as a hobby
we'll work on ur arms, torso then back n legs.. ur own family won't recognize the body.
good concept and delivery
the kids'll be next, then the dog, the cat, hell even granny, see
I'll uproot ur wife with the knife n make the bloodline the entire family tree.
I get where you were going
MV
ill follow Wordz with a beam like a college lecture
then see embody God like the birth of a 5 Percenter
love the follow Wordz with a beam.. punch was coo
ur real cheeky when you critique me ill smack the life out this twerp
I'm rusty? i wanted this battle to tighten up Wordz but rigamortus'll do it first
kk.. almost
gauge shot a rib loose knock-out the bitch in u, theres no hoe in me
swear to you, they'll be staring through a big hole...I'll put that O n g
like how they say On God? Swear to you tie in? this fizzled but like the attempt
drive-by ya family waving friendly like I'm happy to see u
then hop out with this 40 n the Desert, God quick to abandon his people
lol this was silly... Israelites, Moses 40 years.. cool
since 2004 u worsened, now your verses show a whole different person
cuz Wordz don't write like this no more, since schools stopped teaching cursive
Woooould've been smooth but cursive ended in like 96
Verrrry close battle.. I liked the torso, body line by WAG the most, enjoyed both verses but MV's misses were better...
MV
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swear pussy, I'll break in the door n stomp ur throat till its horse
that bar didn't deserve 5/0.. even the bodycam showed ur escalation of force.
nah
bro speaking chemistry but I'll put son to sleep n take his wife to his bed
he'll wake up groggy n dizzy.. after hearing ammonia think shes suffering from side effects.
poorly executed but OK
went back n reviewed ur battles, no reputable names.. the list was pitiful
if its the demon, see I just say whatever I want since this'll be just as forgettable.
nope
but I'll help transform duke, think about it.. I do this shit as a hobby
we'll work on ur arms, torso then back n legs.. ur own family won't recognize the body.
weak
the kids'll be next, then the dog, the cat, hell even granny, see
I'll uproot ur wife with the knife n make the bloodline the entire family tree.
nah
vs
ill follow Wordz with a beam like a college lecture
then see embody God like the birth of a 5 Percenter
I get the reference but weak opener
ur real cheeky when you critique me ill smack the life out this twerp
I'm rusty? i wanted this battle to tighten up Wordz but rigamortus'll do it first
weak play on tighten up
gauge shot a rib loose knock-out the bitch in u, theres no hoe in me
swear to you, they'll be staring through a big hole...I'll put that O n g
flows nice but not witty
drive-by ya family waving friendly like I'm happy to see u
then hop out with this 40 n the Desert, God quick to abandon his people
this one is decent
since 2004 u worsened, now your verses show a whole different person
cuz Wordz don't write like this no more, since schools stopped teaching cursive
wtf nah
Only real decent line was a biblical reference, but I haven't see that one done before, so v/MV
Wordz AhGod
bro speaking chemistry but I'll put son to sleep n take his wife to his bed
he'll wake up groggy n dizzy.. after hearing ammonia think shes suffering from side effects.
the kids'll be next, then the dog, the cat, hell even granny, see
I'll uproot ur wife with the knife n make the bloodline the entire family tree.
MV
ur real cheeky when you critique me ill smack the life out this twerp
I'm rusty? i wanted this battle to tighten up Wordz but rigamortus'll do it first
gauge shot a rib loose knock-out the bitch in u, theres no hoe in me
swear to you, they'll be staring through a big hole...I'll put that O n g
since 2004 u worsened, now your verses show a whole different person
cuz Wordz don't write like this no more, since schools stopped teaching cursive
The two bars I quoted from WAG were pretty decent, but it wasn't enough to deal with MV. MV had more to offer me in the content he provided. His misses weren't entirely bad either. The ammonia wordplay from WAG was the highlight of the battle. But MV took this because he was better overall.
If you're going to quote the last punchline from WAG's verse then you have to add the one directly before it because they went together. I liked how he did that. I'm not sure I would say the ammonia thing was the highlight either. The rigor mortis punchline from MV was really good. I'll pick MV because I enjoyed reading his verse more than anything else.
swear pussy, I'll break in the door n stomp ur throat till its horse
that bar didn't deserve 5/0.. even the bodycam showed ur escalation of force.
bro speaking chemistry but I'll put son to sleep n take his wife to his bed
he'll wake up groggy n dizzy.. after hearing ammonia think shes suffering from side effects.
the kids'll be next, then the dog, the cat, hell even granny, see
I'll uproot ur wife with the knife n make the bloodline the entire family tree.
Vs
ill follow Wordz with a beam like a college lecture
then see embody God like the birth of a 5 Percenter
ur real cheeky when you critique me ill smack the life out this twerp
I'm rusty? i wanted this battle to tighten up Wordz but rigamortus'll do it first
(Could have worded this waaayyy better i still fuck with it ^^^)
since 2004 u worsened, now your verses show a whole different person
cuz Wordz don't write like this no more, since schools stopped teaching cursive
Felt wordz just tossed this verse together concept wise. Wording was better than MV and wordz had LOTB but MV had better concepts and more personals in his verse ima edge it to MV
MV Wins 5-2
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