Mighty God

[Lady Poet]

God brought me with care
He lift my spirit in the air
I'm so blessed to have God
He save me even when something's is odd
He love me dearly
He always protect me
He's so wise
He give good advise
He gave me everything I need to succeed

[Emily]

Hello Vixen, nice to see you're still dropping work.
I think you put some emotion and effort into this and it shows how much you
appreciate the higher forces in this world.
Very literal, so clear its crystal.
Sometimes when things are written out so literally they can sound a bit abrupt
so maybe toy with the idea of a little bit of descriptive imagery
or figurative language (explaining things in a non-literal or non-traditional way).



Keep that pen moving Vixen
Good job

[Lady Poet]

Hello Emily, Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it.