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    Boy Nova
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    Cheatin sluts

    Ok time to drop a real hit......yo...yo,
    Everything was going so perfectly
    The relationship seemed authentic to me,
    Your face anglic as could be who woulda even thought possibly
    you could do this, do this to me,
    i dunno maybe its my fault was it me?
    Why you have to ruin what we had i dont understand i cant see,
    You didnt take the warning i had given you
    i said dont you ever cheat but you did so screw you,
    Now we looking down off this cliff
    looking at bottom where ya boys bones are ripped,
    I thought i could trust you i really did
    But ya just like rest you fuckin bitch,
    Whore, slut quit it stop! your starting to twitch
    Do you realy want me to flip out my switch?!
    This is what happens when you break my heart
    Look down ya see that? thats a piece of art,
    See how his body is now in seperate parts, haha
    I cant believe it, look what you made me do
    His blood is on your hands bitch you YOU!,
    Ya know the funny part?
    You actually thought youd get away with this shit think your smart,
    Well your not your a dirty little slut!
    Ok lets wrap this shit up ive had enough,
    Look at the sea look at the sky
    This is the last youll ever be this high,
    Ya boy looks lonley i think its time to joined him!






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    D-Generation
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    Not a bad rhyme at all mate.

    It kinda reminds me of 'Kim', by Em

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    i like some parts ---"look at tha sea look at tha sky, this is tha last x youll be this high"
    but tha vocab. was 2 small, your rap was 2 simple couldn't really grasp tha emotion and hate of your rap. and i agree wit D-gen sounds like u've been listening to em. It's aight 4 your level.

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    Boy Nova
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    Thanks for the comments but the ryhme is simple and to the point because thats what it has to be, its needs to just be wot it is not confusing or too much. I think its just right and as for the eminem thing, ya right that was in my head but only because i felt the same thing as he did. But keep em cuming all reveiws are appreciated good or bad.

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    i feel you on this one...
    if you wanted you could up your vocab, but thats up to you. it would have been a huge improvement if you used more word play
    "You didnt take the warning i had given you
    i said dont you ever cheat but you did so screw you"
    i like that... that shits nice......
    "got a warning lable tattooed on my back, says'' who ever talk shit will be glued to my gat"


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    the kim track and this blend a lil i liked it do you twin
    to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..

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    Re: Cheatin sluts

    Cheatin sluts might surprise you with their ability to play you for a fool, but in the end, they'll win when it comes to the long-term. Cheat on your man and you'll regret it forever. The term cheat on a woman, or cheatin' isn't exactly a new one. However, if you look up the definition, you will find out it is for men who has cheated on buy instagram followers their lady love with other women, in other words, guys who have broken their vows or made promises to his wife.

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