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    Seni Final: Dominate Vs Plot - Open For Votes

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    G/luck pal.
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    Re: Seni Final: Dominate Vs Plot

    Gday mate

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    Re: Seni Final: Dominate Vs Plot

    Last edited by cevicvid; April 8th, 2022 at 06:30 AM

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    I accept this wildcard three way match.
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    Re: Seni Final: Dominate Vs Plot

    Ext

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    Yeah. Even Monday night Aus time would be good for me.
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    Re: Seni Final: Dominate Vs Plot

    Good for me too man

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    Re: Seni Final: Dominate Vs Plot

    Look at me & see a star; no-one’s topped the league faster
    Look at him & see a star; list of champions says Mimic*
    *Won by NS then lost the week after

    -Quote Dominate vs Mimic

    Twinkly faggot thinks he's special, posting up on every media-browser
    When Plot starts shooting-stars it'll turn him into a meteor-shower.
    In real life Dom's a math-teacher, the first Sine he's in for a brutal scene
    Cos he's got the Tan of a lifetime spent in front of a computer screen.
    Dom, me and the boys had your stupid bitch sitting in our laps
    She thought we were substitutes, way we kept taking turns filling in the gaps.
    Fucking geek! acting smart-arse in every battle, now Imma clown this guy
    Against Plot that whittle get you nowhere, just quickly cut down to size.
    So Imma just let the gat speak, cos U cant talk that street-hustle
    And when I dump this mag Nate, You'll be out! Like corporate reshuffles.
    What's he got? Played nameplays? Fake personals just silly at best?
    Dom's just firing blanks, and that's not a reference to his failed fertility tests.
    There will be blood quick if we meet in public, Plot'll spray bullets
    Your final act will be done by plainview, just without Daniel Day-Lewis.
    Don't wanna start a war with me son, it's not worth the struggle
    Coz when I turn missiles on Dom, domiciles just get turned to rubble.
    Last edited by Plot; April 11th, 2022 at 04:50 AM

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    Re: Seni Final: Dominate Vs Plot

    Plot aka Robocop aka Dystopian,

    Your haymaker claims are NOT true - start scripting an apology
    I’m not 1-2 outliers, but you writing a single dope bar is a statistical anomaly
    Gimmicky schemes and played lines, nobody likes this cuck
    Only people who DON’T wanna Diss Robe are the women he tries to fuck
    Mention his run on Netcees & this bartender might get triggered
    He went from serving up Lime & Bitters to getting served on the Lime & Bitter
    People come here to read my shit - you aint got ONE supporter
    No-one cares what you Sadist, reading your verses is fucking torture
    How you even made it this far remains a question, G
    If you’re showing heart in text it’s cuz we’d rate yours less than three <3
    Your girl says she quit carbs, but still wearing some extra-extra drawers
    That’s not a Keto diet, it’s a QUITO diet - she eats enough to feed cities in Ecuador
    & she stinks too bro. That kinda flatulence is past science
    My wife got a Stellar Body… you refer to yours as a Gas Giant
    I’ll stop your ticker w/ the taser. Too late to bring the medics
    A big shock & ya heart goes out to it - have you feeling sympathetic
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    Re: Seni Final: Dominate Vs Plot - Open For Votes

    Vote reserved.

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    Re: Seni Final: Dominate Vs Plot - Open For Votes

    Dom, me and the boys had your stupid bitch sitting in our laps
    She thought we were substitutes, way we kept taking turns filling in the gaps.
    Fucking geek! acting smart-arse in every battle, now Imma clown this guy
    Against Plot that whittle get you nowhere, just quickly cut down to size.
    What's he got? Played nameplays? Fake personals just silly at best?
    Dom's just firing blanks, and that's not a reference to his failed fertility tests.
    There will be blood quick if we meet in public, Plot'll spray bullets
    Your final act will be done by plainview, just without Daniel Day-Lewis.


    Vs

    Your haymaker claims are NOT true - start scripting an apology
    I’m not 1-2 outliers, but you writing a single dope bar is a statistical anomaly
    Gimmicky schemes and played lines, nobody likes this cuck
    Only people who DON’T wanna Diss Robe are the women he tries to fuck
    People come here to read my shit - you aint got ONE supporter
    No-one cares what you Sadist, reading your verses is fucking torture
    How you even made it this far remains a question, G
    If you’re showing heart in text it’s cuz we’d rate yours less than three <3

    she stinks too bro. That kinda flatulence is past science
    My wife got a Stellar Body… you refer to yours as a Gas Giant


    Dope battle. This my favorite plot verse of the season. But I got dom with more quotables and line of the battle


    V/don

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    Re: Seni Final: Dominate Vs Plot - Open For Votes

    1-0 Dom

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    Re: Seni Final: Dominate Vs Plot - Open For Votes

    Had a breakdown but the page refreshed

    Doing quotes

    Plot: plainview, whittle, filling gaps

    Dom: heart in text, 12 outliers, gas giant, lime bitter

    Cool battle, wording was on point from both here.. I think Dom had a few more doper concepts and was more consistent w top hits. Plot fame pretty well too though. Kind of a slow start flip bc Pleth di d that angle too, fertility was a miss imo. Mag Nate could've been better w a different take. Dom's misses were not quite as low, don't like Keto diet but wording was good

    Vote Dom

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    Re: Seni Final: Dominate Vs Plot - Open For Votes

    Ain't been back in a minute, I'm getting this vote in idgaf how old this ass battle is

    Twinkly faggot thinks he's special, posting up on every media-browser
    When Plot starts shooting-stars it'll turn him into a meteor-shower.
    - good concept, bad execution
    In real life Dom's a math-teacher, the first Sine he's in for a brutal scene
    Cos he's got the Tan of a lifetime spent in front of a computer screen.
    - meh
    Dom, me and the boys had your stupid bitch sitting in our laps
    She thought we were substitutes, way we kept taking turns filling in the gaps.
    - ok, your set up bar held it back
    Fucking geek! acting smart-arse in every battle, now Imma clown this guy
    Against Plot that whittle get you nowhere, just quickly cut down to size.
    - nah, forced vibe
    So Imma just let the gat speak, cos U cant talk that street-hustle
    And when I dump this mag Nate, You'll be out! Like corporate reshuffles.
    - TED Talk vibe so I give it a pass lol
    What's he got? Played nameplays? Fake personals just silly at best?
    Dom's just firing blanks, and that's not a reference to his failed fertility tests.
    - you punch bar was expected, weak hit
    There will be blood quick if we meet in public, Plot'll spray bullets
    Your final act will be done by plainview, just without Daniel Day-Lewis.
    - nicest bar yet
    Don't wanna start a war with me son, it's not worth the struggle
    Coz when I turn missiles on Dom, domiciles just get turned to rubble.
    - nah

    Ok ish, I feel like wording held you back when set up and concepts didnt.

    VS

    Your haymaker claims are NOT true - start scripting an apology
    I’m not 1-2 outliers, but you writing a single dope bar is a statistical anomaly
    - ok ish, kinda statement ish
    Gimmicky schemes and played lines, nobody likes this cuck
    Only people who DON’T wanna Diss Robe are the women he tries to fuck
    - decent nameplay, don't need to capitalize it lol
    Mention his run on Netcees & this bartender might get triggered
    He went from serving up Lime & Bitters to getting served on the Lime & Bitter
    - rhyming is off, killed it
    People come here to read my shit - you aint got ONE supporter
    No-one cares what you Sadist, reading your verses is fucking torture
    - nah
    How you even made it this far remains a question, G
    If you’re showing heart in text it’s cuz we’d rate yours less than three <3
    - meh
    Your girl says she quit carbs, but still wearing some extra-extra drawers
    That’s not a Keto diet, it’s a QUITO diet - she eats enough to feed cities in Ecuador
    - decent ish but long winded
    & she stinks too bro. That kinda flatulence is past science
    My wife got a Stellar Body… you refer to yours as a Gas Giant
    - best bar by far. Lol
    I’ll stop your ticker w/ the taser. Too late to bring the medics
    A big shock & ya heart goes out to it - have you feeling sympathetic
    - nice flip



    Close battle but not the greatest. I feel like if both of you wrote a full verse on the type of lines I highlighted as your best, you'd both be a good read. I feel like Dominate had the better verse here, neither had hard hits but he had more structured lines/concepts which is noticed.

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