Contender's Match - Cody Nash (5-1) vs Mimic (3-2) Mimic wins.

[Phalanx]

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@Cody Nash @Mimic

[Cody Nash]

Back at it again

[Cody Nash]

horror buffs would pay to see this nag beat tho, just grab the popcorn and Cheetos..
Cause it figures a dude named mimic’s a bigger pest than the giant half-human mosquito
I take bits of time between shit at work…so I’m paid hourly to defeat foes
But I’ll still bake you in 30 minutes like I was payin’ respects to meatloaf
This chap’ll get rocked, even an old school punishment won’t enlighten his flaws
put your passion on the line?? I guess if it’s to completely destroy you by firing squad
His folk think we’re all Joe Dirt…but this ignorant American’ll drop y’all
I’ll take the underhanded approach…cause I assumed people from the UK only play softball
new fads got him in rap fatigue, no tracks for decades - and a fear for millennials
But if I know my history?? last anybody said “Yasss, King Daniel!” was in 1200’s Ruthenia

[Mimic]

Homie all talk. four eyes claim he's w/ gang but never shoot though
till mim roll up & put those bands on his head like he auditioning for Naruto
Nerd ur nothin' unique, another jobless fat FB rapper trapped in the gutter
u'd sell ur soule for fast cash.. since we know u two bitchs be pimpin each other
it's like ur proud to run a dyin' forum, in ur late 30's? that aint normal here
there's so many things wrong w/ u Code it got GoW questioning his scriptin career
In his prime.. dope. but since the name change ur not the same talented dude,
Maddie Mccann. u took ThatKid out & had everyone wondering wtf happened to u
Postin' vids on the road spittin'. I tried watchin' & nearly died of boredom
"Traffic Bars"
yet still not as congested as that fat wife of urs who produces beats for em

[mal diction]

horror buffs would pay to see this nag beat tho, just grab the popcorn and Cheetos..
Cause it figures a dude named mimic’s a bigger pest than the giant half-human mosquito
not big on this
I take bits of time between shit at work…so I’m paid hourly to defeat foes
But I’ll still bake you in 30 minutes like I was payin’ respects to meatloaf
same
This chap’ll get rocked, even an old school punishment won’t enlighten his flaws
put your passion on the line?? I guess if it’s to completely destroy you by firing squad
same
His folk think we’re all Joe Dirt…but this ignorant American’ll drop y’all
I’ll take the underhanded approach…cause I assumed people from the UK only play softball
nah it's called cricket.. an same
new fads got him in rap fatigue, no tracks for decades - and a fear for millennials
But if I know my history?? last anybody said “Yasss, King Daniel!” was in 1200’s Ruthenia
i guess you weren't feeling it...

Homie all talk. four eyes claim he's w/ gang but never shoot though
till mim roll up & put those bands on his head like he auditioning for Naruto
bangs would have worked... decent punch tho
Nerd ur nothin' unique, another jobless fat FB rapper trapped in the gutter
u'd sell ur soule for fast cash.. since we know u two bitchs be pimpin each other
a lil weak.. decent try for a personal
it's like ur proud to run a dyin' forum, in ur late 30's? that aint normal here
there's so many things wrong w/ u Code it got GoW questioning his scriptin career
this is in the air.. dont know GoW to well... but yeah Code/script
In his prime.. dope. but since the name change ur not the same talented dude,
Maddie Mccann. u took ThatKid out & had everyone wondering wtf happened to u
if said live this would be dope.. soso on paper
Postin' vids on the road spittin'. I tried watchin' & nearly died of boredom
"Traffic Bars"
yet still not as congested as that fat wife of urs who produces beats for em
don't get this


i cant believe i'm saying this but Mimic just brought a better verse than Cry...fresher concepts with a decent rhyme scheme.. definitely one of Mimic's better verses

vote-Mimic
pc

[Fresh]

I take bits of time between shit at work…so I’m paid hourly to defeat foes
But I’ll still bake you in 30 minutes like I was payin’ respects to meatloaf
This chap’ll get rocked, even an old school punishment won’t enlighten his flaws
put your passion on the line?? I guess if it’s to completely destroy you by firing squad

vs

Nerd ur nothin' unique, another jobless fat FB rapper trapped in the gutter
u'd sell ur soule for fast cash.. since we know u two bitchs be pimpin each other
it's like ur proud to run a dyin' forum, in ur late 30's? that aint normal here
there's so many things wrong w/ u Code it got GoW questioning his scriptin career
In his prime.. dope. but since the name change ur not the same talented dude,
Maddie Mccann. u took ThatKid out & had everyone wondering wtf happened to u

decent battle. maybe its preference but overall i had mimic taking this comfortably with more consistent and harder hitting punches

v/ mimic

[Phalanx]

horror buffs would pay to see this nag beat tho, just grab the popcorn and Cheetos..
Cause it figures a dude named mimic’s a bigger pest than the giant half-human mosquito
I had to google the reference. I like the idea, but feel like it could have been flipped a lil better. Decent jab though.
I take bits of time between shit at work…so I’m paid hourly to defeat foes
But I’ll still bake you in 30 minutes like I was payin’ respects to meatloaf
Okay jab.
This chap’ll get rocked, even an old school punishment won’t enlighten his flaws
put your passion on the line?? I guess if it’s to completely destroy you by firing squad
I liked this. Solid jab.
His folk think we’re all Joe Dirt…but this ignorant American’ll drop y’all
I’ll take the underhanded approach…cause I assumed people from the UK only play softball
I wasn't big on this.
new fads got him in rap fatigue, no tracks for decades - and a fear for millennials
But if I know my history?? last anybody said “Yasss, King Daniel!” was in 1200’s Ruthenia
Not feeling this.

Homie all talk. four eyes claim he's w/ gang but never shoot though
till mim roll up & put those bands on his head like he auditioning for Naruto
Nice opener.
Nerd ur nothin' unique, another jobless fat FB rapper trapped in the gutter
u'd sell ur soule for fast cash.. since we know u two bitchs be pimpin each other
Light jab.
it's like ur proud to run a dyin' forum, in ur late 30's? that aint normal here
there's so many things wrong w/ u Code it got GoW questioning his scriptin career
Seen alot of Code/Cody/Scripting flips in my day. This didnt do it for me.
In his prime.. dope. but since the name change ur not the same talented dude,
Maddie Mccann. u took ThatKid out & had everyone wondering wtf happened to u
Fire.
Postin' vids on the road spittin'. I tried watchin' & nearly died of boredom
"Traffic Bars"
yet still not as congested as that fat wife of urs who produces beats for em
[B]Light jab at best.

Solid match up. Nash lead with some decent jabs, and kind of stumbled at the end. Mimic whiffed with his second bar, but had the two best bats w/ the Naruto & Maddie McCann concepts. This was competitive, but I got Mimic here.

Vote - Mimic

[Dominate]

horror buffs would pay to see this nag beat tho, just grab the popcorn and Cheetos..
Cause it figures a dude named mimic’s a bigger pest than the giant half-human mosquito
OKish. Basic wp/punch combo. Technically sound bar. Set up was cool
I take bits of time between shit at work…so I’m paid hourly to defeat foes
But I’ll still bake you in 30 minutes like I was payin’ respects to meatloaf
OK. Creative-ish flip I suppose. The wp & punch are light but it's executed adequately
This chap’ll get rocked, even an old school punishment won’t enlighten his flaws
put your passion on the line?? I guess if it’s to completely destroy you by firing squad
Same as the previous bars. Although I felt like the wp/flip connection was a bit more tenuous here
His folk think we’re all Joe Dirt…but this ignorant American’ll drop y’all
I’ll take the underhanded approach…cause I assumed people from the UK only play softball
I like the wp concept here. Could have been executed more harshly
new fads got him in rap fatigue, no tracks for decades - and a fear for millennials
But if I know my history?? last anybody said “Yasss, King Daniel!” was in 1200’s Ruthenium
Nah this came off pretty corny to me




Homie all talk. four eyes claim he's w/ gang but never shoot though
till mim roll up & put those bands on his head like he auditioning for Naruto
Ha I just did a 'band on his head' line last week. This would've hit for me otherwise but I beat you to it suckaaaa
Nerd ur nothin' unique, another jobless fat FB rapper trapped in the gutter
u'd sell ur soule for fast cash.. since we know u two bitchs be pimpin each other
Cool. Set up was punchy too.
it's like ur proud to run a dyin' forum, in ur late 30's? that aint normal here
there's so many things wrong w/ u Code it got GoW questioning his scripting career
Cool. Wp would have been cleaner without the 'u' - just "so many things wrong w/ Code" would be better. Solid np bar
In his prime.. dope. but since the name change ur not the same talented dude,
Maddie Mccann. u took ThatKid out & had everyone wondering wtf happened to u
Niiiice. Very slick np/punch combo
Postin' vids on the road spittin'. I tried watchin' & nearly died of boredom
"Traffic Bars"
yet still not as congested as that fat wife of urs who produces beats for em
Looks like some personals I don't fully get here but I can infer enough to see this is pretty good.


Mimic got it. The Maddie McCann bar was easily lotb and everything else was pretty cool. Cody had some ideas but wasn't on the same level here[/b]

[Justice Grimm]

horror buffs would pay to see this nag beat tho, just grab the popcorn and Cheetos..
Cause it figures a dude named mimic’s a bigger pest than the giant half-human mosquito
I like the idea, direct hit but kinda basic execution
I take bits of time between shit at work…so I’m paid hourly to defeat foes
But I’ll still bake you in 30 minutes like I was payin’ respects to meatloaf
Ehh not sure on this one, basic concept
This chap’ll get rocked, even an old school punishment won’t enlighten his flaws
put your passion on the line?? I guess if it’s to completely destroy you by firing squad
Decent, but the wording suffered a little more on this one than the last couple
His folk think we’re all Joe Dirt…but this ignorant American’ll drop y’all
I’ll take the underhanded approach…cause I assumed people from the UK only play softball
I actually think the concept here is pretty clever, but I feel like it stumbled at the end… the assumption part softens the blow here
new fads got him in rap fatigue, no tracks for decades - and a fear for millennials
But if I know my history?? last anybody said “Yasss, King Daniel!” was in 1200’s Ruthenia
Sorry man not feeling this one

Vs

Homie all talk. four eyes claim he's w/ gang but never shoot though
till mim roll up & put those bands on his head like he auditioning for Naruto
Good opener, not a heavy hit but I dig it
Nerd ur nothin' unique, another jobless fat FB rapper trapped in the gutter
u'd sell ur soule for fast cash.. since we know u two bitchs be pimpin each other
Not bad. Might be nitpicking but I still remember Phal’s soule flip so it doesn’t feel as fresh as it could, but wording is clean
it's like ur proud to run a dyin' forum, in ur late 30's? that aint normal here
there's so many things wrong w/ u Code it got GoW questioning his scriptin career
All right
In his prime.. dope. but since the name change ur not the same talented dude,
Maddie Mccann. u took ThatKid out & had everyone wondering wtf happened to u
Damn this one is clean
Postin' vids on the road spittin'. I tried watchin' & nearly died of boredom
"Traffic Bars"
yet still not as congested as that fat wife of urs who produces beats for em
Closer is weaker than the rest of your verse here

I have Mimic with this one. Both had good verses, not a lot of outright misses but a lot of Cry’s hits didn’t seem to quite land clean, while Mimic had a couple that were harder and then Maddie McCann which was fire.

V/Mimic

[Phalanx]

Mimic wins 5-0.