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    Cry Me a River v2

    Cry me a river

    I remember when you showed me
    You used to kiss and hold me
    Taught me a dance my tongue still spells to this day
    We used to trip and laugh just like you were my homie
    Now you act like you don’t know me
    But who ever knew you’d go all in and play
    I do this here just based upon a theory
    I wonder if you still hear me 🤔
    It doesn’t mean that you should fear me
    Cause them eyes still speak, them lies stay weak
    But I still can’t streak one bad word to say...
    code of a symbol similar to D’usse

    Just lost... lost... cause you were my every day!
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    Re: Cry Me a River v2

    Heartfelt stuff. Damn, who broke your heart? The 'tongue dance' line was a definite stand out; great wordplay. Would've liked to have seen more but you got the message across. Some compound rhymes and stronger vocab would reinforce your style but I like that you march to the beat of own drum. Originality is gold.

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    Re: Cry Me a River v2

    Thanks... but original... no - just warm ups and therapy
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    Re: Cry Me a River v2

    6 years is from 6th grade to 12th - I need help getting them bitches off me. I tied everything! (Random outburst but seriously... it’s serious)
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