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    LLL WEEK 18: Plethora vs encrypted data PLETH WINS

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    Re: LLL WEEK 18: Plethora vs encrypted data

    Check. Down for 14. Let me know.

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    Re: LLL WEEK 18: Plethora vs encrypted data

    inn

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    Re: LLL WEEK 18: Plethora vs encrypted data

    Let’s get it

    This upset is an electric fence around your body in the afterlife, P you’ll be shocked as hell
    Datpiff you dropping ain’t getting no downloads, your CD’s are boat flags, they flop with sales(Sails)
    Pleth talk tough and it’s perfect form in weight room, you don’t get it, he ain’t dropping squat
    Cool guy we get it, give it arrest like you’ve got authority but you not a cop
    Truth is you’re not a killer, your moniker should have been Benevolent
    King P-naw he sweet tea, or Diet Dr. Pepper. when you log in it’s the Sweet One as your messaging
    I gotta make sure that last line makes sense
    the overall conclusion of your lineage is planted evidence- fake Prints(Prince)
    This guys a fruit basket. Be careful those vegan deamons See Cornucopia in the open
    the rush of adrenaline used to put an end to your support is fueled off promoted endorphins
    Pleth Your a Wayfair futon, low quality and nothing to sleep on
    Latest corpse in my trail of bodies you’re gonna keep warm
    Whooping this guy. Beat him to a pulp, plethora will be gender fluid
    Sexual preference unnecessary cause all parts get dismembered stupid

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    Re: LLL WEEK 18: Plethora vs encrypted data

    @plethora due tonight

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    Re: LLL WEEK 18: Plethora vs encrypted data

    this a cake walk, ima make off with a half assed start
    didn't even have to use Fresh Material, but coulda beat u with his wack ass bars
    milli to ur neck, squeeze & im killing u dead
    feel that 9 in ur throat while ur girl giving me head
    that'll take u to heaven, pearly gates & sunshine
    give u that L,ED..  gonna see it's brighter on the otherside
    run & hide.. Pleth a giant, you undersized & all talk
    im 6'1, ur 1/6th of a 1:6 figure.. &'ll end up in a small box
    bet u, cookies, & stranger bar hop for niggas digits
    its Data Analyst of faggots collecting numbers with the quickness
    talk a bunch of shit encrypted but the end is in sight
    put ur foot in ur mouth, now ima end it like the conor mcgregor fight
    get chopped up like breaded meat, if within several feet
    so step to me & ima Hack Data like a credit breach

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    Re: LLL WEEK 18: Plethora vs encrypted data

    Good stuff. That LED line made me laugh. Strong ending.

    Let’s get some votes here!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Encrypted Data View Post
    This upset is an electric fence around your body in the afterlife, P you’ll be shocked as hell
    Datpiff you dropping ain’t getting no downloads, your CD’s are boat flags, they flop with sales(Sails)
    Minus the expo, this was actually good. Kind of corny and a stretch bc pleth ain't shit, but creativity gets the nod here
    Pleth talk tough and it’s perfect form in weight room, you don’t get it, he ain’t dropping squat
    Cool guy we get it, give it arrest like you’ve got authority but you not a cop
    Olllllld wordplay and not enough of a flip to make it hit. Miss
    Truth is you’re not a killer, your moniker should have been Benevolent
    King P-naw he sweet tea, or Diet Dr. Pepper. when you log in it’s the Sweet One as your messaging
    Hell no. If it wasn't bad enough, calling him P to make the nameplay
    was

    I gotta make sure that last line makes sense
    the overall conclusion of your lineage is planted evidence- fake Prints(Prince)
    Whack
    This guys a fruit basket. Be careful those vegan deamons See Cornucopia in the open
    the rush of adrenaline used to put an end to your support is fueled off promoted endorphins
    Nah man
    Pleth Your a Wayfair futon, low quality and nothing to sleep on
    Latest corpse in my trail of bodies you’re gonna keep warm
    Hah, dope. More of this and your opener please
    Whooping this guy. Beat him to a pulp, plethora will be gender fluid
    Sexual preference unnecessary cause all parts get dismembered stupid
    Filler
    Quote Originally Posted by plethora View Post
    this a cake walk, ima make off with a half assed start
    didn't even have to use Fresh Material, but coulda beat u with his wack ass bars
    Dece
    milli to ur neck, squeeze & im killing u dead
    feel that 9 in ur throat while ur girl giving me head
    No. Simple af
    that'll take u to heaven, pearly gates & sunshine
    give u that L,ED..  gonna see it's brighter on the otherside
    Dope
    run & hide.. Pleth a giant, you undersized & all talk
    im 6'1, ur 1/6th of a 1:6 figure.. &'ll end up in a small box
    I like this different approach. Kudos
    bet u, cookies, & stranger bar hop for niggas digits
    its Data Analyst of faggots collecting numbers with the quickness
    Lol hit
    talk a bunch of shit encrypted but the end is in sight
    put ur foot in ur mouth, now ima end it like the conor mcgregor fight
    Nah, this was a stretch/try hard concept
    get chopped up like breaded meat, if within several feet
    so step to me & ima Hack Data like a credit breach
    Dece
    Mvgt Plethora
    While y'all try to get another 50 calories in, I'm begging you to give my 50 cal a reason

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    Re: LLL WEEK 18: Plethora vs encrypted data

    Quote Originally Posted by Encrypted Data View Post
    Let’s get it

    This upset is an electric fence around your body in the afterlife, P you’ll be shocked as hell
    Datpiff you dropping ain’t getting no downloads, your CD’s are boat flags, they flop with sales(Sails)

    Longwinded and choppy. Ok ish

    Pleth talk tough and it’s perfect form in weight room, you don’t get it, he ain’t dropping squat
    Cool guy we get it, give it arrest like you’ve got authority but you not a cop

    Old/no sting

    Truth is you’re not a killer, your moniker should have been Benevolent
    King P-naw he sweet tea, or Diet Dr. Pepper. when you log in it’s the Sweet One as your messaging

    Dont like at all

    I gotta make sure that last line makes sense
    the overall conclusion of your lineage is planted evidence- fake Prints(Prince)

    Nooo man

    This guys a fruit basket. Be careful those vegan deamons See Cornucopia in the open
    the rush of adrenaline used to put an end to your support is fueled off promoted endorphins

    Nah

    Pleth Your a Wayfair futon, low quality and nothing to sleep on
    Latest corpse in my trail of bodies you’re gonna keep warm

    Ok

    Whooping this guy. Beat him to a pulp, plethora will be gender fluid
    Sexual preference unnecessary cause all parts get dismembered stupid

    Nothing here
    Quote Originally Posted by plethora View Post
    this a cake walk, ima make off with a half assed start
    didn't even have to use Fresh Material, but coulda beat u with his wack ass bars

    Nah bro old n easy

    milli to ur neck, squeeze & im killing u dead
    feel that 9 in ur throat while ur girl giving me head

    Ok

    that'll take u to heaven, pearly gates & sunshine
    give u that L,ED..  gonna see it's brighter on the otherside

    Dope

    run & hide.. Pleth a giant, you undersized & all talk
    im 6'1, ur 1/6th of a 1:6 figure.. &'ll end up in a small box

    Ok

    bet u, cookies, & stranger bar hop for niggas digits
    its Data Analyst of faggots collecting numbers with the quickness

    Dope

    talk a bunch of shit encrypted but the end is in sight
    put ur foot in ur mouth, now ima end it like the conor mcgregor fight

    Nah

    get chopped up like breaded meat, if within several feet
    so step to me & ima Hack Data like a credit breach

    Cool
    Got pleth. Other guys new i imagine. Cool read bros

    Pleth


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    Re: LLL WEEK 18: Plethora vs encrypted data VOTE NOW

    This upset is an electric fence around your body in the afterlife, P you’ll be shocked as hell
    Datpiff you dropping ain’t getting no downloads, your CD’s are boat flags, they flop with sales(Sails)
    First line is a stretch. Second line has creativity but the wording is meh.
    Pleth talk tough and it’s perfect form in weight room, you don’t get it, he ain’t dropping squat
    Cool guy we get it, give it arrest like you’ve got authority but you not a cop
    Another stretch. Simply changing out 'you dont get it' with 'but' improves the line. I see what you were going for with your arrest/no authority concept but ehhh
    Truth is you’re not a killer, your moniker should have been Benevolent
    King P-naw he sweet tea, or Diet Dr. Pepper. when you log in it’s the Sweet One as your messaging
    I gotta make sure that last line makes sense
    the overall conclusion of your lineage is planted evidence- fake Prints(Prince)
    I'm a fan of revisiting a concept as long as both punches are good enough to stand alone. But the underlined is lazy as fuck. This was kinda funny and, if you reworded some shit, would've hit
    This guys a fruit basket. Be careful those vegan deamons See Cornucopia in the open
    the rush of adrenaline used to put an end to your support is fueled off promoted endorphins
    Wtf
    Pleth Your a Wayfair futon, low quality and nothing to sleep on
    Latest corpse in my trail of bodies you’re gonna keep warm
    Whooping this guy. Beat him to a pulp, plethora will be gender fluid
    Sexual preference unnecessary cause all parts get dismembered stupid
    These 2 bars flow so much better than the rest that I'd think someone else wrote it. The punch in the first bar is more like a set up.




    Aside from the last two bars, the wording is way too stretched. While you had some ok concepts, even great concepts cannot overcome poor wording. The fake Prince line was the best out of the bunch if I had to pick. You stuck with him being gay for a while there AND as your closer. Gotta be more creative. Also, the people voting on these battles should be able to pick up on wordplay without the need for you to explain shit in parentheses. This aint the FL

    4/10



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    this a cake walk, ima make off with a half assed start
    didn't even have to use Fresh Material, but coulda beat u with his wack ass bars
    avg filler
    milli to ur neck, squeeze & im killing u dead
    feel that 9 in ur throat while ur girl giving me head
    bad filler
    that'll take u to heaven, pearly gates & sunshine
    give u that L,ED.. gonna see it's brighter on the otherside
    decent wordplay, coulda rhymed better but ok bar overall
    run & hide.. Pleth a giant, you undersized & all talk
    im 6'1, ur 1/6th of a 1:6 figure.. &'ll end up in a small box
    I was rockin wit it till the second line. Didn't hit
    bet u, cookies, & stranger bar hop for niggas digits
    its Data Analyst of faggots collecting numbers with the quickness
    Aight
    talk a bunch of shit encrypted but the end is in sight
    put ur foot in ur mouth, now ima end it like the conor mcgregor fight
    Ehhh
    get chopped up like breaded meat, if within several feet
    so step to me & ima Hack Data like a credit breach
    Ok closer.

    I got it about half and half between decent and subpar lines. More than enough to take this one.

    6.5/10

    Vote: Plethora
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    Re: LLL WEEK 18: Plethora vs encrypted data VOTE NOW

    Encrypted ur shit was better this week then the week before.. Wordplay was a bit outdated tho..and u need to work on setting up your bars..use less words.. Your bar are a little to stretched.. U def had better attempt than last week. U def got outshied in this battle tho..pleth was alot stronger and had better setups... Wasnt to good of a verse but def enough for the win.. Encry keep reading/voting on battles and see what the people want..how the bars are set up n delivered..keep at it tho..ull be get down.. Ur last bars were how they should all be worded..just get more creative
    VOTE PLETH
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    Re: LLL WEEK 18: Plethora vs encrypted data VOTE NOW

    This upset is an electric fence around your body in the afterlife, P you’ll be shocked as hell
    Datpiff you dropping ain’t getting no downloads, your CD’s are boat flags, they flop with sales(Sails)
    ok so first off this is long winded as fuck. second, if the bar is written properly you shouldn't have to explain the wordplay (actually here you would have been fine without explaining because i got it without the expo). not a fan of this bar as is, though it did have potential
    Pleth talk tough and it’s perfect form in weight room, you don’t get it, he ain’t dropping squat
    Cool guy we get it, give it arrest like you’ve got authority but you not a cop
    too simple. not a fan
    Truth is you’re not a killer, your moniker should have been Benevolent
    King P-naw he sweet tea, or Diet Dr. Pepper. when you log in it’s the Sweet One as your messaging
    didn't like this
    I gotta make sure that last line makes sense
    the overall conclusion of your lineage is planted evidence- fake Prints(Prince)
    hmm ok ill give a jab for this
    This guys a fruit basket. Be careful those vegan deamons See Cornucopia in the open
    the rush of adrenaline used to put an end to your support is fueled off promoted endorphins
    not a fan
    Pleth Your a Wayfair futon, low quality and nothing to sleep on
    Latest corpse in my trail of bodies you’re gonna keep warm
    your shortening them up now but its not hittnig for me
    Whooping this guy. Beat him to a pulp, plethora will be gender fluid
    Sexual preference unnecessary cause all parts get dismembered stupid
    not a fan

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    this a cake walk, ima make off with a half assed start
    didn't even have to use Fresh Material, but coulda beat u with his wack ass bars
    this is absolute trash lmfaooo. played concept though ive seen these type of fresh bars used a few times.
    milli to ur neck, squeeze & im killing u dead
    feel that 9 in ur throat while ur girl giving me head
    if data had this bar i woulda said its good but coming from you i will say its light
    that'll take u to heaven, pearly gates & sunshine
    give u that L,ED.. gonna see it's brighter on the otherside
    cool
    run & hide.. Pleth a giant, you undersized & all talk
    im 6'1, ur 1/6th of a 1:6 figure.. &'ll end up in a small box
    diggin it
    bet u, cookies, & stranger bar hop for niggas digits
    its Data Analyst of faggots collecting numbers with the quickness
    lmao dope
    talk a bunch of shit encrypted but the end is in sight
    put ur foot in ur mouth, now ima end it like the conor mcgregor fight
    nah
    get chopped up like breaded meat, if within several feet
    so step to me & ima Hack Data like a credit breach
    ok

    this was pretty one sided. plethora a bitch for trash talking me but he gets the win here

    v/ pleth

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    Re: LLL WEEK 18: Plethora vs encrypted data VOTE NOW

    milli to ur neck, squeeze & im killing u dead
    feel that 9 in ur throat while ur girl giving me head
    if data had this bar i woulda said its good but coming from you i will say its light

    Don’t curve the grades for me. If anything judge me more harshly. I won’t improve that way.

    Good win Pleth.

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    Re: LLL WEEK 18: Plethora vs encrypted data VOTE NOW

    5-0 pleth wins

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